Author's Response: Randomness is what makes things fun! Thank you for reviewing! ^__^
Burzum sounds like one of those British guys that are mickey take ones.
Author's Response: That was my intention!
ooh, exactly 444 words...
Author's Response: Responded to my own review...
*shakes fist* we had zilch in Jersey. Grr...
Nice poem though!
Author's Response: Eep! Please don\'t hurt me! *cowers for a moment then re-appears cautiously*. Thanks so much! I\'m glad you liked it. Excuse, my hyper behaviour today. xxx
Author's Response: Indeed. XD Thanks - glad you enjoyed it. :)
*claps* very good
Author's Response: Hi Shadow Ranger, thanks very much !!
Paragraphing is a must, everytime a new person speaks, make a new line fore it.
male elfs should be male elf's
"Replied" instead of "sad back"
we'ev should be we've
3 looks better as three, in fact, any numbers except ages and times (11 o' clock) should be in full text form (if someone is speaking use, "he is thirty" rather than "he is 30"
"along" is two words.
In Legolas' "Please Wintir," line, drop either the first or second please.
Wintir's next line seems somewhat aimless, there needs to be something else there.
"minuets" should be "minutes.
"proundly" should, I think be "proudly"
"wierd" should be "weird"
Legola should have an s on the end.
finally, I don't understand the neccessity for two "END FLASHBACK"s
This story needs some work I'm afraid, however, it's an intruiging plotline, keep working at it.
Author's Response: Okay. Everything is fixed.(Hopefully) And Thank you.
Author's Response: *Gasps* I BURNT myself on that laminator you know!
6. Get Shadow Ranger to write a demeaning and annoying story about them, featuring many snide comments and rejected love interests, as well as consistent MaS bashing from the main characters.
Author's Response: How true. Thanks for the review.
Rather soppy but I like it. Well done *wide eyes* ;)
Author's Response: Soppy? I DID say it contained fluff...uh...didn\'t I? Anyways, second chapter will be VERY graphic :D Don\'t do the wide eyed thing! lol
Aw... nice (although somewhat odd) birthday present. Thank you.
P.S: For the use of confused reader: I am a guy. Contemplate sexuality. Then consider the slightly less obvious option. you have your answer for why I would like this fic ;)
Author's Response: Come on Shadow, this is me! A normal birthday present? What\'s that? ;) *Huggles* No problems, sorry it\'s a bit late!