Reviews by ArwenUndomiel
Summary: When Pippin gets inquisitive during a rest break, Legolas finds himself answering many of the questions that have long plagued his own mind. For immortality is not only a blessing, but also a curse in many ways. One-shot.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1238 Read Count: 4477
Published: Nov 26 2004 Updated: Nov 26 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Blessing and a Curse Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
That was a beautiful story! You are an excellent writer. You captured Legolas' personality perfectly, I can easily imagine him thinking and feeling like that. Well done!
Date: Sep 10 2006
Summary: All you ever needed (but perhaps didn't want) to know about GRÍMA WORMTONGUE! This Guide has been said to be more reliable than a Palantír!

Voted best Humor/Parody at the Flame of Anor Awards 2006.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gríma
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1796 Read Count: 6448
Published: Dec 06 2004 Updated: Dec 06 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Owner's Guide Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Absolutely hysterical. I loved it!
Date: Oct 18 2006
Summary: Sexual initiation and the transmitting of knowledge is an ancient elven tradition that is about to happen in Legolas life. Elrond, the wise, powerful elf of Rivendell is to be in charge of taking Legolas. But... what if the aloof, uneasy, wild prince of Mirkwood is not willing to let it happen?...

Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Elrond, Legolas
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160451 Read Count: 88394
Published: Jan 10 2005 Updated: Nov 21 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
I LOVED it! I loved the way you paced it, with Legolas slowly coming to trust Elrond. At first I felt incredibly awkward and uncomfortable reading it, as I have never particularly enjoyed slash before, but you wrote so well and I was completely captivated! I'ts so beautiful how much he has changed. Well done!

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much for the review! I feel really glad that you gave the story a chance even though you are not a slash reader, and I can\'t tell you how wonderful I feel that you ended up liking it! I write slash not (only) because I get off on two guys doing it, but because I truly and honestly believe there\'s love to be found in all kinds of relationships. :D
Date: Sep 15 2006
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Oh god...what's going to happen?!?! Elrond can't break his heart, he just can't! They have to end up together! Awww. I really, really loved that chapter. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hey there!!! Thanks so much for the review! I wish I could have updated faster, I got such nice feddback, but it was hard typing with broken fingers. lol i\'m back now, I hope you like the way things go!
Date: Oct 02 2006
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Oh, so sad! Fantastic chapter. They just have to end up together!

Author's Response: Aww, i don\'t want to say too much, but i\'m a sucker for happy endings. lol ;)
Date: Oct 20 2006
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Aww!!! They're back together! This was a fantastic chapter. I absolutely love this story. Your portrayal of the characters' emotions is brilliant. Please update really soon!

Author's Response: Hey girl!! Thanks for all your lovely reviews... I hope you enjoy what I prepared next!! :: wink wink ::
Date: Nov 09 2006
Summary: Captured as prisoners of war by the Haradrim, Legolas and Aragorn are tortured ruthlessly at the hands of their host. If things go as planned there will be no dawn for either Elf or ranger, but first one must break. Though more than their lives and spirits are at stake, an ancient alliance and bond could be shattered and all Middle Earth could be condemned. The fates of many, rest squarely on the shoulders of Legolas and Aragorn, will they give under the pressure?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan, Erestor
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193550 Read Count: 20938
Published: Feb 03 2005 Updated: Dec 03 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 26: Matter of Regret Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Wow. I really loved it. I actually read the sequel first (on another site) so I could sort of predict a lot of what was going to happen, but most of it still took me completely by surprise. It is very well written, and really powerful. I absolutely loved it. Well done!
Date: Sep 08 2006
Summary: A hapless fan fiction writer learns what it really means to join the Fellowship of the Ring.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 999 Read Count: 1565
Published: Feb 06 2005 Updated: Feb 06 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Enter An Irrate Tolkien Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
This was so funny! I love it. I really hope you will continue!
Date: Jan 30 2007
Summary: What crossed in Aragorn in mind before he do his famous speech?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 375 Read Count: 1269
Published: Mar 19 2005 Updated: Mar 19 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
So sad! I really loved it! Keep writing!
Date: Sep 17 2006
Summary: Boromir's thoughts during the fellowship
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Merry, Pippin, Boromir
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1086 Read Count: 1447
Published: Apr 17 2005 Updated: Apr 17 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
I really liked the idea. I loved the way Boromir reflected on his life, I can imagine him thinking like that.

