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I think you should make Legolas get pregnant. That could be the real reason why Thranduil does not want him attached to Aragorn, and he 's kept it secret and bcause of his fear it has become a self fufilling prophecy.
You have the perfect mix of romance and angst. Please hurry and update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, arcadii, for the kind and generous review. RL and illness have delayed any updates, but as soon as I\'m able, I will definitely update this. I love this story and pledge not to abandon it. Patty.
Beautifully written, but too short.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! The lenght was dictated by the community which was for 100 words/drabble genre. Thanks again. Patty.
It was good, but I can't help but wonder - where's the rest of it?
This is a great story, I love the way that the attraction is building between Aragorn and Legolas. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I haven\'t had a chance to start the next section (been very busy with school) but I will try to write it this weekend and have it up asap!
Can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks SO much for reviewing! I\'ve added chapter two now, so please read and tell me what you think!
Author's Response: Thanks SO much for reviewing! I\'ve added chapter two now, so please read and tell me what you think!
Perhaps the darkness of Moria is affecting Legolas' judgement. Nice chapter, angst could be a little heavier (bring it on, they can take it). Next chapter should be very interesting; please make it soon!
Author's Response: Yes, the dark does skew Legolas\' judgement. As for angst, I\'ll try to make improvements.
Terrific chapter, can't wait for the next! Don't worry about treating the movie dialog as gospel; you're doing just fine (better even) the way you're going!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I guess I\'m just a stickler for perfection coz I sort of get annoyed and panicky if I can\'t get someone\'s lines from the movie absolutely correct as I have seen the theatrical version about 52 times and I ought to remember it :)
Good chapter, I can't wait to see what mischief shall befall the company in the darkness of Moria. I know I'm being greedy, but please make the next chapter a little longer.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They\'ll find the usual and more in Moria. I\'m trying to make it not too AU although Boromir is slightly OOC.
The next chapter will be longer.