I love the way that you made the first three lines rhyme and the last one completely different. That's something I've never seen before in poetry!
Author's Response: I\'d forgotten I\'d done that! lol! This is practically the first poem I\'ve ever wrote on the web so that kinda adds to it! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING! xxx
This sounds like a song...or mini one at least...I like this one the most out of the four!
Author's Response: Why, thank you! So do actually. Yes, I did try to make it sound a little like a song, I will admit. Thanks again! xx
Got the suspence going I see. I guess I'll move on to the next chapter to see what happens next...I like to way Faevaethor teases Legolas all the time too!
BTW, the Council Of Elrond is one of the best sites out there! I myself am a member!
Author's Response: Cool! My username is GreenPeace, but I don\'t go there much... thanks for the reviews, made my day!
Hmmm...interesting...it's hard to imagine Legolas as a trouble-maker...
Oh, come on! Let him live! I don't want him to die!
Okay, I await the next chapter eagerly!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee... It\'s a bit too earyly for him to die... yet... :) Thanks for the reviews!
That is so sad...you had me panicking when Arwen said he might not recover fully. At least I can breathe now...kinda.
Author's Response: Kinda...:) Thanks for all your reviews, the inspire me to continue. Think I\'ll check out a couple of yours now... Legolas might be okay... I am not sure yet though... Sauruman made me do it...
BTW...is this set before of after the downfall of Sauron...is it the fourth age?
Author's Response: This is set before, when Aragorn and Legolas are young... :) Aragorn might be included shortly... but not yet... :)
Write more, write more! I wanna read more!
I love the telepathic conversation you put in there...I have never seen that done before in such a way!
I loved this chapter! And the way you described the twins was perfect!
When Sidhlaer mentioned the lights, I kept on hearing Gollum saying 'Don't follow the lights.'
I love your fic so far!
Author's Response: me too... great minds think alike! xD
Yay! Tell Saruman thank you for letting him wake up! Woohooo! He's awake!
Sorry...I seem to be quite hyper these days!
Author's Response: me too... lol. yay... glad you\'re back, haven\'t seen you for a while. thanks!
That's so sad...and sounds exactly like Legolas! Poor Elf, always blaming himself.
Hey! That rhymes!
Author's Response: yeah it does... lol XD thanks!
I think that was your best chapter yet! I loved the part where Lord Elrond used his power to heal Legolas...it's so...I don't know how to express it...
Anyways, I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Aw...thanks. That makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... lol. Thanks for reading!
I gotta go to bed...so i'll read your chaps later k?
Author's Response: Heh... you must be like me... I get on the computer when my mom is downstairs watching tv... Ssh... dont tell her... But it seems as if you no longer had to go to bed cuz you reviewed 10 min. later... something I would do. xD Thanks for all the reviews! XD
oohh! Update soon!
Please tell Saruman that I beg him to let Legolas live!
Author's Response: I will... though i doubt he will listen to me... I\'ll have to think of a way to convince him... maybe get mithrandir to come over... lol thanks! xD
No! No! Non, non, non!!! What is wrong with Legolas?? Please ask Saruman not to make him die!!
Sorry it took me so long to review this chapter. I have been so busy these past few weeks!
That is so sad! I always feel so bad when the fact that Orcs were once elves is mentioned... Imagining being immortal and having your life and joys taken away...*crys openly*
I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I thought the orcs weren\'t getting enough attenion so I think they deserved this poem. Once again, thanks for the review!:-)
Can I call you evil? You would so freak them out real bad if you actually did that in ME!
Author's Response: lol. Go ahead! Call me the evilest and evil! MwaHA! I\'m on a hyper day so please excuse me. Thanks so much for the review! x
That's probably more like the way I'd act if I met the hobbits, but i wouldn't be able to shut up about school! yeah, I'm a nerd. Who cares? I know they won't!
Where do you get all those ideas?
Author's Response: I dunno actually. They kinda pooped up as the momentum goes. I got another one up right now. Thanks again for the review mate! Really appreciate it! xxx
Interesting...which one thinks he's Robin Hood?
Author's Response: Thats for me to know and you to find out... ;-) Thanks for reviewing! xxx