Reviews by Scribetothehighking
Summary: An off topic poem about entering another world.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118 Read Count: 1307
Published: 09/09/08 Updated: 09/09/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Who is that man? Tolkien or Gandalf?

Very nice poem... please continue with more

Author's Response: Aaah, that is the mystery of the man! thank you for reviewing!
Date: 26/09/08
Summary: Legolas and Arwen have been friends since infancy. They discuss thoughts and fears under a moonlit sky.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen
Genres: General
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 866 Read Count: 2358
Published: 17/09/08 Updated: 01/11/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
You have a gift for poetry... The way you describe the characters and their mood is poetical, almost a lyrical.

Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, i absolutley love writing so comments like this is really really appreciated! thank you!
Date: 26/09/08
Musings by Shadow Maiden Rated: G [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Thoughts that run through my head upon different aspects of life and the realm apart.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Gandalf / Olorin, Legolas
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 808 Read Count: 9894
Published: 20/09/08 Updated: 01/12/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Musings Upon an Autumn's Day Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Wow, for poetry you do have a lyrical approach to it... and I could almost feel the wind and hear the bees.

You are expressive and paint a vivid image that sticks to the reader.

The end was appropiate with the whole of the composition.

Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Scribe. It means a lot to me. I managed to just do that last night. It was magical when I just sat at my computer and the words just flowed out. I added a chapter, so please read (and review).
Date: 20/09/08
Title: Chapter 4: Whispers of Thranduilon Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Is this Legolas speaking?

Very good work... and nice use of the elvish tongue.

I like the feel of closeness between the reader and the speaker.

Author's Response: Yes, Legolas is speaking. And I feel really close to Legolas. I imagine that if I ever met him, that we'd be the best of friends. Hey, I said that I thought you were Legolas and look where we are now! Thanks for reading. (I knew to check reviews because I'm online right now and I saw you were logged in.) Thanks mellon-nin!
Date: 22/09/08
Summary: The top 5 most annoying things for characters from LOTR.
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Balrog, Boromir, Elrond, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, The Fellowship
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: Parodies
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 632 Read Count: 20882
Published: 24/09/08 Updated: 11/01/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Five Ways to Annoy Legolas Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
L O L
Yep, I can also hear his cries of horror....

Author's Response: ditto! :) Sarah 50 bottles of Miruvor....etc!
Date: 24/09/08
Summary: Two ringwraiths and an orc try to make Minas Morgul look more… evil. It's not easy.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Nazgūl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Sauron, Witch King
Genres: Humor
Warnings: First Draft, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1028 Read Count: 1544
Published: 26/09/08 Updated: 26/09/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
LOL That was hilarious and very good written.

You have a talent for this comedic stuff... keep it up
Date: 05/11/08
Summary: As Legolas flees from the orcs that killed his patrol, he stumbles onto a cave that drops him into the land of Narnia. What is his purpose here, and why does the White Witch want him so badly? Can he stand against her magic? Narnia/LOTRs crossover.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39965 Read Count: 12030
Published: 11/10/08 Updated: 05/11/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: The Meeting of Worlds Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
This fits perfectly with what is happening in the Story.

I like the way you describe the mood of the characters and the overall feeling of the situation.

KEEP IT UP!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouraging review. It's means so much to hear that you're enjoying this. I'm posting the next chapter tomorrow... *looks at clock* err... today sometime. Blessings! ~Ila
Date: 16/10/08
Title: Chapter 5: Rescue Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
You research for this story? Props to you... it reflects on your writing devotion.

Enjoyed this chapter and wonder what will Aslan do...

(just one thing though... Aslan is the son of the Emperor-beyond-the-Sea, whom I believe to be Eru in Tolkien's Ea. Who is Aslan then? I know I am jumping ahead..)

Author's Response: Thanks! This story meant a lot to me - especially as it progressed - and I tried to put a lot of time into it. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! And your question will be answered in chapter six. :) Thank you so much for the review! ~Ila
Date: 20/10/08
Title: Chapter 1: Failures Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Wow... this idea is very original.
Please, keep posting.

So Jadis was a Maiar.

Author's Response: Hey... glad you like it. I'll keep posting every other day or so. Thanks for the review! ~Ila
Date: 13/10/08
Title: Chapter 9: A Matter of Trust Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Once again, you keep the reader's attention.

And yes... it would be excellent to bring Aragorn into the Prince Caspian story.

Blessings for you!

