Reviews by Nazgrrl
Summary: What-If?" Series. What if that troll stepped a little harder on Aragorn during the battle before the Black Gates? Would it have changed the outcome if the man couldnā€™t rise quickly? What if something happened to Legolas while he tried to reach the soon-to-be King, he Was rather preoccupied...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Elrond, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3471 Read Count: 1824
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Crushed and Slashed Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
That is such a sweet story!
Date: Dec 03 2007
Summary: Aragorn thinks about his love for Arwen
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Romance, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39 Read Count: 3945
Published: Oct 20 2004 Updated: Oct 20 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: ...And I love you Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Nice. I like the short lines, and it really has some nice connotative meanings that come attached with your word choice.

A very enjoyable poem!
NZ
Date: Dec 27 2007
Ad Sum by Dwimordene Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The aftermath of the Battle of Pelennor, from a very humble perspective...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character, Aragorn
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1261 Read Count: 2266
Published: Feb 22 2005 Updated: Feb 22 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Ad Sum Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Hmmm. That was a though-provoking monologue.

I like your use of the Latin in the title "adsum" - I am near. Clever.

NZ

Author's Response: Dear Nazgrrl,\r\n\r\nThanks for your review! I\'m glad you enjoyed it and that the Latin went over well. Take care, and happy reading!\r\n\r\nDwim
Date: Feb 18 2008
Summary: Estel and Legolas come home and renew their mischevious ways
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Erestor
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2006 Read Count: 1684
Published: May 25 2005 Updated: May 25 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Day Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
;D
Date: Dec 04 2007
Small Tales by White Wolf Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This is a collection of drabbles. There's a more detailed explanation inside.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1690 Read Count: 5048
Published: Oct 18 2005 Updated: Dec 22 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Guilt: Legolas's POV Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I love this! You have got the perfect tone for short stories!! 'Course, you can't really say much about my review, 'cause I write mostly poetry! ;-)

Keep it up!
Date: Nov 27 2007
Summary: Gimli goes to Aman with Legolas. The Elves, naturally, do not approve of this state of affairs.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Other
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618 Read Count: 1718
Published: Dec 21 2005 Updated: Dec 21 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gimli Goes To Aman Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
hehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehheheh


Breathe

**gasp**
Breath
**gasp**
WOOHOOOOOO!!!!

YEEEHAAAA!

**Sighs**

Okay, now that I've gotten that out of my system, I really like Galadriel!

"Because I SAY SO!!!!!!!!!!!"
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

You're story creates an interesting view of Gimli's reception.

Of Course, I'm probably biased! ;-)
NZS
Date: Dec 03 2007
Summary: I FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!! What if Galadriel had failed the test and accepted the Ring when Frodo offered it to her? Totally OOC and goofy and random
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Galadriel, Other, Sam, Sauron
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1422 Read Count: 5887
Published: Jan 09 2006 Updated: Oct 17 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: The Questors Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Very Enjoyable!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: Jun 22 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Intro Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I just realized that I named my poem the same name as yours. Whoops! and Forgiveness?

SMN

Author's Response: Doesn\'t matter. I\'m sure there are many stories on here with the same name, that doesn\'t make it copying or anything.
Date: Nov 25 2007
Title: Chapter 4: The Questors Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
heehee! I like how you always seem to portray Galadriel as completely wacky!
There are some spelling mistakes ; Stars. rather than starts, et cetera. Besides that, it was great. Of Course, I'm probably biased ;-)
Date: Dec 06 2007
The Black Breath by Pip4, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 12]
Summary: This is an AU of what might have happened if Nob hadn't come across Merry on the Road in Bree when he had that run-in with the Nazgul
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Merry, Nazgūl, Pippin, Sam, Witch King
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9903 Read Count: 8895
Published: Jan 21 2006 Updated: Jan 17 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: We cannot fail Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I like it!
A very interesting might-have-been.
Date: Nov 27 2007
Title: Chapter 7: Rescue Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
A few spelling/grammar mistakes:

In fact Sam if Sam . . .

It is KNEW, not new.

Other than that, you have some interesting plot lines in this story.

Keep it up!

NZ

Author's Response: Thanks, for both the review and the mention of the grammar mistakes. I got them change and I\'ll replace the chapter.
Date: Jan 17 2008
Corridor of Fate by Iris Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Okay, we all know how much trouble the twins can get themselves into, along with Estel and Legolas, but these are some pictures to put the faces to.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrohir, Elladan
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 612 Read Count: 1321
Published: Feb 04 2006 Updated: Feb 04 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Peaceful Day in Rivendell Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
You should get yourself a beta. I counted at least two spelling mistakes - Elohir, comliment.

Other than that, I like the sound-bite!
Date: Dec 03 2007
Summary: When Elrohir plays a prank on Elladan by telling what he believes is a harmless little white lie, will it be Legolas who pays the price?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Elrohir, Elladan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5432 Read Count: 3297
Published: Feb 11 2006 Updated: Feb 16 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I like this pre-Ring story!
Date: Dec 03 2007
Summary: Complete! Aragorn loves his Ice Cream. But when the Terrible Trio arrives in Minas Tirith with an evil plot to steal the imperial Ice Cream, will he survive?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: Obsessions
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3153 Read Count: 7604
Published: May 05 2006 Updated: Oct 31 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Grin

Author's Response: Grin
Date: Nov 21 2007
Arahfen by Eruwaedhiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: They took from her her family and her home. Overtaken with insanity, she saught vengence by killing the "king," but did not succeed. She was doomed to die a traitor, so they thought...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2877 Read Count: 3738
Published: May 29 2006 Updated: Jul 11 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painful Losses Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Please write more!

