I absoulutly love this story! I really hope that you will keep writing soon. When will Nebride tell her new family about the abuse she recieved from her step father? I always like it when the family gets very defensive. Keep writing, you are doing very well!!
This is such a sweet story. Legolas giving the butterfly to his mother as a gift is amazingly cute. I think you did the young Legolas very well!
Author's Response: I love little Legolas, so I had fun writing this. I\'m glad you not only liked the story, but the way I portrayed him as an elfling. Thank you.
I like it. Very intresting look on the elves culture. Your words painted a very good picture in my head. Good job!
My god this is good work. I couldn't stop reading, i had to read all in one sitting!
Author's Response: Hello Anuradha! I\'m very happy that you like the story! :-) Thank you very much for your good words!
Very, very good. I have got to see what happens next! Never knew Legolas could get so jelous. Please post a new chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! As I said below, jealousy is a terrible thing and it can drive the most sensible people mad! Look for an update later on today!
Wow, you have to write more, i really have to know how this turns out. I love your characters, and the plot you have unfolding; so much mystery and it can go in any direction. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Hi. I really like your story so far. All of your characters have orignal and detailed personalities, which keeps the story from being boring. You even do Legolas as a strong character. I hope you will continue to write, because i will continue to read and review.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for leaving me a review! I\'m so happy to hear you don\'t find the story boring... I was actually worried that all these details would discourage people from reading my story, but I\'m glad to hear this is not the case. I WILL continue to write and the story WILL be finished. That I can tell you for sure. Although real life always seems to get in the way im a mysterious way...\r\nSilent Niobe
I really liked your story. I'm usually not a fan of the Haldir flicks, but your writing really caught me. I'm a big fan of angst too, so that also got me reading. Did there parents really die? I hope you keep writing stories like this, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Technically, Tolkien wrote very little about Haldir and so it is not known as to whether or not\r\nHaldir\'s parent\'s died. However, it is a commom backstory used in Haldir fandom, though no one ever really writes \r\nabout those days in his life, which really hold a lot of good, creative writing potential. Thanks again for reading!
I am so glad you started doing Orophin's point of view in this story. It was what was missing from My Brother's Keeper. Still plenty of angst, and for that I am very glad. I also like how your characters seem very real when you write about them. Get the second part of this done, because I really want to read it.
Author's Response: You know, I had never noticed that I didn\'t use Orophin\'s p.o.v. in My Brother\'s Keeper. Crazy, eh? He does add a\r\nwhole different dimention to the story. I\'m glad you enjoyed this. Though I\'m slow at posting because of college, I\r\nwill be writing a large series of small fics about the brothers that all fit together. Thanks again!