Author's Response: *cheers* Yay! I'm thrilled you think Aragorn would be a good choice! I've never wrote him before, and I think he'll be fun. :D Anyway, thanks so much for the review! Blessings! ~Ila
Date: 02/11/08
Title: Chapter 6: Many Meetings Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Wow... that was beautiful and I like the bit where Aslan says, "That is the name of My Father!" It reflects on the loving obedience that the LION has for his FATHER.

Just one thing... and I sincerely hope that you take no offense by it, Why put Aslan on the same level as Eru/Emperor when others and himself acknowledge he is but the Son, high in power and authority but subject to the One?

Anyways... keep it up for I truly like it.

Author's Response: I put Aslan on the same lever as His Father because He and His Father are one entity. Jesus is God; thus, Aslan is Eru. I'm not sure if you're a Christian or not, but as I said in the end chapter notes, I'm basing that bit of information on the Bible. And I definitely do not take offense. Feel free to critique and ask any questions you like. :) Thanks so much for the review! You don't know how much it encourages me to hear from you! Blessings! ~Ila I John 5:7
Date: 23/10/08
Title: Chapter 8: Fallen Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Dear Ila: That was just beautiful... and the way that you tie Legolas into the story is just genius

KEEP IT UP!!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! That was a tricky chapter to write, and I'm glad it turned out. Thanks for the review! Blessings! ~Ila
Date: 29/10/08
Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
One more reason for putting you and this story in my favorite list.

WELL DONE!!!

Author's Response: aw... thanks! I've really appreciated hearing from you. You've made this experience worth every single frustrating mental block. ;) Thank you so much! ~Ila
Date: 05/11/08
Summary: just my feelings on alot of random stuff.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168 Read Count: 1323
Published: 29/10/08 Updated: 29/10/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
as for point number one, I do not think that abortion is NEVER an option... if you cannot or do not want to support the child, then give it up for adoption as there are many couples wanting a child.

The other three points are just very good and I agree with them too.
Date: 30/10/08
Somewhere by Shadow Maiden Rated: G Round robin [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Somewhere, oh, they have to exist.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 228 Read Count: 1480
Published: 08/11/08 Updated: 08/11/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
I bet that they do exist... and that they are as alive as we are right now.

Great work... it expresses what many of us hope for

Author's Response: I'm glad I can put into words what others hope. It makes me feel really good. :))
Date: 09/11/08
Unbelievable by Elandili Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What comes into your mind when I say ‘Unbelievable’? Magic, enchantments? That’s certainly what I thought, but that was until I was ‘accidentally’ transported to Middle-Earth by my book. You might think this book is special, but I don’t. It only causes chaos!
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4767 Read Count: 5325
Published: 17/11/08 Updated: 21/12/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Book of Mysteries Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
you have a nice premise set up at the beginning... keep it up for I am intrigued

Author's Response: Wow. thank you. Still doin chapter five, keep in touch. :)
Date: 21/11/08
Summary: DwarfFic: Fili and Kili receive a letter from Thorin telling them about his plan to reclaim the dwarf halls from Smaug.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 848 Read Count: 1229
Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Day it All Began Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Very good idea... the gathering of the Company BEFORE they went after Smaug.

Will you post more? Please, do so.

Author's Response: I don't think I'll extend this fic any further, but I would like to write more about the dwarves. I've just got to finish my Discworld project first!
Date: 18/11/08
Summary: In praise of the One who is father of all. Definite Christian overtones, so it's not for everyone.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eru / Iluvatar
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 1584
Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: To Eru Iluvatar Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Finally, someone who writes a beautiful piece dedicated to the One.

Beautiful!! Keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. I'm glad you liked my piece.
Date: 18/11/08
Summary: An essay. Varda kindled the stars and set them into patterns. Many of these stars the Professor named in Elvish, but which real-life stars was he referring to?
[cat] Genres: Non-fiction

Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2720 Read Count: 1980
Published: 11/12/08 Updated: 11/12/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Wow... that was well researched... its an essay but told in readable form for those of us that love the relation between Arda and our own world

Author's Response: It was – gasp – readable? Yay! The research was interesting; ever since I’ve been much more intimate with my HoME and Silm. Thanks!
Date: 28/01/09
Summary: In other words, Silent Night, Holy Night in Quenya!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108 Read Count: 1542
Published: 21/12/08 Updated: 21/12/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Scribetothehighking Signed
Though I dont celebrate Christmas, I find it beautiful that you dedicated time to translate it into the Elven tongue...

and that is truly moving!

Author's Response: Well . . . I didn't do it personally. I'm trying to find out who wrote it so I can give them the credit. Fixing things now. It's really good to hear from you!
Date: 22/12/08