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a gorgeous story and it ended perfectly too well done xxx
this is really good please update
this is a beautiful story
is there a sequel
this is cool
is there going to be more please
that is a beautiful story
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ve seen you\'ve been cheking out my stories, I\'m glad you liked them. :)
nice story
r u going to continue it
Author's Response: I believe that I am going to begin the 2nd in this series where this one left off. I have been editing it over on another site and am really getting back into it.
i thought this fic was actually quite good, well done
the ending was nice
I first read this years ago and just found it again. just about the best(and longest) love scene ever. well we can all daydream we could wake up to that!!
i loved this story its really cute update soon xx elfenearsxx
update soon its really good
Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, the new chapter is done, just needs some touch up and it will be up soon. Thanks for your pacience! :D
they finally got around to it, and wow is all i can say. it was really well written and beautiful. keep up the great work
Author's Response: Thank you! I was really concerned about this chapter, I wanted it to be as good as possible, so I\'m very happy and relieved to see that people liked it. Thanks again! :D
even more beautifully written loving, great work, its a lovely dynamic between the two. keep up the great work and update soon
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I\'ll try to update as soon as possible. ;)
great chapter, i love how you described wynters reaction to her father and how orlando brought her back.
i love this story, keep up the good work xx
Author's Response: Thank you! I was very concerned as to how the chapter would turn out, and worked my way around it for a long time, so I'm glad you liked it. :D
aww that was really lovely and well described. i loved starr's reaction. thanks for writing
Author's Response: Thanks!! I toyed with this chapter for a long time until it sort of wrote itself a few days ago. :) As for Starr's reaction... well, she always wants the best for her sister, and she obviously thinks Orlando is exactly that. :P Thanks again!
wow that was a really great chapter, some really well written dialogue between the characters, i was playing it all out in my head as i was reading. thanks for writing keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a difficult chapter to write because of its intensity, so I'm very glad to know you liked it so much. :D
wow, very intense chapter and very well written. it was very realistic i could see it happening as it went along, especially the instant feeling of betrayal before thinking about the reasons.
thanks very much for writing and posting this, i hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, elfenears! This kind of chapter is never very easy to write, and I'm always anxious wondering how they turn out, what the readers think of them. I hope to have more done soon, I hope to have the time to do it.
Thanks again! :)
Brilliant end to an amazing story well done indeed. you write and describe emotions and family really well!! looking forward to any other orlando story of yours!!!
this was an ace story
i love how you portrayed the freindship between them all
this was an ace story
i love how you portrayed the freindship between them all
this was such a nice story sequel please