Very funny! I loved it.

Author's Response: thanks!

Well, it was nicely written. I thought the pairing was a little odd, but it was still good. I was a bit surprised though; I don't really think Legolas and Gimli (especially Gimli) would be that loving and, well, sappy towards each other. It seemed a bit OOC.

The bit about Legolas shooting that last orc...I swear I have read almost exactly the same paragraph, only in a different story on a different sight. Hmmn...

One other little criticism...I think you may have used the word 'cock' a few too many times. Another word occasionally wouldn't have hurt.

I'm sorry if this review sounds a little harsh, I'm just trying to help. Still a good story, well done!

I loved it! Really sweet. Well done, I hope you will write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have completed 78 fic prompts so far and will be adding them here.

Very funny! I loved it. You write really well!

Author's Response: Wow--thank you! I\'m so very pleased you enjoyed it. Patty.

Loved it! Beautiful poem, and the little commentary was great as well. You write really well.

Author's Response: Thank you, Arwen, for your very self-esteem-rising comments. :)

Cute! I really liked it. Short but sweet.

Great story so far! Aula chilled me to the bone, she was just so terrifying! Poor Roth is going to get it now, isn't he? Poor thing. I love the plot. One thing that always amazes me about your stories is how good you are at coming up with evil plans...it's a little scary actually! Anyway, I really love this, please update soon! I can't stand cliffies, I have to read the rest now!

Author's Response: LOL! oh be very scared. lol :P Thanks for the review!! Hope you enjoy all the other updates!

I really liked this chapter! Honestly, I love the detail in which you are developing Lim Aear.

I believe you referred to the Lorien elves as 'high elves' at one point. If these are the same elves who inhabited the original Lothlorien, then they are not high elves, but grey elves. High elves are the ones that sailed away over the sea, or perhaps some in Rivendell. Just thought I'd point that out. Also, I just realised one other thing; Westron is not English, and in reality Elaine would not have been able to speak it so easily. That doesn't matter, though. The story is AU anyway, and creating language barriers would probably have been counter-productive to the plot.

I'm sorry if you took offence to my Mary-Sue comment, I wasn't trying to offend you. I am aware that Mary-Sue is something of a grey area, and largely a matter of opinion.

One other little correction I have; I did notice that you missed a lot of commas in the story. Many sentences would flow better if they had commas, as some of them don't sound quite right.

I really like your characterization of Legolas. You are doing a god job bringing him to life. And I liked your description of Galadriel. She sounded just right.

Ooh, the story is getting so tense! I just wish they would get together already *sigh*. Still, I really love it. It is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the chapter! I didn\'t take offense to your review, as I said. I\'m glad to have constractive criticism. Elaine doesn\'t know much about Elven history, only as much as Legolas was able to tell her in one night. So it\'s only natural for her to have misunderstood some things and make mistakes. That makes her much more realistic than having a perfect knowledge of Elven history out of nowhere. And they certainly do not speak Westron. The story doesn\'t take place in Middle Earth, but in modern Earth and it\'s only natural that the elves have adopted to the new dominating language (English that is). As I said, they are not totally alienated from the upper world. I cannot account for the lack or misplacing of commas, I\'m afraid. My BETA is doing that job for me. So any complaints should be addressed to her, although I DO believe she does an amazing job. Once again thank you for your review and helpful comments. I will update as soon as possible!

Oh, Elaine is such a stupid girl! I'm glad she's finally seeing sense.

Ack, what's going to happen to the Elves?! Just one thing though, I'd try to avoid having Legolas survive the trap but end up getting back mortally wounded, with her crying and berating herself, etc. It would be too cliche. I'm not sure if that's what you are doing here, but it happens in pretty much any romance you care to read, to the point where it becomes way too cliche.

I only noticed one spelling error. In one chapter near the start, I believe you called Legolas a 'warriorr'. Just thought I should point that out.

This was a really good chapter. Short, but still fantastic! I like how this story is moving. Can't wait to read the rest! Seriously, it's turning into a great story! Update soon, mellon-nin!

Author's Response: Hello mellon nin! I\'m so glad you are enjoying the story! Yes, Elaine is finally realizing her mistakes... let\'s hope she won\'t make the same ones again! I have no intention of having Legolas come back wounded or anything like that, there are only minor injuries in the menu (just to make the battle and its consequences a little more realistic). Thank you very much for letting me know of the spelling mistake, I have already corrected it! Talk to you soon!

Oh, so so SWEET! Honestly, I can't stop smiling now! That has to be your best chapter yet! For once I am completely speechless! Which, judging by the long-winded reviews I have been giving you, is quite something. It is absolutely beautiful, I loved it so much. It's just so romantic!

Author's Response: Hello Arwen Undomiel! My, I\'m so happy that you liked this chapter so much! Thank you very much for your compliments! I really hope you will enjoy the next one as much as this one! Thank you for your review!