Reviews by ArwenUndomiel
Lim Aear by silent_niobe Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 52]
Summary: Elaine doesn't believe in eternity. Can he make her believe or will he lose his life? Legolas/OC, set in modern times.


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68613 Read Count: 33345
Published: Jul 13 2006 Updated: Jun 04 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Oh, and I forgot to mention, that bit at the end was really funny. 'methnin...melthin...' It made me laugh.

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, I\'m sure Belwen wanted to laugh too, but elves are always so considerate of other people\'s feelings! :-P
Date: Oct 28 2006
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Wow. Just...wow!

Once again, you have me speechless. This whole chapter was so, so beautiful and romantic!! They are finally together. I am just insanely happy now, I can't stop smiling!

I loved how you managed to make it, well...smut, without it seeming smutty. Hang on, does that make any sense at all? What I'm trying to say is that you handled it really well without just making it a pointless PWP chapter like a lot of authors seem to end up doing. Instead it really enhanced the plot.

Welll, it's official. You have me completely hooked on this story. It's just so beautiful, and romantic. Please write more soon!!

Author's Response: Hello mellon nin! I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying the story so much!! Thank you very much for all the compliments... Now *I* can\'t stop smiling!! :-P I have to confess I wrote and rewrote the chapter quite a few times to make sure it didn\'t sound like... well... porn! I\'m glad it turned out good! I promise I will update as soon as I can... until then, namarie!
Date: Nov 10 2006
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Aww, SO cute! So she's a princess now? Heck, I had completely forgotten about that part as well!

This chapter was fantastic! I loved it. Please write more soon mellon-nin!

Author's Response: Hello, mellon nin! Well, as you see, Elaine had forgotten the \'princess part\' just like everyone else! How not to, with the gorgeously captivating character of Legolas beside her? I\'m glad you enjoyed the chapter and I thank you for your review!
Date: Nov 22 2006
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Great chapter! I liked the twist in her first appearance as princess. She's not perfect after all, and I really like that. She seems a lot more real now. You're also developing their relationship really well...giving them these obstacles like the wedding discussion, not just making them a fairytale couple.

Oh, it's 'clung' and not 'clang'. 'Clang' is an onomatopoeia.

Still, I really liked this chapter. The character development seems to be really improving. They are just so sweet, the two of them! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hello mellon nin! Thank you for your review! I was sure you would like her first official appearance as a Princess. It was my purpose to make her look like an everyday girl and not some perfect being... because she\'s not one. I\'m glad you like the development of their relationship. I tried to make it slow and believable, although I risk making some readers bored... Thank you for pointing out the typo to me, it\'s already corrected! I will update as soon as I can!
Date: Dec 09 2006
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Whew. That was intense. Loved the way you wrote the scene in his office; I could practically feel his anger.

I was also impressed at how you showed his struggle with his pride and jealousy, and eventually giving in to his curiosity. It made his behaviour seem realistic and believeable.

The scene with her in the bar was really good, it served as a reminder of the contrast between Elaine's life on Earth and her life in Lim Aear. When she's in LA all the time it's easy to forget about her old life. But that scene sort of brought it to the surface again.

Please update really soon! I just can't wait to see what transpires. Poor Elaine! Bet she's going to be one confused woman when she gets back and finds her husband in a jealous rage. Something tells me this isn't going to be pretty. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hello, mellon nin! Well, I\'m glad you understand the issues I\'m trying to bring up in the story! A reviewer was furious at Elaine\'s behaviour, because she found unrealistic the fact that she would leave her husband in Lim Aear and go clubbing... But I guess she failed to see exactly what you pointed out: the fact that, although she\'s now married, she has a life outside Lim Aear and she cannot disappear from the face of the Earth all of sudden! Elaine is CERTAINLY going to be one confused woman! :-P LOL you\'re reading behind the lines, aren\'t you? Thank you very much for your review, I will try to update as soon as I\'m finished with replying to reviews!
Date: Jan 13 2007
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
First off, sorry about your medical problems! Hope it's all alright now.

That was fantastic, mellon-nin! Again, I loved the intensity of it all.

