Oooh it's really picking up now! This was a good chapter...and psh "revise" my foot! I see right through Dom's ploy *winks*
Off to read chapter 3!
Ha ha this part: "Before we do anything though," he said, pulling me up to my feet. He took the right text book out, then ushered me out of the room and we walked into his room. "I want you to put some of my deodorant on."
"Why? Do I smell?" I asked feeling horrified, which made Dom laugh. -
cracked me up! I was thinking Dom was a jerk until I read the next part *laughs* Clever, very clever
I just read chapter one! It's great so far! Very real...it feels like I know Faith already! can't wait to read chapter 2!
P.S. If you wish check out my story, Allegory