Lol... Legolas' is funny... Heh you are not being nice to my friend... :) Try doing one with Sauron... only don't stress the eyedrops lol. Too many people do... it gets boring reading about eyedrops. :) Please update soon, I like these!
Lol... I like Frodo's best so far... nice creativity good job.
lol... :) nice work.
Wow... love the sarcasm there. :) I can really imagine this being a disney movie... but they can't have little kids crying over boromir can they? Or telling their parents they are good but corrupted by da media? Lol excellent work... can't wait to read more. :)
Very well written, I can relate completely. I have friends but my best one just went off the wrong path. Trying to help her back is difficult. :) I love this... I'm adding it to my favorites. Great job.
I should write in school more...:)
Author's Response: I am really...honoured that you would add this to your favourites, because I wrote it in school and never really saw much in it. But thank you very much indeed everyone for proving me wrong!
Ooh...it would be cool if it was someone for the fellowship. But from the summary I wouldn't guess so... Can't wait, please update soon!
Author's Response: I\'m already working out ideas for the chapters. thanks for the review. and about the fellowship thing...well..you\'ll have to wait and see.
Yay... since you are eternally grateful... hmm... clean my room! bwah ha ha...
Just kidding. :) Nice chapter, I'm glad Aragorn, Legolas, and Gandalf are here... can't wait 'til you update!
Author's Response: I\'ll update today probably. thanks for the review
I need more... in order to be hooked to this story. I have a feeling I will like it, but I have learned from experience that FIRST CHAPTER MUST BE LONG!!! Try to make them at least 1500 words.
I will beta you if you like, I don't know if you making spelling and grammar mistakes a lot, the piece is fairly small to judge.
Please update or contact me, I'm thirteen as well. I am anxious to read more and see how this unfolds, maybe try editing it so others will think so too. This is not meant to be an insult, just trying to help. :) Good luck!