Reviews by Shadow Ranger
The Black Rose by Gemini_Elf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 54]
Summary: This story has been completely and fully edited. Several chapters have been taken out and re-written and others have been collapsed to make shorter, and an OC has been cut out. If you have read this before, I advise re-reading it to catch up
Enemies from the past are coming back to haunt Elrond and Thranduil, and what better way to get at a Father, than to kidnap a son? Aragorn and Legolas are in trouble. Big Trouble

Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Torture
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15896 Read Count: 19367
Published: Nov 05 2006 Updated: Jul 05 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The First Move... Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
As in, make a fanfic with this story in except with commentary.

Author's Response: Um... I know what you mean... but I\'m not sure... You can do Chiara and Eldan if you like! (I just need to write it first ¬_¬)
Date: Jan 30 2007
Title: Chapter 1: The First Move... Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Oh yeah, you're the sixth most prolific reviwer on the site, well done.

Author's Response: I am?! WHOOP!
Date: Feb 10 2007
O. Cruel Fate by greywing, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 32]
Summary: A reclusive, timorous botanist gets whisked unceremoniously into Middle Earth... in the form of the studliest male elf to ever walk the face of Arda. Featuring a hysterical Vaire, an unscrupulous healer, and a completely clueless Cirdan.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Glorfindel
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18802 Read Count: 13809
Published: Nov 13 2006 Updated: Nov 02 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Various Discoveries Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
How very strange, strange-ness aside its good so far, and I definitely (nately? I forget) want to see what happens next

Author's Response: Ah, have you not heard that variety is the spice of life? Well, strangeness is the Thai chilli.
Date: Nov 14 2006
Summary: This is safe for those who don't like slash as this is just a discussion in which one brother attempts to persuade the other not to take male partners. I'm not suggesting anything about Faramir's preferred partners! Thanks to Shadow Ranger for giving me the concept for this idea!
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: None
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 507 Read Count: 5104
Published: Nov 19 2006 Updated: Nov 19 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: The Discussion Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
How very strange. Exactly what comment inspired this fic?
And anyway, don't be mean to Boromir, you blatently made him seem arrogant and dominating

Author's Response: You know I hate Boromir, and I ALWAYS pick on him.. The comment was \"Have you seen how much slash there is on lotrfanfiction.com?\" We then had a discussion, in which you said \"I don\'t see how anyone can write it\" Remember now?
Date: Nov 20 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Just Gender Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Yo Gem, when I made this comment, I didn't mean any slash at all, I meant in graphic detail (you will see why I found it nesscessary to say this later)

Author's Response: I know.. you told me the other day, remember..?

Author's Response: I know.. you told me the other day, remember..?
Date: Dec 28 2006
Summary: There are many diehard Tolkien fans that complain that either Peter Jackson's films destroyed their cherished images of Middle Earth or didn't capture the spirit of Middle Earth. My answer? It could have been a thousand times worse.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Galadriel, Gollum, Grma, Nazgl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Sauron, The Fellowship, Thoden, Witch King
Genres: Horror, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27966 Read Count: 64723
Published: Nov 22 2006 Updated: Apr 19 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Eagle Poop and Bad Elvish Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
ARGH! Make it stop! Make it stop! Okay, your point is proven!
Date: Nov 28 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Eagle Poop and Bad Elvish Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Okay, now i have stopped screaming and banging my head on a wall, I can actually comment, well written, (sort of! as it is written well enough to create a loathsome story) keep writing, I will laugh and scream in equal measure.
Date: Nov 28 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Springtime for Singing Sauron Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
*says very bad word*
Excellent, no really great, but I still want to strangle the director.
Date: Dec 13 2006
Title: Chapter 1: The Power of Friendship Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
ARGH!!

Author's Response: Is that a compliment?
Date: Nov 22 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Sloppy Drawing and Dialogue Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Please... no more, i don't think I can bear it..
Hm, this is compelling and repulsive in equal measure, keep it up
Date: Dec 02 2006
Summary: The LOTR characters all go to school and make two new friends. Parody. Also on fanfiction.net.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1486 Read Count: 7259
Published: Nov 24 2006 Updated: Mar 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Timetable Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Just added a chapter- languages, great idea, I'm glad to help out

Author's Response: That chapter was great! A lot better than what I could write. The lunchtime one I have just added in front of yours is not very good - I might change it slightly.
Date: Dec 14 2006
Summary: Sometimes things happen that we cannot control. Some call it fate some call it destiny but either way, Evelyn was about to find out the true meaning of home.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4971 Read Count: 5838
Published: Nov 28 2006 Updated: Dec 06 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
This is pretty well written, and definitely makes me want to read more. Well done.
(Heard about you from Gemini, don't know if you know I know her, glurk, what a mouthful)

S.R. (Wondering why Gemini is so Balrog happy, they aren't so tough.)

