Penname: Nazgrrl [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 28/01/07
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I'm going now. And I don't know if I shall come back.
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Elf Ruler, a parody by Ria Rated: PG [Reviews - 11]
Summary: This is a parody of the Mikado, inspired by Took the Took's "LotR: the Musical Parody" challenge, with necessary violence to Canon. The story of Beren and Luthien as perfomed by the Numenorean Light Opera company.
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Beren, Celegorm, Finrod, Lúthien Tinúviel, Maglor, Sauron, Thingol
Genres: Drama, Humor, Parody, Poetry
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Challenges: Steal A Plot!
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10083 Read Count: 16859
[Report This] Published: 01/04/07 Updated: 15/06/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Scene III

I love "they'd none of them be missed"

Summary: Glorfindel the cannibalistic taxidermist in the style of William Carlos Williams. Created with this poem generator on the generator blog. I decided to fill in the blanks for Glorfindel the taxidermist after "Stuffed Melpomaen".
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Glorfindel, Melpomaen
Genres: Horror, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: Glorfindel The Taxidermist
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34 Read Count: 1578
[Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 23/04/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: This Is Just To Say...

You know, I've never really understood that poem, why it is called a poem, or anything else about William- whats his name. Anyways, I greatly prefer yours to the original, so I guess it comes out alright in the end.

Author's Response: *laughs* You prefer mine to the original? I think that\'s one of the best compliments I\'ve ever heard. Thanks, Nazgrrl, and thanks also for the lovely review.

Summary: A young maiden's thoughts of the Prince of Eryn Lasgalen, and the Prince's thoughts of the maiden.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Legolas
Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4191 Read Count: 4754
[Report This] Published: 02/05/07 Updated: 27/11/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: What Of Me?

Intriguing, though at the last update, I would think that you are getting into more of a PG/PG-13 rating.

Oh well, that's me being nit-picky again.

I like the way you write the monologue from 2 points of view.

~Nazgrrl

Summary: Gollum, Pippin, and Big Bill take a motorcycle trip across America.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Bilbo, Pippin, Sméagol
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 327 Read Count: 1647
[Report This] Published: 18/05/07 Updated: 18/05/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Where are we?

;)

Yay you! I love it when a brother/sister stands up and declares their faith! It is certainly encouraging to find a.) a Christain and b.) a Boy Scout on this site.

Keep up the cute & humurous work.

SMEE

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the reveiw!

Mary Sue Mayhem by Zoso22 Rated: PG [Reviews - 6]
Summary: When Mary Sue is invited to Lord of the Rings summer camp, she gladly accepts. Little does she know she's in for a summer of mystery, magic, secrets, self esteem issues, challenges, identity crisis, new friends, new enemies, romance, rule breaking, adventure, misunderstandings and plenty of mayhem. Mary Sue will soon learn that not all things are as they seem.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Boromir, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden
Genres: General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3658 Read Count: 8416
[Report This] Published: 14/06/07 Updated: 18/08/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Envelope

I envy Mary Sue! A LotR summer camp? Lucky! ** pushes jaw shut**

Summary: The death of Huan, the Hound of Valinor, as seen through his eyes.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Beren, Huan
Genres: Angst, Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 900 Read Count: 3153
[Report This] Published: 08/07/07 Updated: 08/07/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: "They Are Called Man's Best Friend"

Regrettably, I have not completely read the Silmarillion. . . . . Anyway, I like monologue, monologues are (almost) always good.
~NZ

Author's Response: Hi, Nazgrrl. Heh. I like your penname. The Silmarillion is great! It was a little hard for me to get into some parts of it at first, but now I\'m enjoying the Lay of Leithian and am confirmed as a crazed fan (as if you couldn\'t tell). ;) I read some good fanfiction that helped me get some of the characters and events straight in my head. That made it a lot easier to appreciate. Thank you, I\'m glad you enjoyed my story. ~Still Anonymous