This is a very interesting pseudo-10th walker story.
NZ
Date: Jan 21 2008
Summary: A poem about Hobbits
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36 Read Count: 1838
Published: Sep 05 2006 Updated: Sep 05 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I like the structure of your poem. Was the choppy line in the middle " although small" supposed to be leading to the next poetical phrase?

Author's Response: Yes, the line \"although small\" is supposed to lead to the next line. Thank-you for the review!
Date: Nov 27 2007
Summary: A funny story including: blond hairs, tweezers, a dwarf, and an elf. Enjoy, and don't forget to review!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1013 Read Count: 1970
Published: Sep 20 2006 Updated: Sep 20 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
A very funny story! You know, you might want to do a sequel! ( If you already have, then I haven't read it )

Author's Response: A sequel is a wonderful idea! And, actually, at the moment, I'm in a writing mood...let's see what happens! Thanks so much for the kind review! ~God bless
Date: Nov 21 2007
Broken Spirit by Sivan Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 47]
Summary: Princeling Legolas disobeys his father. The punishment leads to an incident no one expected. Would the Peredhil saved the day?

Broken Spirit Nominee
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Horror, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39167 Read Count: 40041
Published: Sep 24 2006 Updated: Jul 07 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
The guard and I not "Me and the guard."
Date: Feb 26 2008
Summary: Frodo has gone to Mordor with his friend, Samwise, but trying to say good-bye at the Grey Havens is not so easy as he thought!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Sam
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185 Read Count: 1430
Published: Sep 25 2006 Updated: Sep 25 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Poetry!!
I like the phrasing of the prose, to make impact better.
Date: Nov 27 2007
Summary: Eowyn's thoughts before riding out for battle. Keep in mind that this is before she meets Faramir. Enjoy, and review!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Angst, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Healed Emotions, Loved Always
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160 Read Count: 1708
Published: Sep 29 2006 Updated: Sep 29 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: My Heart Cries Out Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Poetry!
poetrypoetrypoetrypoetrypoetrypoetryPOETRY!!!!

Sorry, these review might seem a little, well, hyper.

I have no knowledge regarding why, I am perfectly calm. Calm I am calm I am Calm. ** Repeats calming procedure**

Sorry. Anyways, I really enjoy the way you portray Eowyn's almost suicidal thoughts before the battle. It is a really rather enjoyable poem.

Of Course, I'm probably biased.
NZS
Date: Dec 03 2007
Trolls by White Wolf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 55]
Summary: When Legolas and Aragorn are captured by trolls while crossing their territory, the two friends must use all of the skills, cunning and endurance they possess just to survive. Won second place for Best Work-in-Progress in the 2007 MC Fanfiction Awards.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93623 Read Count: 34320
Published: Oct 20 2006 Updated: Oct 31 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
image, not imagine

Love this beginning! You have a great storytelling tone!
NZ

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out my error. I corrected it. I\'m glad you like the start of this story and my way of telling a tale. Thanks. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Let me hear from you again.
Date: Jan 17 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
whoops! I forgot to leave a review on the way out!

I love this story! Please write more soon, as I think I might be becoming addicted to it. ( I read the whole thing in two afternoons)

I want to know how this turns out!

Keep it up,
NZ

Author's Response: I\'m very glad that you are loving the story. Well, that\'s a *good* kind of addition. :o) Goodness - two afternoons? Wow. I\'m currently moving, so it will be a while before I can update, but I\'ll keep going as soon as I can so you won\'t have to wait too long.
Date: Jan 29 2008
Summary: Just a short lullaby that somehow looked middle earth-y to me... I made it up lying in bed so don't flame me. XD I had a peaceful, nocturnal Minas Tirith in mind writing it. :)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118 Read Count: 1953
Published: Nov 10 2006 Updated: Nov 10 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I like this! You are certainly correct that it sounds like a ME lullaby.

Could I suggest the name " the world lies grey and wondrous," taken from the text?

It would seem less cheesy than making up an original name, and thus avoid off-putting readers.

NZ
Date: Jan 14 2008
Summary: In the near future, as the Age of Men begins to crumble, the truth is revealed about a long-vanished world that no one, except perhaps a few, even knows existed. MEFA 2008 third-place winner, incomplete AU category.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Gandalf / Olorin, Maglor, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52101 Read Count: 38992
Published: Nov 19 2006 Updated: Aug 06 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 24: Parting Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Wow. This is really getting interesting.
NZ

Author's Response: Thanks. Have you been following the story from the beginning?
Date: Mar 07 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Madness Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Yes I have . . . I have a problem of reading and not reviewing . . . usually what I do is read the all of the story that is posted and then review, but I have been following this for several months now, and it has just escaped my mind.

Keep it up!
NZ

Author's Response: Thank you! I tend to be pretty skimpy on my reviews as well. Anyway, it\'s hard for me to find the words to express my enjoyment for a good story.
Date: Mar 07 2008