I'm not sure what your opinions are, but I'm personally inclined to take Legolas' side entirely. Of course, in a modern-day setting, his behaviour would be atrocious and inexcusable. But this isn't the modern world, and he is behaving in perfect accordance with the customs of those times. I think Elaine was extremely immature, actually. As a modern woman she has at least some understanding of customs in ancient times, whereas the Elves can't be expected to understand any of her culture. I'm all for compromise, but she really should respect his beliefs when it comes to such important matters. Sorry about ranting on like that. =P Just felt the need to explain my opinion. I love Elaine, but I will never look on her as one of the brightest crayons in the box.

However, I sort of agree with you on the author's note. Elaine cannot just vanish off the surface of the planet without explanation. She's young and human, and has every right to a bit of fun. I just think that now, as a woman married to the prince of Lim Aear, she needs to show a little more propriety. When you take into account the standards and values of the society he has lived all his life in, Legolas' reaction is not unreasonable. Not saying I support chauvinism or anything like that. Just in the context.

Well, I'm pretty sure you've heard enough of my opinions to last you the rest of your life now, so I'll move on to the actual story. I've been meaning to mention this for a while, but it keeps slipping my mind. The translations at the end of each Elvish sentence are actually a bit of a no-no in fanfiction. They interrupt the flow of the story, annoy all those readers who can translate the statements unaided, and make the use of Elvish language pretty redundant. Translations are good, as most people don't speak Elvish, but they should be put at the end of the chapter.

I thought you showed Legolas' behaviour very well indeed. Elaine's reaction was also well done, though I did think she could have been a touch more intimidated. Overall though, their behaviour was realistic and well handled.

This chapter moved at a good pace. I loved the way you had Elaine breezing in, excited and cheerful, only to find her husband in a state of mad fury.

Yet another cliffie at the end. If this story didn't have me so addicted, I would hate you for leaving me in such suspense. You do pull cliffhangers off very well, I have to admit.

So yeah, I really enjoyed this chapter! I was really anticipating that scene, and you've risen well above my expectations. Please update soon! And sorry for prattling on so much. I'm in a rather talkative mood right now. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hello, mellon nin! Thank you so much for your helpful review! I\'m glad you take the time to give me constructive criticism everytime! Concerning Legolas and Elaine\'s behaviour, I have to agree with you. I don\'t find fault in either and Elaine is certainly not the brightest crayon in the box... quite the contrary actually! She is very immature, that much was obvious from the early chapters, but that doesn\'t make her behaviour unrealistic, as a reviewer *twice* pointed out. As for the elvish translations, I gave it much thought before posting the story, believe me. In the end, I decided to use my personal experience and act accordingly. I once happened to read a story, which used the Quenya dialect that I\'m not very familiar with, and had the translations in the end. I found it extremely frustrating that I had to interrupt my reading to go at the end of the chapter where all the translations where, and in the end I ended up skipping off the elvish dialogue missing vital parts of the plot during my first reading, which did not let me enjoy the story. So I decided, that since most of the readers do not know the elvish language, I would have the translations at the end of each sentence, so that people wouldn\'t get as frustrated as I am; and those who knew the language, would just ignore them. I am really sorry it\'s inconvenient for you, but I have to think about what the majority would prefer. Thank you for taking the time to point it out to me, however! I\'m really glad the chapter did not let you down; most people were waiting for it with great excitement and I was so nervous about how it would turn out! I\'m sorry I haven\'t updated yet, but I promise I will try to do so today! Thank you so much for your kind support throughout the story!
Date: Feb 07 2007
Desire by Naurring Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: An insatiable desire drives Erestor out of bed in the middle of the night.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 988 Read Count: 1537
Published: Jul 15 2006 Updated: Jul 15 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Desire Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Fantastic! I loved the little twist at the end. I knew it wasn't going to be how it seemed at first because of the PG rating, but it still took me by surprise. You've given me cravings now. I'm off to find some chocolate...
Date: Sep 05 2006
Summary: Legolas surprised Rúmil and Rúmil seemed have other plans in his mind. 25 fluffyfics... followed "Listen To Your Heart". (Rúmil/Legolas)
Categories: Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Legolas, Rúmil
Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: 25 Fluffy Fics
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 786 Read Count: 5008
Published: Jul 15 2006 Updated: Jul 15 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Cute! I liked it! This probably sounds incredibly stupid, but I actually have no idea who Rumil is. Still, good story and well-written. Update soon?

