Penname: ArwenUndomiel [Contact] Real name: Lucy
Member Since: 06/09/06
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Summary: Elrond seeks tea and gets chocolate instead. For lotrallslash Daily Drabble Challenge: "Chocolate."

Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Book Verse Slash, Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Elrond
Genres: General
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 259 Read Count: 2054
[Report This] Published: 08/05/06 Updated: 08/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Afternoon Delight

Cute! Mmm, I want chocolate now. Perhaps not from 3-year-old Estel's lips, though I suppose it wouldn't be so bad if he was older...or perhaps if he were Legolas. I could live with that. Alright, I'll shut up now. I'm getting a little carried away. Anyway, great little story!

Author's Response: I\'m pleased you liked it, ArwenUndomiel. He\'s so cute, i could eat him up even without chocolate! Thanks, love!

Cold Iron by gythia Rated: G [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Arwen and Eowyn discuss the odd things that Men believe about elves.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Arwen
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 886 Read Count: 1318
[Report This] Published: 10/05/06 Updated: 10/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 05/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very funny! I loved it.

Author's Response: thanks!

Summary: Faramir helps Eowyn cope with a nightmare.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Faramir
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 969 Read Count: 1326
[Report This] Published: 11/05/06 Updated: 11/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Night Phantoms

Beautiful story! I can just imagine Eowyn ending up like that after all she went through. Faramir was so sweet! Great story, I love it. Keep writing!

My Bet with Legolas by Sivan Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: How Legolas lost the contest of how many Uruk-hai he killed at Helm’s Deep to Gimli…
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1585 Read Count: 1722
[Report This] Published: 11/05/06 Updated: 11/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 17/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

Well, it was nicely written. I thought the pairing was a little odd, but it was still good. I was a bit surprised though; I don't really think Legolas and Gimli (especially Gimli) would be that loving and, well, sappy towards each other. It seemed a bit OOC.

The bit about Legolas shooting that last orc...I swear I have read almost exactly the same paragraph, only in a different story on a different sight. Hmmn...

One other little criticism...I think you may have used the word 'cock' a few too many times. Another word occasionally wouldn't have hurt.

I'm sorry if this review sounds a little harsh, I'm just trying to help. Still a good story, well done!

Summary: What does a caged bird dream?
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 406 Read Count: 2184
[Report This] Published: 21/05/06 Updated: 21/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Caged Bird's Dreams

Wow. Such a beautiful poem! I thought the way you started every stanza with 'I' was very effective. I loved it!

Not Enough by wench squad Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Estel is not enough of what?
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2160 Read Count: 1178
[Report This] Published: 22/05/06 Updated: 22/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it! Really sweet. Well done, I hope you will write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have completed 78 fic prompts so far and will be adding them here.

Summary: Aragorn is troubled and Legolas is quite concerned for him. Slash (For 2006 Mistletoe in May Fic Swap)

Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Aragorn, Aragorn, Aragorn, Legolas, Legolas, Legolas, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3713 Read Count: 2842
[Report This] Published: 25/05/06 Updated: 25/05/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 23/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Beyond Friendship

Cute! Very well-written, well done!

Author's Response: Oh thank you for the lovely and kind review! *smiles largely*

Summary: Slash. Legolas is in pain and Aragorn lends his aid. Written for lj community 50passages, Prompt: 013. Also for 25fluffyfics lj community,
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: None
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 724 Read Count: 6688
[Report This] Published: 16/06/06 Updated: 16/06/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: ...For the Brave & True

Very funny! I loved it. You write really well!

Author's Response: Wow--thank you! I\'m so very pleased you enjoyed it. Patty.

A Dessert For Glorfindel by sylc Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Bored, Glorfindel turns his attentions to sex and sweets and... well... adult childishness.
Categories: Book Verse Slash
Characters: Elrond, Glorfindel
Genres: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1659 Read Count: 3639
[Report This] Published: 17/06/06 Updated: 17/06/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 25/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Dessert For Glorfindel

Very funny! I really liked it. Loved Glorfindel's attitude to all the other diplomats!

Author's Response: Yay! First review! ^__^ I\'m very glad you enjoyed it, Arwen. It was lots of fun to write. Thanks.