My one criticism is that I think you shortened the battle to the point where it seemed insignificant. It was as though Boromir was completely off in his own world, and didn't really care about his surroundings. I think he would have been a little more involved than that. Aside from that it was really good, well done!

Author's Response: Thank you. It has been a long time since I wrote this, but I think the plan was to use just Boromir\'s thoughts, and nothing else, not the hobbits or anything. I am glad you enjoyed reading the fic though, and thanks! for the review
Date: Sep 16 2006
Summary: While walking through the halls of Gil-galad's home, an Elf is constantly reminded of his shame.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Maeglin
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 392 Read Count: 1702
Published: Jun 20 2005 Updated: Jun 20 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Tears From Twilight Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
So beautiful! I loved how you expressed his emotions. You write so well! I loved it!
Date: Oct 01 2006
Summary: Legolas and Aragorn go out scouting, but little did they know that this trip could cost one of them their lives.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan, Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Angst, Tragedy, Other, General
Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 209 Read Count: 1529
Published: Aug 08 2005 Updated: Aug 08 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Ooh, cliffhanger! Thrilling intro. I did notice a few little mistakes, though.

In the second sentence, you use the word 'move' twice. You also don't need to repeat his name twice in that paragraph. You should probably just say 'he could not hear or see anything'.

Melon-nin should really say mellon-nin. 'Allright' shoud just be 'alright'.

Just one more thing. In that last bit, you could probably come up with a more interesting alternative for 'said', as you have used it twice.

Aside from those little points, it was fantastic! I'm on the edge of my seat now, waiting to find out what happens. Please update soon!
Date: Nov 02 2006
Summary: I think the title is self explanatory
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 696 Read Count: 5475
Published: Aug 18 2005 Updated: Aug 18 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 56 ways to annoy the Dark Lord Sauron Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Hysterical! How did you come up with all this stuff? I love it!
Date: Sep 10 2006
schooltime by menneke Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: this is a story about my school mixed with LOTR. I have those cool teachers so I thought that they disserved this
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Rosie, Gollum, Boromir, Faramir, Fatty Bolger, Orcs/Uruk-Hai
Genres: Romance, Tragedy, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150 Read Count: 1747
Published: Sep 29 2005 Updated: Sep 29 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: first day Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Cute! I liked it. Could do with a beta-reader, as there are a number of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I really like the idea.
Date: Oct 01 2006
Omentië by Elentari2 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A fated meeting. An overprotected lady with a free spirit finds someone who's not afraid to get things straight. Written by someone who never swallowed the "she was not unwilling" thing, and decided it was time someone clarified what really happened at Nan Elmoth. One-shot ficlet.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aredhel, Eol
Genres: Romance, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1908 Read Count: 1620
Published: Oct 16 2005 Updated: Oct 16 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1. Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
This is a very good story.

I have just recently read the Silmarillion, and the part about Eol and Aredhel really caught me. This isn't really how I imagine their meeting, but I still love the way you've portrayed it. Very good story.

