Penname: ArwenUndomiel [Contact] Real name: Lucy
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Summary: When Pippin gets inquisitive during a rest break, Legolas finds himself answering many of the questions that have long plagued his own mind. For immortality is not only a blessing, but also a curse in many ways. One-shot.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas, Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1238 Read Count: 3796
[Report This] Published: 27/11/04 Updated: 27/11/04
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Blessing and a Curse

That was a beautiful story! You are an excellent writer. You captured Legolas' personality perfectly, I can easily imagine him thinking and feeling like that. Well done!

Summary: All you ever needed (but perhaps didn't want) to know about GRÍMA WORMTONGUE! This Guide has been said to be more reliable than a Palantír!

Voted best Humor/Parody at the Flame of Anor Awards 2006.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1796 Read Count: 5520
[Report This] Published: 06/12/04 Updated: 06/12/04
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 18/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Owner's Guide

Absolutely hysterical. I loved it!

Summary: Sexual initiation and the transmitting of knowledge is an ancient elven tradition that is about to happen in Legolas life. Elrond, the wise, powerful elf of Rivendell is to be in charge of taking Legolas. But... what if the aloof, uneasy, wild prince of Mirkwood is not willing to let it happen?...

Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Elrond, Legolas
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160451 Read Count: 76066
[Report This] Published: 10/01/05 Updated: 22/11/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 15/09/06 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I LOVED it! I loved the way you paced it, with Legolas slowly coming to trust Elrond. At first I felt incredibly awkward and uncomfortable reading it, as I have never particularly enjoyed slash before, but you wrote so well and I was completely captivated! I'ts so beautiful how much he has changed. Well done!

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much for the review! I feel really glad that you gave the story a chance even though you are not a slash reader, and I can\'t tell you how wonderful I feel that you ended up liking it! I write slash not (only) because I get off on two guys doing it, but because I truly and honestly believe there\'s love to be found in all kinds of relationships. :D

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/10/06 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Oh god...what's going to happen?!?! Elrond can't break his heart, he just can't! They have to end up together! Awww. I really, really loved that chapter. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hey there!!! Thanks so much for the review! I wish I could have updated faster, I got such nice feddback, but it was hard typing with broken fingers. lol i\'m back now, I hope you like the way things go!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 21/10/06 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Oh, so sad! Fantastic chapter. They just have to end up together!

Author's Response: Aww, i don\'t want to say too much, but i\'m a sucker for happy endings. lol ;)

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Aww!!! They're back together! This was a fantastic chapter. I absolutely love this story. Your portrayal of the characters' emotions is brilliant. Please update really soon!

Author's Response: Hey girl!! Thanks for all your lovely reviews... I hope you enjoy what I prepared next!! :: wink wink ::

Summary: Captured as prisoners of war by the Haradrim, Legolas and Aragorn are tortured ruthlessly at the hands of their host. If things go as planned there will be no dawn for either Elf or ranger, but first one must break. Though more than their lives and spirits are at stake, an ancient alliance and bond could be shattered and all Middle Earth could be condemned. The fates of many, rest squarely on the shoulders of Legolas and Aragorn, will they give under the pressure?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan, Erestor
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193550 Read Count: 18591
[Report This] Published: 03/02/05 Updated: 03/12/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 08/09/06 Title: Chapter 26: Matter of Regret

Wow. I really loved it. I actually read the sequel first (on another site) so I could sort of predict a lot of what was going to happen, but most of it still took me completely by surprise. It is very well written, and really powerful. I absolutely loved it. Well done!

Summary: A hapless fan fiction writer learns what it really means to join the Fellowship of the Ring.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 999 Read Count: 1330
[Report This] Published: 06/02/05 Updated: 06/02/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 31/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Enter An Irrate Tolkien

This was so funny! I love it. I really hope you will continue!

Summary: What crossed in Aragorn in mind before he do his famous speech?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 375 Read Count: 1107
[Report This] Published: 19/03/05 Updated: 19/03/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 17/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

So sad! I really loved it! Keep writing!

Summary: Boromir's thoughts during the fellowship
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Merry, Pippin, Boromir
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1086 Read Count: 1231
[Report This] Published: 17/04/05 Updated: 17/04/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

I really liked the idea. I loved the way Boromir reflected on his life, I can imagine him thinking like that.

My one criticism is that I think you shortened the battle to the point where it seemed insignificant. It was as though Boromir was completely off in his own world, and didn't really care about his surroundings. I think he would have been a little more involved than that. Aside from that it was really good, well done!

Author's Response: Thank you. It has been a long time since I wrote this, but I think the plan was to use just Boromir\'s thoughts, and nothing else, not the hobbits or anything. I am glad you enjoyed reading the fic though, and thanks! for the review

Summary: While walking through the halls of Gil-galad's home, an Elf is constantly reminded of his shame.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Maeglin
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 392 Read Count: 1422
[Report This] Published: 20/06/05 Updated: 20/06/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Tears From Twilight

So beautiful! I loved how you expressed his emotions. You write so well! I loved it!