Author's Response: thanks for the review. I\'ll try and update it as fast as I can.
Date: Dec 03 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Hey, stuff before it gets exciting is good, just cos i get restless after a few pages (of MINE! not yours) of relative non-action, doesn't mean it ain't good, descriptions make authors

Author's Response: true true.
Date: Dec 05 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Dramatic Dramatic! any chance of Elrond saying WHY she can't go back? Or HOW she got there in the first place?

S.R. This was not intended to be critisism! But if you told us it would be nice.

Author's Response: perhaps perhaps. you shall see if you keep reading (and reviewing) *hint hint*
Date: Dec 06 2006
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
*cue dramatic music* well you have me totalled on suspense, but what about... gore?
*Ahem* anyway, you will most likely know what comes now, update soon and i'll keep reading!

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, there\'ll be more Estel humor, more pranks, more action, drama and of course romance. mawahaha.
Date: Dec 06 2006
In Flux by GreenWoodElleth, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 46]
Summary: Yeah, sure. I'd thought about it. I'd totally considered it. Going to Middle Earth by some magical means...yada, yada, yada the whole nine yards(with sexy elves to boot.) It was something I considered much in the way somebody would consider a holiday they hoped to but knew hey would never have.
I hadn't thought about dying in a bus accident. I hadn't thought about my friends being there. I hadn't thought about waking up with a new body, a new name, and a new history.
And to make it all the more dramatic...I am soo dead if I don't get my Latin homework in on time.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11188 Read Count: 26997
Published: Nov 29 2006 Updated: Sep 11 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: breaching is such a strong word... Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
wow, thanks for writing so well, it is great entertainment, and I honestly can't wait for the next part


Author's Response: Im glad you like it! I really am! I promise to update soon! =)
Date: Dec 14 2006
Title: Chapter 1: A Normal Day Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Well, I enjoyed that writing, it's a good story, keep it up when you can and i'll keep reading.

Author's Response: Thanx!! I\'m halfway through the second chapter, so I\'ll post it soon. I really appreciate the review!
Date: Nov 30 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Very interesting, slightly confusing, rather funny, that is my review, but anyway...
Please update, preferably sooner rather than later

Author's Response: Hey, thankyou for your re_iew! Yeah this one was a little confusing I sort of made it up on a whim. I\'ll update soon, I promise!! Its been so hard to balance school work and writing lately so I apologize for any delays!! :)
Date: Dec 03 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Warg? Where? Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
What a great line!
heaven was a crazy place...
Keep writing

Author's Response: thanx! I\'ll review soon!
Date: Dec 06 2006
Title: Chapter 5: emotional break down Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Whoahoho, that chapter was great! I have no idea what you were talking about, it's just as good as ever, sorry to hear you're stressed

Author's Response: Aww, thanx for the review!! And I have great news, IM NO LONGER STRESSED!! I have a holiday now, so I\'ll update soon. Think of it as my christmas poresent to all, another update, happy holidays!! =)
Date: Dec 21 2006
Title: Chapter 1: A Normal Day Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Hey GWE, I dunno if you read the beta topic again, but If you want, I'll beta this for you, also would you like to beta Far future? (I ask since I only just started it, and it would be nice to have a beta early on,) e-mail me if you want
(speedy@newtelsurf.com)

Author's Response: sure!! I\'d love too!!
Date: Dec 27 2006
Title: In Flux Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
well, obviously I've already seen this, :D, but well done anyway
Date: Jan 02 2007
Title: In Flux Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Insane, absolutely insane. Are you ever gonna... uh, you know, get the characters sorted out? I mean, crazyness is good but it is starting to wear a little bit thin...

Author's Response: I\'m sorry I didn\'t send this to you first. Its been really crazy at my house and I was so eager just to get this chapter in, I had to rewrite it from my lap top(there\'s actually a better chapter there, one thats written and way less crazy.) and was functioning with less than an hours sleep and a lot of sugar. I\'ll try and sort it out, again, I\'m really sorry. We\'ve had exams all week. Sorry :(
Date: Jan 25 2007
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Just one thing, "your" is used such as "your cat"
However "Your a liar" Should be "You're" a liar" you are a liar see?
Other than that, I think it's a good take on the nature of some people, who might not be as nice as you think.
(not that I agree with the portrayal of Boromir, grr...)
Just kidding, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your criticizm. My beta reader is currently not online so please excuse the spelling mistakes. I got worried at first about the Boromir thing... eep! I hope you enjoy what\'s to come! xxx
Date: Dec 27 2006
Title: None Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
They are all major overreacters, that's all I can say he

Author's Response: Oh yes. Definetly. Thanks for reviewing! xx
Date: Dec 27 2006