Author's Response: Oh! Welcome to the Silm-love. I am glad you enjoyed this fic even though it isn\'t how you see it (I think that was the one of the best compliments possible). Thanks for the FB. Elentari2
Date: Nov 11 2006
Summary: Fourteen-year-old anorexic Triss Chai is suddenly transported from her home city of San Francisco to the Trollshaws. Upon arriving in Rivendell, she becomes the center of a race against time to teach Triss enough Sindarin so they can save her life. But people change in the crossing from one world to another, and not only Triss has crossed over of late. . .
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Angst, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1227 Read Count: 4233
Published: Nov 11 2005 Updated: Nov 29 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Tres Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
I absolutely loved it so far! Please, please write more soon, I really want to find out what happens!
Date: Sep 14 2006
Prey by Leila Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: OSA Drabble Challenge 2: Food. A Giant Spider and her prey.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 1378
Published: Nov 12 2005 Updated: Nov 12 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prey Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Woah! Poor dwarves. Great little drabble!
Date: Nov 03 2006
Arwen's Confidants by sylc Rated: PG [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Arwen tells her brothers about her crush on Legolas
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 741 Read Count: 2459
Published: Nov 30 2005 Updated: Nov 30 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Arwen's Confidants Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Great story! I love it. Why is it under slash, though? It isn't really that slashy. Oh, well. Keep writing!

Author's Response: *grins* Glad you enjoyed it. Mm. I guess I still haven\'t worked out the categories yet. I get so confused and I forget about the warning thingies. XD Thanks, Arwen.
Date: Oct 25 2006
Legolas's Comb by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Aragorn's wedding to Arwen is within the hour, but Legolas (much to Gimli's disgust) is not ready.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gimli, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3541 Read Count: 1499
Published: Dec 04 2005 Updated: Dec 04 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas's Comb Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Heehee so funny! I was laughing all the way through. Welldone, keep writing!

Author's Response: Hehe. Glad to hear that it made you laugh so much. Thank you very much. I\'ll try to keep on writing. (^__^)
Date: Sep 17 2006
Worth of A Brother by Sivan Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Following his father’s orders makes Boromir prove that he is the chosen son of Denethor.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: Horror, Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Incest, Rape, Character Death, AU (alternate universe), Extreme/taboo Fetish, Torture
Series: Secret Santa
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1195 Read Count: 1990
Published: Dec 26 2005 Updated: Dec 26 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Oh, my goodness. I can't think of anything to say. On the one hand, it is completely horrific. But on the other it is so powerful and well-written!! I like it. It is probably very bad for my mental health, but there you have it.
Date: Oct 30 2006
Summary: Here's a little story I came up with during the Winter Break, which seems like a long long long time ago. Hope you enjoy!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242 Read Count: 1603
Published: Jan 16 2006 Updated: Jan 16 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sauron's Gift Ideas Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Heehee, I really like it. So funny. Well done!
Date: Oct 01 2006
Summary: Even the wise must make amends. Gap-filler.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celeborn, Gimli
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1295 Read Count: 1212
Published: Jan 26 2006 Updated: Jan 26 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Gift-giving of Celeborn Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Great story! Very Tolkien-esque. I can't think of a single criticism to make. Loved it!
Date: Oct 23 2006
Summary: The little emo hobbit saves the day.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 326 Read Count: 1444
Published: Jan 27 2006 Updated: Jan 27 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
I'm not trying to be rude, but I actually found this story quite offensive. I sort of see what you're trying to do, but the way you have done it is very inconsiderate to other people's feelings. I was really depressed for years, struggled with self-harm, and for a while I seriously considered taking me own life. Even now, after I have recovered, I can still remember what it was like and I assure you, there is nothing at all funny about depression. I don't think anybody has the right to talk about people with depression as though they are stupid, and make their problems seem silly and melodramatic like you have done here. I don't find anything remotely funny about suicide, and maybe if you had suffered from suicidal feelings or known someone who commited suicide, you would see that. I'm sorry again if this review seems rude, I am not trying to flame you or anything. That story just really upset and offended me, and I think you should give a little more thought to people's feelings before you write more stories trying to make suicide funny.
Date: Nov 06 2006
Summary: The title says it all. I need to give my cousin, Lisa credit. She helped me put this together.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 219 Read Count: 4529
Published: Feb 01 2006 Updated: Feb 01 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Funny List Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Funny! I loved it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad. Thanks for your review!
Date: Sep 09 2006
Numb by wench squad Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Legolas finally tells his father how he feels.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1215 Read Count: 1331
Published: Feb 03 2006 Updated: Feb 03 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Numb Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Loved it! So cute, and well-written.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: Sep 16 2006