Summary: A young hobbit named Deralyn, neice of Meriadoc Brandybuck, is heart torn when her uncle is called back to fight for Rohan. Not only Merry, but Pippin also for Gondor. Everyone thought the wars were over, and cannot figure out why the orcs have come back to destroy. They gave them land and everything. Merry promises to return in eight years, at most. Nine years pass, and Deralyn will wait no longer. She follows after her uncle and finds herself plunged into a war that no one knew was possible.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Butterbur, Faramir Took, Frodo, Frodo Gamgee, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Goldilocks Gamgee, Legolas, Merry, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Pippin, Rosie, Sam, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7182 Read Count: 14601
[Report This] Published: 24/07/07 Updated: 07/02/08
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Cool

Among the Great by Merry Rated: G [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The story of the last days of Merry and Pippin
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Merry
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6353 Read Count: 5444
[Report This] Published: 06/09/07 Updated: 16/02/08
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this; a bittersweet, view of what might have happened to Merry and Pip.

Keep it up!
NZ

Author's Response: Thank-you for reviewing! I am glad you like it!

Summary: What will a hobbit do for mushrooms? Or perhaps the question should be, what will they not do?
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Farmer Maggot, Frodo, Merry, Pippin
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 737 Read Count: 1480
[Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 13/10/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

teehee!

All That Is Gold by Ria Rated: G [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Bilbo faces another dragon . . . with the help of a new friend.

Winner of the 2nd place in the Teitho Challenge.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Bilbo, Lobelia Sackville-Baggins
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Not Another Elf Fic
Series: "Become who you were meant to be"
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1811 Read Count: 1935
[Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very Enjoyable! I like the POV from Bilbo, very hobbitish!

Author's Response: Thank you. I identify very much with a hero who stops to think about food in the midst of his adventures.

Summary: Just as the title says
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Actor Fics
Characters: Arwen
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30 Read Count: 3194
[Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 18/10/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Reasons I Hate Arwen

Really, this is a very movie-versish critique, as in the books, it is Glorfindel who finds the Fellowship, and I don't believe Tolkein ever says that Arwen does or doesn't look good in green.

Also, I don't think Elrond ever adopted Aragorn, but I could be wrong on that point.

Anyways, I agree that the Arwen in the movie isn't very good.

Author's Response: You have no idea how many times i\'ve been told that. Thanx for the review and i\'m glad you agree on the Movie-Arwen point. Thanks again - Li

Elfsong by Celestial Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: ...
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76 Read Count: 1569
[Report This] Published: 29/10/07 Updated: 29/10/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I love this. Your poems capture an elvish essence that really explain Lorien.

I have also done a poem about Lorien, but focusing on the Mirror.

Would you care to write a poem about Galadriel's Mirror after she departs for Valinor? I would love to read it.

NZ

Author's Response:

Chains by Gemini_Elf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Aragorn, Elladan and Elrohir are captured by slave traders. The ties and friendships forged between Imladris and Mirkwood are strengthened, as Libren, Rethan, Legolas, Niphredil and Glorfindel ride to the rescue
Note: Sequel of The Black Rose
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21864 Read Count: 14766
[Report This] Published: 30/10/07 Updated: 01/07/08
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: 10. Slave and Gloríon

Sigh. Okay, I just finished archive-binging on this and "the Black Rose." I have a few thoughts, if you want to hear them.

In "Black Rose" and "Chains" there are a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes . . . the one that is prominent at the moment is "He excited the cave." Can caves feel emotions? Hmmm. . . . Sorry-getting off track. The point is, it should be "exited."

At the moment, I find all of the OCs running around a little distracting, and with another one added, I think it will just get worse.

Brownie points for you for keeping this under PG-13 for the most part!

I'm more interested in this "dark elf" who started the avalanche, then the rather pathetic sounding elf on the farm. ( elf, elf on the farm, where people are treated with harm . .. *sung to "Home, Home on the Range." =))

Which brings up another point: In the last couple of paragraphs on this update, it seems that the action isn't clearly presented. I have no idea who is speaking, and then all of a sudden, another OC comes and starts arguing with Mr. Pathetic Elf-guy! ( sorry, that's my rant for the morning.)

Seth should be killed by drowning in a vat of poisoned beer, a la Tower of London.

One last thing, if you do a werewolf thing, stay away from full moons, and make the vampires ugly, because otherwise it will seem like they're good, and all of the bad characters were never very attractive. (Honestly, can you think of Legolas falling for Shelob? No? Neither can I)

So there is my very long list of responses to your stories.

