Reviews by Gemini_Elf
Summary: She's one lean, mean fighting machine...she's a dark elf.
(okay fine, I'm a bad summary writer, just give it a go and see what you think.)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27193 Read Count: 9254
Published: 18/10/06 Updated: 09/12/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Ok, finally finished reading. The concept is interesting, a dark elf (Probably) re-deeming herself. Very interesting. Update soon
Date: 16/01/07
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
"shame you were to scared" should be "shame you were TOO scared" and "don not trust me" should be "do not trust me" (Reviewing the whole 7 chapters when I reach the end of what you've done so far. Until then I'm just pointing out the mistakes :D)

Author's Response: ooops!! Thanx! I\'ll fix it right away. =)
Date: 15/01/07
Summary: Four friends set out on an adventure through Middle Earth with a small book. The Hitchhiker's Guide to Middle Earth. Response to Susan's challenge. Warnings: Mild language and crude humor.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5619 Read Count: 12013
Published: 18/10/06 Updated: 30/12/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: The Guide to Middle Earth? Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Falling about laughing* This is good.. and funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! The characters were inspired from my friends who behave this way in real life. As you can imagine, there is never a dull moment when they are around.
Date: 20/11/06
Title: Chapter 3: Trees, Trees and more trees Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I can just imagine Treebeard appearing right now ^^

Author's Response: Well, if you\'d like, I can make them detour into the Fanghorn Forest.
Date: 20/11/06
Trolls by White Wolf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 55]
Summary: When Legolas and Aragorn are captured by trolls while crossing their territory, the two friends must use all of the skills, cunning and endurance they possess just to survive. Won second place for Best Work-in-Progress in the 2007 MC Fanfiction Awards.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93623 Read Count: 33820
Published: 20/10/06 Updated: 31/10/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Gasps* Did not see that one coming. Legolas and Aragorn can never get a break, can they?

Author's Response: Good. I was hoping it would be an even bigger surprise than Hatch\'s sudden death. No, I\'m afraid they can\'t, but hope springs eternal, so maybe... :o)
Date: 27/03/07
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I loved this chapter.. I hate Hatch *Growls* Good writing of an evil character!
Very glad that Aragorn and Legolas are free again, although I have a great amount of sympathy for Aragorn, being stuck in that tree.. :)

Author's Response: I\'m glad you did. He is not a very lovable character, that\'s for sure. Thanks. Surely, you don\'t think they\'ll stay free. :o) It will be a while yet of traveling with Legolas before our dear ranger is comfortable in a tree.
Date: 13/12/06
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Somewhere in the fourth paragraph you've put "ans" instead of "and"
Little confused at the end, where you've put "he looked at the two brothers" I assume you mean brothers-in-spirit or something along those lines, but it may confuse newer readers.
Great chapter! This fic is really interesting! Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out my typo. I\'ll fix it. L&A were having fun with Pickett, saying they were brothers. When Pickett said they didn\'t look alike, Aragorn said they had different parents. It was meant as a joke to go over Pickett\'s head, which it did. There have been several references since of them being brothers, which is what the poor troll believes, so its just a continuation of the joke. Glad you liked the chapter and the story. More will be along soon.
Date: 10/04/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
WOW! I LOVE this! Update Soon!

Author's Response: WOW is great. Thank you. I\'m glad you are enjoying this story. The next chapter will be along soon.
Date: 02/12/06
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Groans* Captured again?
Great chapter! :D Keep up the hard work!

Author's Response: Oh, yes. It seems to be a trend. :o) Thanks. I\'ll do my best.
Date: 04/02/07
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Gulps* Half of me is screaming "Hurt them and die." The other half is actually looking forward to seeing them getting tortured.... *Evil grin*

Author's Response: Oh dear. You have a definite need to see suffering, don\'t you? Of coufse, it\'s better that it happens to someone in fiction rather than real life. Evil grin indeed. :o)
Date: 25/02/07
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I actually did a victory dance when Legolas killed Hatch.
I know I haven't reviewed any of your other stories on this site, but when I read Stories of Arda, you were one of my favourite authors. And once again, you've pulled off a BRILLIANT story. DUDE YOU ROCK!

Author's Response: Yes, that was a happy moment, wasn\'t it? Thank you. I love to hear that I\'m a favorite of a reader. I\'m glad that you are liking this story. I also love hearing the word brilliant. :o) Thanks again.
Date: 07/03/07
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
RE: Last review: Sorry, it's just so long since the first reference was made, I had totally forgotten about it
They cannot get captured again! Stupid Trolls! Stupid evil Trolls!

Author's Response: No problem. Well, they are certainly going to do their best not to get captured again. The trolls may be stupid and evil, but there are a lot of them, unfortunately.
Date: 20/04/07
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
YAY!! They're FINALLY free! *Dances for joy* Hopefully no more "branches" to stop them escaping ^_^

Author's Response: Yes, they are free. There will be no more \"branches\" to waylay them, but there are plenty of other things out there that can. :o)
Date: 24/06/07
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
The first bit was sooo tense! VERY glad Tack was sleepy!
One little mistake, you've put "noting" instead of "nothing" in the fifth line when Aragorn realises there's nothing he can do to help Legolas.
Hope they don't get captured again, looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I was going for tension at that point. Sleepy trolls are good trolls. Thanks for pointing out the typo. I try to catch them all, but some always sneak past me. I corrected it. I hope so, too, but with their luck... :o)
Date: 19/05/07
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Please don't be a troll, PLEASE don't be a troll...

Author's Response: Now click you heels together. :o) I wish I could tell you whether it is or not, but you\'ll have to wait for the next chapter for that revelation. Keep hoping.
Date: 06/07/07
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
That definitely wasn't a tree! I can't believe they got caught AGAIN! Still...If Aragorn finds his sword he'll finally be able to do SOMETHING to Hatch and get out of there!

Author's Response: No, it wasn\'t. I\'m afraid you\'ll have to believe it. Poor guys. You mean Pickett. Lets\' hope they can find something that will get them loose for good next time. :o)
Date: 09/06/07
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I must of missed the memo that said you had posted this chapter, sorry I only got around to reading now. Glad it was Legolas and not a troll! And I hope they escape alive!

Author's Response: I wondered what had happened to you. No need to apologize. I\'m just glad you\'re back. I\'m sure Aragorn was *very* glad it was Legolas and not a troll. :o) I hope so, too!
Date: 20/08/07
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Personally I think the chances of Aragorn not noticing are very slim. Shame the lightning didn't kill Scron. Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I agree wholeheartedly that the chances are very slim, more like none. :o) It\'s a bigger shame that the lightning didn\'t kill *all* the trolls. I will update as soon as I can manage it.
Date: 20/08/07
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
I feel sorry for Legolas, injured, trapped in a small hidey-hole, trolls looking for him and Aragorn about to interigate him...I bet hunting spiders in Mirkwood seems like a piece of cake right now!

Author's Response: You certainly summed up Legolas\'s woes quite well. Aragorn\'s company may be a comfort, but the man is also a healer, and hiding things from him won\'t get past him at all. I think our dear elf would be extrememly happy to be hunting giant spiders about now.
Date: 08/09/07
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty One Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Valar! Not again!! They have been captured by Trolls for 21 chapters, can someone please give them a break?!

Author's Response: They did get captured way back in the first chapter, didn\'t they? Poor guys. Well, things may not be as dire as they currently appear. Then again... :o)
Date: 02/10/07