Summary: A random inkling written for a challenge. Young Estel discovers the magic of a book in a dusty corner.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: General, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 366 Read Count: 2347
[Report This] Published: 23/06/06 Updated: 23/06/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Dusty Corner in a Long Forgotten Room

Loved it! Beautiful poem, and the little commentary was great as well. You write really well.

Author's Response: Thank you, Arwen, for your very self-esteem-rising comments. :)

A’mael by Numenora Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Slash. Aragorn & Legolas drabble. Written for 25fluffyfics Challenge, Prompt: 'Reunion.'

Categories: Book Verse Slash, Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149 Read Count: 2350
[Report This] Published: 30/06/06 Updated: 30/06/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: A’mael

Cute! I love fluff. It's also very well-written. Great!

Author's Response: Thank you, ArwenUndomiel for the kind compliment--I adore fluff, too and I had fun writing this one. *hugs* patty.

Confessions by Zhie Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Part of the Blind series. Legolas and Elrond each have something to confess to the other.
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Elrond, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 658 Read Count: 2067
[Report This] Published: 30/06/06 Updated: 30/06/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: -complete-

Cute! I really liked it. Short but sweet.

Summary: Poem of - Legolas reflects when he sees the love between Arwen as she is given to King Elessar.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75 Read Count: 1125
[Report This] Published: 02/07/06 Updated: 02/07/06
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 16/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

So beautiful! I really loved it, it is a beautiful poem! Well done.

Summary: Elves are disappearing. With no one else to turn to, Legolas looks to Aragorn for help, unintentionally leading the human into the darkest peril either of them has ever encountered. A secret and powerful evil broods in Esgaroth, an evil that won’t rest without blood, gold, power and ultimate victory –or death. How much will Legolas and Aragorn be forced to give? How much will those closest to their hearts?



The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for the good men to do nothing.

- Edmund Burke


Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Aragorn, Legolas, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60970 Read Count: 8915
[Report This] Published: 12/07/06 Updated: 11/03/07
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 20/10/06 Title: Chapter 2: Inevitable

Great story so far! Aula chilled me to the bone, she was just so terrifying! Poor Roth is going to get it now, isn't he? Poor thing. I love the plot. One thing that always amazes me about your stories is how good you are at coming up with evil plans...it's a little scary actually! Anyway, I really love this, please update soon! I can't stand cliffies, I have to read the rest now!

Author's Response: LOL! oh be very scared. lol :P Thanks for the review!! Hope you enjoy all the other updates!

Lim Aear by silent_niobe Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Elaine doesn't believe in eternity. Can he make her believe or will he lose his life? Legolas/OC, set in modern times.


Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68613 Read Count: 28826
[Report This] Published: 13/07/06 Updated: 04/06/07
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 17/09/06 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Well, I really like the story. It's very well-written, and I love how you have incorporated the two different worlds so effectively.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I think Elaine is a little bit of a Mary-Sue. The breathtaking beauty, the tortured past, the flirting, etc. There doesn't seem to be much character development happening. If she had a few faults, she would be far more likeable and believable.

Aside from that, I really did like it. Even if she is a little Mary-Sue, you wrote her well enough for it not to spoil the story too much. And I really love the plot. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh, you\'re not beeing mean, on the contrary! I like constructive criticism! But I do feel like pointing out some things, since I am sure others probably feel the same for Elaine. You will find my answer at the next chapter, which will be posted in a while. I\'m sure it will be helpful for other people as well. Once again, thank you for your review and please feel free to let me know what you really think about the story. We can\'t improve unless we make mistakes... *wink*

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 19/09/06 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I really liked this chapter! Honestly, I love the detail in which you are developing Lim Aear.

I believe you referred to the Lorien elves as 'high elves' at one point. If these are the same elves who inhabited the original Lothlorien, then they are not high elves, but grey elves. High elves are the ones that sailed away over the sea, or perhaps some in Rivendell. Just thought I'd point that out. Also, I just realised one other thing; Westron is not English, and in reality Elaine would not have been able to speak it so easily. That doesn't matter, though. The story is AU anyway, and creating language barriers would probably have been counter-productive to the plot.

I'm sorry if you took offence to my Mary-Sue comment, I wasn't trying to offend you. I am aware that Mary-Sue is something of a grey area, and largely a matter of opinion.

