That was a beautiful story! You are an excellent writer. You captured Legolas' personality perfectly, I can easily imagine him thinking and feeling like that. Well done!
Absolutely hysterical. I loved it!
I LOVED it! I loved the way you paced it, with Legolas slowly coming to trust Elrond. At first I felt incredibly awkward and uncomfortable reading it, as I have never particularly enjoyed slash before, but you wrote so well and I was completely captivated! I'ts so beautiful how much he has changed. Well done!
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much for the review! I feel really glad that you gave the story a chance even though you are not a slash reader, and I can\'t tell you how wonderful I feel that you ended up liking it! I write slash not (only) because I get off on two guys doing it, but because I truly and honestly believe there\'s love to be found in all kinds of relationships. :D
Oh god...what's going to happen?!?! Elrond can't break his heart, he just can't! They have to end up together! Awww. I really, really loved that chapter. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hey there!!! Thanks so much for the review! I wish I could have updated faster, I got such nice feddback, but it was hard typing with broken fingers. lol i\'m back now, I hope you like the way things go!
Oh, so sad! Fantastic chapter. They just have to end up together!
Author's Response: Aww, i don\'t want to say too much, but i\'m a sucker for happy endings. lol ;)
Aww!!! They're back together! This was a fantastic chapter. I absolutely love this story. Your portrayal of the characters' emotions is brilliant. Please update really soon!
Author's Response: Hey girl!! Thanks for all your lovely reviews... I hope you enjoy what I prepared next!! :: wink wink ::
Wow. I really loved it. I actually read the sequel first (on another site) so I could sort of predict a lot of what was going to happen, but most of it still took me completely by surprise. It is very well written, and really powerful. I absolutely loved it. Well done!
This was so funny! I love it. I really hope you will continue!
So sad! I really loved it! Keep writing!
I really liked the idea. I loved the way Boromir reflected on his life, I can imagine him thinking like that.
My one criticism is that I think you shortened the battle to the point where it seemed insignificant. It was as though Boromir was completely off in his own world, and didn't really care about his surroundings. I think he would have been a little more involved than that. Aside from that it was really good, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. It has been a long time since I wrote this, but I think the plan was to use just Boromir\'s thoughts, and nothing else, not the hobbits or anything. I am glad you enjoyed reading the fic though, and thanks! for the review
So beautiful! I loved how you expressed his emotions. You write so well! I loved it!
Ooh, cliffhanger! Thrilling intro. I did notice a few little mistakes, though.
In the second sentence, you use the word 'move' twice. You also don't need to repeat his name twice in that paragraph. You should probably just say 'he could not hear or see anything'.
Melon-nin should really say mellon-nin. 'Allright' shoud just be 'alright'.
Just one more thing. In that last bit, you could probably come up with a more interesting alternative for 'said', as you have used it twice.
Aside from those little points, it was fantastic! I'm on the edge of my seat now, waiting to find out what happens. Please update soon!
Hysterical! How did you come up with all this stuff? I love it!
Cute! I liked it. Could do with a beta-reader, as there are a number of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I really like the idea.
This is a very good story.
I have just recently read the Silmarillion, and the part about Eol and Aredhel really caught me. This isn't really how I imagine their meeting, but I still love the way you've portrayed it. Very good story.
Author's Response: Oh! Welcome to the Silm-love. I am glad you enjoyed this fic even though it isn\'t how you see it (I think that was the one of the best compliments possible). Thanks for the FB. Elentari2
I absolutely loved it so far! Please, please write more soon, I really want to find out what happens!
Woah! Poor dwarves. Great little drabble!
Great story! I love it. Why is it under slash, though? It isn't really that slashy. Oh, well. Keep writing!
Author's Response: *grins* Glad you enjoyed it. Mm. I guess I still haven\'t worked out the categories yet. I get so confused and I forget about the warning thingies. XD Thanks, Arwen.
Heehee so funny! I was laughing all the way through. Welldone, keep writing!
Author's Response: Hehe. Glad to hear that it made you laugh so much. Thank you very much. I\'ll try to keep on writing. (^__^)
Oh, my goodness. I can't think of anything to say. On the one hand, it is completely horrific. But on the other it is so powerful and well-written!! I like it. It is probably very bad for my mental health, but there you have it.