Summary: Legolas and Aragorn go out scouting, but little did they know that this trip could cost one of them their lives.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan, Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Angst, Tragedy, Other, General
Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 209 Read Count: 1354
[Report This] Published: 08/08/05 Updated: 08/08/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge

Ooh, cliffhanger! Thrilling intro. I did notice a few little mistakes, though.

In the second sentence, you use the word 'move' twice. You also don't need to repeat his name twice in that paragraph. You should probably just say 'he could not hear or see anything'.

Melon-nin should really say mellon-nin. 'Allright' shoud just be 'alright'.

Just one more thing. In that last bit, you could probably come up with a more interesting alternative for 'said', as you have used it twice.

Aside from those little points, it was fantastic! I'm on the edge of my seat now, waiting to find out what happens. Please update soon!

Summary: I think the title is self explanatory
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 696 Read Count: 4806
[Report This] Published: 18/08/05 Updated: 18/08/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: 56 ways to annoy the Dark Lord Sauron

Hysterical! How did you come up with all this stuff? I love it!

schooltime by menneke Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: this is a story about my school mixed with LOTR. I have those cool teachers so I thought that they disserved this
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Rosie, Gollum, Boromir, Faramir, Fatty Bolger, Orcs/Uruk-Hai
Genres: Romance, Tragedy, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150 Read Count: 1464
[Report This] Published: 29/09/05 Updated: 29/09/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: first day

Cute! I liked it. Could do with a beta-reader, as there are a number of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I really like the idea.

Omentië by Elentari2 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A fated meeting. An overprotected lady with a free spirit finds someone who's not afraid to get things straight. Written by someone who never swallowed the "she was not unwilling" thing, and decided it was time someone clarified what really happened at Nan Elmoth. One-shot ficlet.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aredhel, Eol
Genres: Romance, Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1908 Read Count: 1335
[Report This] Published: 16/10/05 Updated: 16/10/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 12/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1.

This is a very good story.

I have just recently read the Silmarillion, and the part about Eol and Aredhel really caught me. This isn't really how I imagine their meeting, but I still love the way you've portrayed it. Very good story.

Author's Response: Oh! Welcome to the Silm-love. I am glad you enjoyed this fic even though it isn\'t how you see it (I think that was the one of the best compliments possible). Thanks for the FB. Elentari2

Summary: Fourteen-year-old anorexic Triss Chai is suddenly transported from her home city of San Francisco to the Trollshaws. Upon arriving in Rivendell, she becomes the center of a race against time to teach Triss enough Sindarin so they can save her life. But people change in the crossing from one world to another, and not only Triss has crossed over of late. . .
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Legolas, Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Angst, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1227 Read Count: 3752
[Report This] Published: 12/11/05 Updated: 29/11/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 14/09/06 Title: Chapter 3: Tres

I absolutely loved it so far! Please, please write more soon, I really want to find out what happens!

Prey by Leila Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: OSA Drabble Challenge 2: Food. A Giant Spider and her prey.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Original Character
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 1257
[Report This] Published: 12/11/05 Updated: 12/11/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prey

Woah! Poor dwarves. Great little drabble!

Arwen's Confidants by sylc Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Arwen tells her brothers about her crush on Legolas
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 741 Read Count: 2086
[Report This] Published: 30/11/05 Updated: 30/11/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 25/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Arwen's Confidants

Great story! I love it. Why is it under slash, though? It isn't really that slashy. Oh, well. Keep writing!

Author's Response: *grins* Glad you enjoyed it. Mm. I guess I still haven\'t worked out the categories yet. I get so confused and I forget about the warning thingies. XD Thanks, Arwen.

Legolas's Comb by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Aragorn's wedding to Arwen is within the hour, but Legolas (much to Gimli's disgust) is not ready.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Gimli, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3541 Read Count: 1203
[Report This] Published: 05/12/05 Updated: 05/12/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 17/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Legolas's Comb

Heehee so funny! I was laughing all the way through. Welldone, keep writing!

Author's Response: Hehe. Glad to hear that it made you laugh so much. Thank you very much. I\'ll try to keep on writing. (^__^)

Worth of A Brother by Sivan Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Following his father’s orders makes Boromir prove that he is the chosen son of Denethor.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: Horror, Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Incest, Rape, Character Death, AU (alternate universe), Extreme/taboo Fetish, Torture
Series: Secret Santa
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1195 Read Count: 1622
[Report This] Published: 26/12/05 Updated: 26/12/05
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 30/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

Oh, my goodness. I can't think of anything to say. On the one hand, it is completely horrific. But on the other it is so powerful and well-written!! I like it. It is probably very bad for my mental health, but there you have it.