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Oh dear Goddess, this is surreal. I'm back, ladies and gentlemen! After a three year hiatus!! How's that for not updating? It's sad, because I get the strong sense that all my fans and darling readers must have gone by now, to the Grey Havens and beyond. But truly, so happy to be back! While at the same time finding it unfortunate that I cannot break this addiction, even though I'm in my freshman year of college(pleas somebody help me). But I hope to REALLY, REALLY edit all of my stuff!! Goddess, I was an absolutely BOLLOCKS writer when I started writing fanfic at the tender age of thirteen o_0. Deepest apologies look for me to fix it all when I have time!!Haha! Hmm perhaps I sense some slightly malicious glee? Very funny!
Author's Response: *Evil grin*
Oh wow, this is really...wow. I'm so sorry! Its a great poem!
Author's Response: Thanks! Don\'t be sorry. You know, it\'s partly this site and all the amazing people on it that helped me through. Anyway I\'m so glad you enjoyed the poem, thanks for reviewing!
Dude....*gazes at the full moon* hauntingly beautiful!
Author's Response: I know eh?
iggybaby
Oh no! I sense some per_y hobbit fancying! This is great!! My _ key wont work sorry!! Great story!!
THough I tend to be a per_y elf fancier myself!!
Author's Response: lol. I suppose I\'m a bit of a p**** hobbit fancier sometimes. It\'s scary. Eeep! lol. Thanks for reviewing!
*Gasp* A murder!!! *Sharp intake of breath* awww that sux lol good life summary!!
Author's Response: Thank you, anyway, now that\'s off my chest and the warning\'s out I can go back to the storywriting
Oh gorgeous!! Just beautiful!
Author's Response: I am happy you enjoyed it.
iggybaby
Author's Response: I am happy you enjoyed it.
iggybaby
Oooh! Interesting beginning(sp?)
'the time has come for the dominion of men' shortly afterwards everything goes to hell=).
I like the legend part, post second chapter soon? Please?
Author's Response: Glad you did, there was going to be another one but I forgot it before I wrote it...
The next chapter will come soon (since I\'m having an update flurry and everything)
A interesting take on the future of middle earth. Very enjoyable! A nice bit of writing.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Yay!! Another chapter! I especially loved the part with Varkuda and Shiny. Its so neat to finally see a future version of ME. Really a amazing bit of writing. By the way, I'd love to beta, check the email I sent you. Good chapter!! =)
Author's Response: I got it, just replied too.
Know what? You just typoed \"Vakuda\" but now I\'m gonna change it cos Varkuda sounds better!
Great, like I said before!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
HAHAHA!! Very cute! Merry christmas all =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
iggybaby
Haha! A teensy bit of Legolas bashing, but really very funny!
Author's Response: so sorry if that disturbed you! I\'ll put it in my warnings.
iggybaby
This a fabulous story, and your a superb writer!! People have told me that they can see what I write in their heads, but, with your writing, I'm not just seeing it, I'm feeling it!! Excellent! =)
Author's Response: Wow, I\'m really flattered! That really means a lot to me. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story, and thank you very much for you review! :]
Wow, great beginining, this is going in my favourites!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks :]
Great second chapter, I have only one criticism. Elwen looks the equivalent of a sixteen year old human am I correct? Then her true age in years would be more like fifty-a hundred. Elves age very slowly(as set down in LACE laws and customs of the Eldar) so to look sixteen she would be in her adolescence for elven children is more like sixty human years. Just so you know. I love this story and other than criticizing your canon I'm enjoying it immensely! =)
Author's Response: Yeah.... oops....
Haha, I kind of thought of that, but there\'s really no way to keep it canon and still make the story work. I\'ve had a few slip-ups like that, mostly due to the fact that I only read the books once, and I\'m just looking random names and facts up in my copy of the Silmarillion. Anyway, I\'m glad you like it! Keep reading- i added a few chapters!
Wow, I like this chapter. Especially the butterfly thing, very good!!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the chapter! The butterfly thing is actually something I remember a kid doing in elementary school, but I think it was a moth or something. It upset the hell out of me at the time, and I\'ve always wanted to use it in writing. Anyway, thanks for the review!
This is a fabulous story. Really, I love it!! I cnat wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Its excellent!! You write as though you've experienced it all yourself. Its superb! I love it!! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story. I\'m having a bit of writer\'s block, which is partly why i posted this by itself. I got really exited one I wrote it and was all proud of myself. So I posted it by itself :p
LiKe I said before, EXCELLENT! More soon?
Author's Response: Thanks! Okay, so I had the next two chapters written and ready to send, but I didn\'t have them on my computer yet. Then I lost them. So...hopefully I\'ll find them soon, but otherwise I\'ll have to completely rewrite them for like the 3rd time!! rrrgh...
Oh, cool!! I like her already!!
Author's Response: Well, I\'m glad. What particular naughtiness would you like to see her engage in?
RS