Author's Response: Well... Rumil is Haldir\'s brother. Thank you for your review, i\'m glad that you enjoyed of it, parts 3 & 4 are ready, hope you love them as well. Keep smiling, Sivan Shemesh
Date: Sep 16 2006
Summary: Most of these will attempt to keep within a drabble, but with little luck!
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 502 Read Count: 1965
Published: Jul 28 2006 Updated: Jul 28 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
So, so cute! I really loved it. Well done!
Date: Oct 01 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
So sweet! You are a fantastic writer, I hope you will keep adding!
Date: Oct 01 2006
Summary: Just how did Elrond come to choose Legolas as the representative for the Elves? Why, he had help of course!
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Aragorn, Arwen, Arwen, Elladan, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrohir, Elrond, Elrond, Erestor, Erestor, Gandalf / Olorin, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Glorfindel, Legolas, Legolas, Merry, Merry, Pippin, Pippin
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3934 Read Count: 2890
Published: Jul 28 2006 Updated: Jul 28 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
I loved it! Really good story so far. I loved the way you portrayed Arwen, as more than a helpless, dainty female for once. It made a nice change. And I also liked your portrayal of Legolas, and the two hobbits. That midnight snack scene was so cute! When will there be more?
Date: Sep 10 2006
Summary: I seem to be continuing the series. Title should explain it though.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 575 Read Count: 7411
Published: Aug 02 2006 Updated: Aug 02 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 43 ways to annoy Legolas Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Delightful! So funny. I loved it!
Date: Sep 10 2006
Summary: The title says it all. Begins somewhere in the second movie.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elrond, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1335 Read Count: 2511
Published: Sep 05 2006 Updated: Sep 06 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Really random, but funny. I'll show it to my sister, she loves stuff like this! I really liked it as well.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad your sister liked it. I love randomness!
Date: Sep 05 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Yep, I showed it to my sister and she was laughing psychotically thoughout. She says great story as well.
Date: Sep 05 2006
Summary: A game of hide and seek becomes an ongoing waging war between one little princeling and a pair of very frustrated twins. Must Glorfindel intervene?
*DEDICATED TO WHITE WOLF KASMI KASSIM SIVAN*
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339 Read Count: 1829
Published: Sep 06 2006 Updated: Sep 06 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Acorns Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
It was pretty good, it made me laugh. I thought it was a little weird that Glorfindel could see him so easily though. And I thought the title was a little confusing, I would probably call it something a bit more concise. Still, good story. I'm sorry to hear you are leaving the site, you are a good author and I have really been enjoying your stories. Well done with this, it is very funny!

Author's Response: I am glad i made you laugh, i always thought humour wasn\'t one of my qualitites. I am wondering how you found the title confusing? Yes as i said in my profile it is too painful to have lost so much feedback and reviews and losing so many stories. Thankyou very much for the review, i just hope the 3 authors i dedicated it too see it! Yun Btw Glorfindel is a very elder elf, his senses are more heightened then that of the twins.
Date: Sep 06 2006
Summary: It's a poem through Legolas's eyes to Aragorn.



*I don't expect it to be good, but I gave it a shot anyway*


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Drama, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194 Read Count: 1404
Published: Sep 06 2006 Updated: Sep 06 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Friendship Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
It is really good! I ordinarily shy away from anything that suggests Aragorn and Legolas as a couple, as I've never exactly been a huge fan of slash. It is still a really good poem though. Just one thing; 'strickly' is 'strictly'. Apart from those little nit-picks, it was beautiful. Well done.

Author's Response: thank you for the review. i fixed \'strictly\' by the way, thank you. i very much appreciate the feedback, another \'thank you\' to you.
Date: Sep 07 2006
I Cannot by Aerlinniel Rated: PG [Reviews - 7]
Summary: An Elf thinks about their lover.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 187 Read Count: 2057
Published: Sep 07 2006 Updated: Sep 07 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: N/A Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Wow. That was such a beautiful poem! I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you again. If you like this, watch for another poem by me...I\'ll be reposting it under this username soon. ~Mel
Date: Sep 08 2006
Summary: Haldir bids his love farewell in Lothlorien.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 526 Read Count: 1291
Published: Sep 08 2006 Updated: Sep 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Farewell Forever Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Wow, that was so sad! And beautiful. You write really well.

