I really like the start of your story. Please update it soon.
very interesting I am enjoying reading this van't wait for Sirius to come into the picture he was always one of my favotites. Please update soon!
lol I love reading your stories they always make me laugh :) keep up the good work.
lol really amusing :)
omg the last one was the best. Poor Elrond
lol very amusing just imagning the look on their faces had me laughing so hard. However the one dance you don't have on here that I would definatly being doing is the time warp :)
noo please update soon. I really like the way your writing the story and the fact that she is having real emotional reactions to her situations.. she has flaws which is really nice to see in a tenth walker. Please write more I want to see where you go with this.
omg i actually burst out laughing at the end of that Gimli's statement by far was the best although legolas's ideas were very amusing especially the hobbits giving up food.. right like that will ever happen.
Please update soon I'm really enjoying reading this story. Whats goiing to happen when they find out what she is...please continue soon.
awww that was really cute. I really enjoyed reading it and it brought a smile to my face.
I am enjoying this story so far please continue I love her attitude. Poor Elladan but where's Elrohir hope we get to meet him soon :)
I once again enyoyed reading your story. I'm so happy you decided to let Elrohir come :) looking forward to the next chapters.
This storyI is absolutly brilliant i love it. Arwen is so cute her crush on Glorfindel is so adorable and adolescent in it's context and what she believes will happen. I really like the way you write her thoughts you can still tell she's a child but she wants to be grown up. Hope you add more especially about her time in Lothlorien and possibly when she meets Aragorn.
Author's Response: I'm planning to continue into her life, through the War of the Ring, and afterwards. I don't know how many 'entries' this will take, but I plan to chronicle all of Arwen's life. I'm thinking that she might misplace the diary for about 1,000 years or so, then find it again.
Denise Harlow has had a dark life. Being hit by a car, and sent into the hospital was just like adding fuel to the fire. She finds herself having to learn the simplest tasks again, like walking. But when she gets to know a stranger that she met completely by chance, she begins to figure out what love is. Not Romance; love. Something much, much stronger and if given a chance, will last forever.
Please read! I am no good at writing summaries, lol!
Good start please update soon I want to see what becomes of this chance meeting. I like the way you write it has a kind of poetic feel to it.
Author's Response: Oh, my first review! Thank you so much for your kind words! I will certainly update soon...probably tomorrow. I think you will like what is to come. Thanks!
aww he's so cute..I can't wait to see the next one. he better be coming back to visit her lol XD
Author's Response: Lol...thanks for your review! Mwahaha! Don't worry, I know exactly what is going to happen next...lol. Thanks again, and take care!
lol very weird but yet amusing at the same time. well done I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you think it’s weird (and amusing)! I hope I’ll get around to finishing the next chapter soon, but with homework to deal with, only the Valar know. : )
I'm assuming this is after the quest seeing as there is no Boromir and a female elf not to mention they were all together in Rohan before they appeared in her living room. But there is one problem I have found with this if it was after the quest then why was Aragorn worried about his real name being known seeing as when he was crowned it became common knowledge. Also your writing seems a little rushed take some time to go into details. Also the way she reacted to people being in the middle of her living room was a little mary sueish most people even ones in love with the books like all of us here would be a little alarmed not to mention freaked out to see random men in our living romms however after i'm pretty sure that would be like the coolest thing to ever happen. Also the fact that middle-earthians themselves weren't more alarmed to find themselves somewhere strange was also a little unbelievable. However that being said I will continue to read this to see what happens. Please don't take this the wrong way i'm really not trying to critcise you I only told you what I thought for you to take into consideration if you want and to help you imrpove your writing.
Author's Response: Thanks. This is way after the quest. Oh and the Fellowship plus Arowen appeared in a deferent universe. They had no idea that there was a book about them and with that Aragorn wouldn't know if the person knew his real name or not. In Suki's universe the Fellowship and all the other Lord of the Ring characters are just characters in the book...more onthat later. I will use more details in future chapters. I am also going to have a chapter for both the LOTR characters and Suki to freak out but they are in a way in shock of the whole ordeal. I really appreciate your advise and thanks again, MorGwir.