Penname: ArwenUndomiel [Contact] Real name: Lucy
Member Since: 06/09/06
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Summary: Here's a little story I came up with during the Winter Break, which seems like a long long long time ago. Hope you enjoy!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242 Read Count: 1459
[Report This] Published: 16/01/06 Updated: 16/01/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sauron's Gift Ideas

Heehee, I really like it. So funny. Well done!

Summary: Even the wise must make amends. Gap-filler.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Celeborn, Gimli
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1295 Read Count: 1109
[Report This] Published: 26/01/06 Updated: 26/01/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 23/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Gift-giving of Celeborn

Great story! Very Tolkien-esque. I can't think of a single criticism to make. Loved it!

Summary: The little emo hobbit saves the day.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 326 Read Count: 1217
[Report This] Published: 27/01/06 Updated: 27/01/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not trying to be rude, but I actually found this story quite offensive. I sort of see what you're trying to do, but the way you have done it is very inconsiderate to other people's feelings. I was really depressed for years, struggled with self-harm, and for a while I seriously considered taking me own life. Even now, after I have recovered, I can still remember what it was like and I assure you, there is nothing at all funny about depression. I don't think anybody has the right to talk about people with depression as though they are stupid, and make their problems seem silly and melodramatic like you have done here. I don't find anything remotely funny about suicide, and maybe if you had suffered from suicidal feelings or known someone who commited suicide, you would see that. I'm sorry again if this review seems rude, I am not trying to flame you or anything. That story just really upset and offended me, and I think you should give a little more thought to people's feelings before you write more stories trying to make suicide funny.

Summary: The title says it all. I need to give my cousin, Lisa credit. She helped me put this together.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 219 Read Count: 3891
[Report This] Published: 01/02/06 Updated: 01/02/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Funny List

Funny! I loved it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad. Thanks for your review!

Numb by wench squad Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Legolas finally tells his father how he feels.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1215 Read Count: 1177
[Report This] Published: 03/02/06 Updated: 03/02/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Numb

Loved it! So cute, and well-written.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

Destiny's Arrow by DiableRouge Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Minas Tirith. Three days before the wedding of Arwen and Aragorn. Jealousy rears it's ugly head.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57708 Read Count: 24015
[Report This] Published: 07/02/06 Updated: 18/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: At the Gates

I really loved it so far! Beautiful storyline. I love the idea of Legolas and Arwen. Very well-written, and I can't wait to read more!

Summary: A number of LotR-Book based poems.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 195 Read Count: 3530
[Report This] Published: 30/03/06 Updated: 01/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 21/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Awakening

I love it. It sounds so...elvish!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 21/10/06 Title: Chapter 2: War Cry

Wow, great poem! Just one thing...you missed the
'P' at the start. You've just got 'ounding'. Aside from that I loved it!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 21/10/06 Title: Chapter 3: Stout Hearts 1

Aww. Great poem. Hope you'll write more soon!

The Little Prince by sylc Rated: PG [Reviews - 10]
Summary: In Thranduil's castle, Glorfindel meets Legolas, the toddler.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1581 Read Count: 1484
[Report This] Published: 31/03/06 Updated: 31/03/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 25/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Little Prince

Very cute and funny! Little Legolas was adorable. "Legsie, son of Thrandy". I just love it!

Author's Response: Hehe. Happy you enjoyed it. XD Thanks very much for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Faramir searches for the true meaning of courage.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Boromir, Denethor, Faramir, Finduilas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 976 Read Count: 1639
[Report This] Published: 01/04/06 Updated: 01/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - Childhood

Beautiful! Poor Faramir. I just felt so sad for him the whole time. It is so sweet, the way he looks up to his older brother like that! Please continue soon. I need to read more!

Aiming To Please by Numenora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Passionate man/elf seduction. For the lotrallslash Daily Drabble: ‘Feline’

Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Aragorn, Aragorn, Aragorn, Legolas, Legolas, Legolas, Legolas
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249 Read Count: 3133
[Report This] Published: 03/04/06 Updated: 03/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 07/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Aiming To Please

Cute! I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you, dear ArwenUndomiel! *yay*

First Love by Numenora Rated: PG [Reviews - 12]
Summary: It’s Boromir’s turn to fear losing his brother’s affections to another. Another side drabble occuring sometime between the drabbles ‘Second Place’ and ‘First Place.’
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Boromir, Boromir, Boromir, Boromir, Faramir, Faramir, Faramir, Faramir
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 268 Read Count: 5293
[Report This] Published: 03/04/06 Updated: 03/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: First Love

Loved it! Short, sweet and original. Great story!

Author's Response: You are making me very happy; thanks again, ArwenUndomiel! Patty.

A Fine Breed by Numenora Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The beginning of a beautiful partnership. Daily Drabble for lotrallslash Challenge: ‘Fence’
Categories: Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164 Read Count: 2336
[Report This] Published: 14/04/06 Updated: 14/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Fine Breed

Really sweet. I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you again so much!

A Dangerous Music by TrickSpine Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: While Legolas and Aragorn seek their missing horse in a mysterious and ill-tempered forest, Legolas falls prey to a dangerous music. When they are ambushed, they both plummet into a reality characterized by grotesque miracles. Rated for Gore.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1617 Read Count: 3367
[Report This] Published: 15/04/06 Updated: 15/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Song

Oh my gosh. How can you leave it hanging like that? That was so scary. I really liked it.

Hero by Aranel Elanesse Rated: G [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Arwen is really mad at Aragorn and she's locked him out of the bedroom.Poor Aragorn gets some help from a certain elf prince to appease her.Fanfic/songfic combo based on Enrique Iglesias' "Hero".
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1087 Read Count: 1324
[Report This] Published: 16/04/06 Updated: 16/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Hero

Really, really cute! There were quite a few errors with punctuation, so I would suggest maybe getting a beta reader. Aside from that, it was great. Well done! I liked how you incorporated the song, as well.

Summary: Now I'm not a fan of Sauron but almost all the good titles were taken :( so I came up with the idea of Sauron's Diary set during the quest of The Fellowship.First person PoV.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Mouth of Sauron, Sauron, Witch King
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 227 Read Count: 1829
[Report This] Published: 22/04/06 Updated: 22/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sauron's Diary

Funny! I love the idea of Sauron keeping a diary. Please update soon!

Hair Dye by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Lindir shares an observation about the Mirkwood royals with Glorfindel.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Glorfindel, Lindir
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1746
[Report This] Published: 26/04/06 Updated: 26/04/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 17/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Hair Dye

I really liked it. Short and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you; I appreciate it. :)

Summary: Complete! Aragorn loves his Ice Cream. But when the Terrible Trio arrives in Minas Tirith with an evil plot to steal the imperial Ice Cream, will he survive?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: Obsessions
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3153 Read Count: 6624
[Report This] Published: 05/05/06 Updated: 31/10/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 08/09/06 Title: Chapter 4: Meanwhile, in Ithilien...

I loved it! Absolutely hysterical! Oh, I can just see those twins running down the street in pink fluffy nightgowns, it's a disturbing image actually. So funny though...please update really soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 25/10/06 Title: Chapter 6: Oh, Rats!

Why haven't I kept up with this for so long?! It is absolutely fantastic! Very funny. They got his ice-cream, no! Please update soon, I can't wait to see his reaction!

Author's Response: Thanks! They got his ice-cream, YES! Hopefully i\'ll update soon, but ya never kno w/me.