Author's Response: Thanks. I will try to write more fics like that in the future. ~Mel
Date: Sep 08 2006
Summary: What happens when the Dark Lord sends everyone gifts?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Arwen, Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Galadriel, Gollum, Haldir, Oin, Orcs/Uruk-Hai
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2533 Read Count: 1698
Published: Sep 08 2006 Updated: Sep 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Fantastic! Really, really funny. I especially liked the ten cars and the laptops. Great story, keep it up!

Author's Response: The laptops were the hardest...I love the cars too. But my absolute fave is the starbursts, because I can always hear Smeagol actually saying the lines! Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel
Date: Sep 08 2006
Summary: Representatives of all the free peoples of Middle-earth have gathered for a council. But little do they know what Lord Elrond is planning.





I followed the scene from the movie, because it is shorter, but the characters consist of the ones from the book.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Bilbo, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Other, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1882 Read Count: 1782
Published: Sep 08 2006 Updated: Sep 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Hysterical! I loved it. I was laughing all through!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wrote it months ago, and I still luagh my hardest whenever I read it! ~Mel
Date: Sep 08 2006
Summary: This script depicts what really happened to Gandalf in the mines. I cahnged almost all the characters' personalities. Mostly movie-verse, but with elements from the book.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1092 Read Count: 1770
Published: Sep 08 2006 Updated: Sep 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The one and only chapter Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Heehee, so funny! I loved Frodo in this especially.

Author's Response: Thanks! Frodo was SO the best character in this one! Thank you for reviewing! ~Mel
Date: Sep 08 2006
Summary: I wrote this ballad about the two lovers some time ago.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elrond
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 398 Read Count: 2260
Published: Sep 08 2006 Updated: Sep 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
That was such a beautiful poem! I loved it. Keep writing!

Author's Response: I sure will, but my poems may be a bit depressing. At least I don\'t seem to suck! Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel
Date: Sep 08 2006
A Princely Prank by Anise Rated: G [Reviews - 35]
Summary: : Prince Legolas of Mirkwood had been the target of the Rivendell twins pranks once too often, it was time to get revenge. Note there is no slash in this story it is purely friendship between Legolas and Aragorn, although I am not sure about what there is between Eryniel and Aragorn.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas
Genres: Angst, General, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21919 Read Count: 17412
Published: Sep 09 2006 Updated: Oct 15 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Blue Becomes You Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Hysterical! Please update really soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviewing and I am glad you found it funny. Please note for the most part this story is humourous but there is a little drama involved as there always is when the twins are involved. Your wish is my command and I will be putting up the next chapter as soon as I finish this. Hope you enjoy it as much.
Date: Sep 09 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 New Ways to do Things Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Ooh, it was great! I was cringing and laughing the whole way through! Really funny. Keep updating, I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you for your enthusiastic review, I am glad now that I put those chapters up. I have to admit that writing the situations and humour and drama in them is what makes this one of my favourites to write. I still have 3 more chapters written but will go to adding a chapter every couple of weeks to give me a chance to finish the story. At this point I don\'t see it going past 12 chapters at the most.
Date: Sep 09 2006
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6. Observations and Promises Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Wow, I've really gotten behind in this story! Sorry for neglecting you for so long. Anyway, great two chapters! I'm getting so confused about the whole Legolas/Eryniel thing, I can only imagine how confused Aragorn must be! This story is great, and really funny. Keep writing!

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing and welcome back. I am glad you are still enjoying it. Yes the legolas/eryniel thing is confusing all I can do is to explain is blame eryniel\'s prescence on the concussion that legolas suffered. I have likened it to having such a bad headache that it pushes you to act unlike you normally would. Anyone who suffers from migraines would probably back me up on that. Anyway I hope that clears it up and I look forward to hearing from you again.
Date: Oct 23 2006