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Love this beginning! You have a great storytelling tone!
NZ
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out my error. I corrected it. I\'m glad you like the start of this story and my way of telling a tale. Thanks. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Let me hear from you again.
whoops! I forgot to leave a review on the way out!
I love this story! Please write more soon, as I think I might be becoming addicted to it. ( I read the whole thing in two afternoons)
I want to know how this turns out!
Keep it up,
NZ
Author's Response: I\'m very glad that you are loving the story. Well, that\'s a *good* kind of addition. :o) Goodness - two afternoons? Wow. I\'m currently moving, so it will be a while before I can update, but I\'ll keep going as soon as I can so you won\'t have to wait too long.
I like this! You are certainly correct that it sounds like a ME lullaby.
Could I suggest the name " the world lies grey and wondrous," taken from the text?
It would seem less cheesy than making up an original name, and thus avoid off-putting readers.
NZ
Wow. This is really getting interesting.
NZ
Author's Response: Thanks. Have you been following the story from the beginning?
Yes I have . . . I have a problem of reading and not reviewing . . . usually what I do is read the all of the story that is posted and then review, but I have been following this for several months now, and it has just escaped my mind.
Keep it up!
NZ
Author's Response: Thank you! I tend to be pretty skimpy on my reviews as well. Anyway, it\'s hard for me to find the words to express my enjoyment for a good story.
Uggh!
I'm horrified by the first page! I can't read it. But yet ** change in voice** it is prreeciiiooouuuuusssssssssssss to me.
** Cackles** You certainly write a good horror story.
NZ
Cringes.
Aragorn in tights with a Southern Drawl?
Arwen in a miniskirt?
Oh! the horror!
NZ
Author's Response: There are other ways to horrify people besides gory fics...glad I\'m doing a good job of it.
Yes! I like it alot. The two-to-three words per line makes a wonderful, surreal feeling, almost like a flash of understanding that fades quickly.
NZ
Author's Response: Yeah, I love writing simple yet powerful images in my poems. thanx for the rerview!
True! True! An accurate portrayal!
Author's Response: Heh. Yes, it certainly is lovely this time of year, isn\'t it?
I still marvel at the fact that you can write completely wacky humour AND really sappy angst at the same time!!!
SMEE/NZ
Author's Response: Of course, you\'re probably biased. :D\r\n\r\n~Faramir\'s Eloped Daughter
The short and choppy sentences are such an effective way to show us Shadowfax's feelings! I loved it! Oh, and by-the-by, how did the Orcs survive the fall of Sauron in the first place? That would be an interesting story.
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Yay, you finally um...did something! Great to see you. I don\'t know how they survived, but pretty much all authors have orcs all over the place post WR.
I don't remember how many times I've read this, but every time I've really enjoyed the sentence variance. Of Course, I' just biased ;-)
Author's Response: lol.
You do a great job conveying emotions. Of course, I'm probably biased ;-)
Author's Response: Probably.
I love this poem every time I read it!
NZ
As I have **Still** not read the Silmarillion, I cannot appreciate this as much as I should like.
However, I think you are a very talented writer, so keep up the good work!!
NZ/SMEE!
**Still** meaning that the book has disappeared under mysterious circumstances
Author's Response: Hi again, Nazgrrl!\r\n\r\nNo, I have not died. No, I am not ignoring you. Yes, I do appreciate your reviews. Alas, a great evil befell me. It had to do with my hard drive making this little \"kaput!\" noise and disappearing in a puff of shiny smoke. (Not literally, of course.) I\'m sorry I didn\'t answer before.Thank you for reviewing.\r\n\r\nI extend my condolences that you haven\'t gotten to read the Silmarillion yet. You have been deprived. (And I may be being a little melodramatic, but I\'m definitely *not* being sarcastic.) I\'ve lost my copy of the Silmarillion, too, and I suspect I\'ve put it in a very safe place where I can never lose it, and promptly forgot about it. This happens periodically. I love the stories in the Silmarillion. It\'s not the sort of book that I sit down and read from start to finish, but I read jump back and forth at different times, seeing how all the threads weave together. Tolkien was terrific at world-building. Of course, he spent 50 yrs. or so at it, so I\'m not surprised. I did my best here with Maedhros (and I\'m glad you seemed to like this), but I know that I am not ready to do the Silmarillion justice. There is so much depth there! You can read it and read it and still not get it all. Occasionally, I run across a fanfic I think does it justice, but rarely (I\'m afraid I have a *very* exacting standard).\r\n\r\nHere\'s hoping you still remember what this is about! :)\r\n~Still Anonymous
Oh, I love this.
You have the perfect voice for telling a story like this, and the AU is not overpowering.
SMEE
Author's Response: Thank you Smee! Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!\r\n\r\n~~~~{~@
I like it!
You used the word "except" when it should have been "accept."
Beside that, it was great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I will be sure to change the mistake. ~God bless
Reminds me of " Of the High Elves" You should read it. It's good *
* Shameless put up for reviewer's poem
Author's Response: Heh. Have done so. This poem has actually been completely revised from what you see here, so if I ever get around to making the changes, you should read it again.*\r\n\r\n*Shameless put up for author\'s poem
Unfortunately, I cannot enjoy the rhyming scheme nearly as much as I ought as I currently have the "john Wellington Wells" song by Gilbert stuck in my head. Anyways, I'm loving this!
Author's Response: I know, Gilbert and Sullivan are so terribly catchy . . . the whole time I was writing this I had the Mikado\'s song stuck in my head. Thanks for the reviews!