That is such a sweet story!
Nice. I like the short lines, and it really has some nice connotative meanings that come attached with your word choice.
A very enjoyable poem!
Hmmm. That was a though-provoking monologue.
I like your use of the Latin in the title "adsum" - I am near. Clever.
Author's Response: Dear Nazgrrl,\r\n\r\nThanks for your review! I\'m glad you enjoyed it and that the Latin went over well. Take care, and happy reading!\r\n\r\nDwim
I love this! You have got the perfect tone for short stories!! 'Course, you can't really say much about my review, 'cause I write mostly poetry! ;-)
Keep it up!
Okay, now that I've gotten that out of my system, I really like Galadriel!
"Because I SAY SO!!!!!!!!!!!"
You're story creates an interesting view of Gimli's reception.
Of Course, I'm probably biased! ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks!
I just realized that I named my poem the same name as yours. Whoops! and Forgiveness?
Author's Response: Doesn\'t matter. I\'m sure there are many stories on here with the same name, that doesn\'t make it copying or anything.
heehee! I like how you always seem to portray Galadriel as completely wacky!
There are some spelling mistakes ; Stars. rather than starts, et cetera. Besides that, it was great. Of Course, I'm probably biased ;-)
I like it!
A very interesting might-have-been.
A few spelling/grammar mistakes:
In fact Sam if Sam . . .
It is KNEW, not new.
Other than that, you have some interesting plot lines in this story.
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks, for both the review and the mention of the grammar mistakes. I got them change and I\'ll replace the chapter.
You should get yourself a beta. I counted at least two spelling mistakes - Elohir, comliment.
Other than that, I like the sound-bite!
I like this pre-Ring story!
Author's Response: Grin
Please write more!
This is a very interesting pseudo-10th walker story.
I like the structure of your poem. Was the choppy line in the middle " although small" supposed to be leading to the next poetical phrase?
Author's Response: Yes, the line \"although small\" is supposed to lead to the next line. Thank-you for the review!
A very funny story! You know, you might want to do a sequel! ( If you already have, then I haven't read it )
Author's Response: A sequel is a wonderful idea! And, actually, at the moment, I'm in a writing mood...let's see what happens! Thanks so much for the kind review! ~God bless
The guard and I not "Me and the guard."
I like the phrasing of the prose, to make impact better.
Sorry, these review might seem a little, well, hyper.
I have no knowledge regarding why, I am perfectly calm. Calm I am calm I am Calm. ** Repeats calming procedure**
Sorry. Anyways, I really enjoy the way you portray Eowyn's almost suicidal thoughts before the battle. It is a really rather enjoyable poem.
Of Course, I'm probably biased.