Excellent job! I really want to hear more. Poor Tolkien. Favorite line: "Is that the Mouth of Sauron? He looks so evil."
Author's Response: Thank you!! Tolkien will be even more aghast at the fan fiction!
I've only seen Fullmetal twice, so I know hardly anything about it. Still, your story is compelling. Please write more!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. And the next update will be soon. :)
Hey, that's pretty good for your first try. Nice job. Can't wait to hear more. ^-^ Just one nitpick- try adding paragraphs in the bottom part of the story. It makes it easier to read, and it looks nicer too.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. I\'m not very good with html formatting yet so I\'ll try to make the layout better for the next chapter.
xD I love Monty Python! "We are no longer the Knights who say Ni. We are now the Knights who say icki icki pitang zoom boing!"
Author's Response: Yeah, Monty Python rules! Thank you for reviewing! ^__^