One other little correction I have; I did notice that you missed a lot of commas in the story. Many sentences would flow better if they had commas, as some of them don't sound quite right.

I really like your characterization of Legolas. You are doing a god job bringing him to life. And I liked your description of Galadriel. She sounded just right.

Ooh, the story is getting so tense! I just wish they would get together already *sigh*. Still, I really love it. It is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the chapter! I didn\'t take offense to your review, as I said. I\'m glad to have constractive criticism. Elaine doesn\'t know much about Elven history, only as much as Legolas was able to tell her in one night. So it\'s only natural for her to have misunderstood some things and make mistakes. That makes her much more realistic than having a perfect knowledge of Elven history out of nowhere. And they certainly do not speak Westron. The story doesn\'t take place in Middle Earth, but in modern Earth and it\'s only natural that the elves have adopted to the new dominating language (English that is). As I said, they are not totally alienated from the upper world. I cannot account for the lack or misplacing of commas, I\'m afraid. My BETA is doing that job for me. So any complaints should be addressed to her, although I DO believe she does an amazing job. Once again thank you for your review and helpful comments. I will update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Really sad! It was great to finally hear the full story of her past. I loved the way you kept it in suspense like that for so long, then finally let the story out in this chapter.

I'm afraid I can't help really disliking Elaine. She frustrates the hell out of me, she is so immature! I know she thinks she is doing the right thing...but, argh! I'm really sorry, please don't take that the wrong way! I don't like her personality, but you are an excellent writer, and you have characterised her really well all the same. So I'm not criticising you.

I think you have a wonderful writing style, and this is a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hello Arwen Undomiel! As I have told you, I never take offense from your reviews! It\'s really good news that you don\'t like Elaine... it means she\'s a character of her own and she has her lovers and haters as everybody does! She is really immature and hasty in her decisions, it\'s true... which is what makes her so \'human\' and \'real\' in the end! I\'m very glad you\'re enjoying the story! Thank you once more for your review and your compliments, I will update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 23/10/06 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Oh, Elaine is such a stupid girl! I'm glad she's finally seeing sense.

Ack, what's going to happen to the Elves?! Just one thing though, I'd try to avoid having Legolas survive the trap but end up getting back mortally wounded, with her crying and berating herself, etc. It would be too cliche. I'm not sure if that's what you are doing here, but it happens in pretty much any romance you care to read, to the point where it becomes way too cliche.

I only noticed one spelling error. In one chapter near the start, I believe you called Legolas a 'warriorr'. Just thought I should point that out.

This was a really good chapter. Short, but still fantastic! I like how this story is moving. Can't wait to read the rest! Seriously, it's turning into a great story! Update soon, mellon-nin!

Author's Response: Hello mellon nin! I\'m so glad you are enjoying the story! Yes, Elaine is finally realizing her mistakes... let\'s hope she won\'t make the same ones again! I have no intention of having Legolas come back wounded or anything like that, there are only minor injuries in the menu (just to make the battle and its consequences a little more realistic). Thank you very much for letting me know of the spelling mistake, I have already corrected it! Talk to you soon!

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 26/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, that's good, I'm glad you're not going to do that. I didn't think you would really, but I have seen so many stories building up to that, and frankly it gets a little boring. I'm extremely glad you have more imagination than that! Oh, I sound horrible, I already know you have more imagination. Anyway I'll say it again, please update soon! I really can't wait to read it!

Author's Response: LOL I know what you mean! Although tending a wounded Legolas sounds very appealing, it wouldn\'t serve any purpose in my story... So I hope you like the way I have decided to handle the plot! You won\'t have to wait long for an update, coming in a few minutes! :-)

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Date: 28/10/06 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Oh, so so SWEET! Honestly, I can't stop smiling now! That has to be your best chapter yet! For once I am completely speechless! Which, judging by the long-winded reviews I have been giving you, is quite something. It is absolutely beautiful, I loved it so much. It's just so romantic!

Author's Response: Hello Arwen Undomiel! My, I\'m so happy that you liked this chapter so much! Thank you very much for your compliments! I really hope you will enjoy the next one as much as this one! Thank you for your review!