Heehee, I really like it. So funny. Well done!
Great story! Very Tolkien-esque. I can't think of a single criticism to make. Loved it!
I'm not trying to be rude, but I actually found this story quite offensive. I sort of see what you're trying to do, but the way you have done it is very inconsiderate to other people's feelings. I was really depressed for years, struggled with self-harm, and for a while I seriously considered taking me own life. Even now, after I have recovered, I can still remember what it was like and I assure you, there is nothing at all funny about depression. I don't think anybody has the right to talk about people with depression as though they are stupid, and make their problems seem silly and melodramatic like you have done here. I don't find anything remotely funny about suicide, and maybe if you had suffered from suicidal feelings or known someone who commited suicide, you would see that. I'm sorry again if this review seems rude, I am not trying to flame you or anything. That story just really upset and offended me, and I think you should give a little more thought to people's feelings before you write more stories trying to make suicide funny.
Funny! I loved it!
Author's Response: I\'m glad. Thanks for your review!
Loved it! So cute, and well-written.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
I really loved it so far! Beautiful storyline. I love the idea of Legolas and Arwen. Very well-written, and I can't wait to read more!
I love it. It sounds so...elvish!
Wow, great poem! Just one thing...you missed the
'P' at the start. You've just got 'ounding'. Aside from that I loved it!
Aww. Great poem. Hope you'll write more soon!
Very cute and funny! Little Legolas was adorable. "Legsie, son of Thrandy". I just love it!
Author's Response: Hehe. Happy you enjoyed it. XD Thanks very much for reading and reviewing.
Beautiful! Poor Faramir. I just felt so sad for him the whole time. It is so sweet, the way he looks up to his older brother like that! Please continue soon. I need to read more!
Cute! I liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you, dear ArwenUndomiel! *yay*
Loved it! Short, sweet and original. Great story!
Author's Response: You are making me very happy; thanks again, ArwenUndomiel! Patty.
Really sweet. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you again so much!
Oh my gosh. How can you leave it hanging like that? That was so scary. I really liked it.
Really, really cute! There were quite a few errors with punctuation, so I would suggest maybe getting a beta reader. Aside from that, it was great. Well done! I liked how you incorporated the song, as well.
Funny! I love the idea of Sauron keeping a diary. Please update soon!
I really liked it. Short and sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you; I appreciate it. :)
I loved it! Absolutely hysterical! Oh, I can just see those twins running down the street in pink fluffy nightgowns, it's a disturbing image actually. So funny though...please update really soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Why haven't I kept up with this for so long?! It is absolutely fantastic! Very funny. They got his ice-cream, no! Please update soon, I can't wait to see his reaction!
Author's Response: Thanks! They got his ice-cream, YES! Hopefully i\'ll update soon, but ya never kno w/me.