Keep it up!
NZ

Author's Response: lol, first off, thanks for reviewing!\r\nSecond *groans* stupid errors, yeah, I saw somewhere before I wrote \"week\" instead of \"weak\" I really need to read over\r\nmy work and check for errors.\r\nYeah, it ended up with a LOT of OC\'s *Blushes* Sorry, it\'s just my ideas change a lot, and I find it hard just to stick\r\nto cannon characters\r\nMm, I agree with you, the Dark Elf IS interesting and I should really write more about him...\r\nOk I\'ll try fixing up the last update!\r\nlol, drowning hm? The idea holds promise!\r\nStaying WELL away from full moons! That\'s just BORING and the sunlight issue...I disagree, some bad characters\r\nCAN be VERY attractive, think Sauron in the form of Annatar! \r\nThanks for the majorlly long review, much appreciated =)

Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: 1, Broken Hearts

Touche.

Yes, Annatar was probably extremely attractive, but for goodness sake! He was a DARK LORD after all! =0

Anyway, I'll stop cluttering up your reviews with long and probably boring conversations. I learned my lesson after doing something of the kind with Karlmir Stonewain's "Pax Gondoria" or was that the name I suggested . . . ** jolts back to reality** Sorry. I'll stop now.

NZ

Author's Response: lol, it\'s quite alright, Shadow Ranger used to do the same thing until he abandoned FF for RPG sites *Growl*\r\nlol, so what if Annatar was the Dark Lord? *winks* It\'s quite writing as a villian, I\'m going to be doing a fair bit\r\nof that in Angeles y Daemons...Thanks for reviewing!

Save Me by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A song about someone who has sinned and wishes to be saved on judgement day.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115 Read Count: 1188
[Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 05/11/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm. This was a thought provoking piece, though I found the musical directions (chorus, bridge) a bit distracting. Good job!

NZ

Author's Response: Mmmm. I can\'t remember the tune but I think I made it up on the spot. Thanx for the review!\r\niggybaby

Summary: Aragorn gets into trouble (again) but this time he watches everything from a very different perspective. lol
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3474 Read Count: 7405
[Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 18/11/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: The Small Choice

Oh, this is so funny! I wish you'd correct the spelling mistakes!!

I say he should go after Legolas, nasty elf, tying him up in a stable!

You might want to have a running gag that Horsie!Aragorn only picks on Legs. and 'Ro.

Keep it up!
NZ

Stray Child by Junodog Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 19]
Summary: While passing through the Trollshaws area, Aragorn stumbles upon a child, separated from his family and wounded by orcs. However, there is a strange secret behind this boy's existence, and there's more to him than meets the eye...
Crossover with Fullmetal Alchemist (mangaverse)
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63633 Read Count: 24466
[Report This] Published: 10/11/07 Updated: 24/10/09
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to agree with Katarinna: I have no idea what the significance of Xerxes, etc. is, but I am probably not older than you. Anyway, you have a great storytelling voice.
NZ

Author's Response: Oh, well, for Xerxes, it\'s part of the FMA storyline. It\'ll be fully explained later on in the story. I hope.

Summary: This is in answer to the LJ November challenge: Hobbits in Blankets. None of these characters belong to me. *sigh*. Not beta-read, so please excuse any mistakes. Rated: G Warning: nothing but fluff and more fluff. Enjoy!
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Drogo Baggins, Frodo, Primula Baggins
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 603 Read Count: 2393
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 13/11/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Blankie and A Fauntling

True, but I love the way you have him caring for "mummy." Oh, and a question: Was the "Fauntling" supposed to be referring to a baby hobbit?

Author's Response: I believe that a \'fauntling\' is a toddler hobbit, not an infant. Somebody correct me if I am wrong.

Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Blankie and A Fauntling

Awww, cute!

Author's Response: Frodo is cute no matter what age. He is fun to write about.

Summary: A poem about the Fellowship of the Ring
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Frodo
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126 Read Count: 1297
[Report This] Published: 14/11/07 Updated: 14/11/07
Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Date: 26/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this poem.

As usual, I found the rhyming a bit distracting, but you have a wonderful idea.

NZ