I really enjoyed this story! I have never seen The Mummy or Star Gate but I still had fun reading about the characters as yov portrayed them. Thanks for posting such a hilarious, enjoyable story!

Wow! I didn't know Grima had a poetic side! This is rather disturbing in a funny way...

Wow, Santa is evil...I loved it when he called Elrond ''Rondy'' that was really funny!

Author's Response: Rondy suits Elrond, doesn\'t it! Hehehe. Thanks elven lily. Happy you enjoyed it so much. :)

First of all, I think the idea is very interesting and funny, but it could be made a lot more enjoyable to read if you made a few simple changes.
It would really help if you capitalized names and beginning words in sentences. Also, adding a comma after parenthesis when followed by a ‘Bilbo said’ or something else would make it flow better. Furthermore, it would also help a great deal if you added correct punctuation at the end of sentences and quotes.
As far as spelling goes, siad is said, hidding is hiding, Bildo is Bilbo, hobits is hobbits, sudenly is suddenly, hade is had, shore is sure (unless you were intending for Merry to talk like a hillbilly), minits is minutes, vampiar is vampire, mistacks is mistakes, jusy is just, unfiar is unfair, stroming I believe is supposed to be stomping, piffing is puffing, Samin is supposed to be Sam in, russel is rustle, wander is wonder, quite is quiet, terrifide is terrified, road I think is supposed to be roared, typs is types, grabed is grabbed, disapered is disappeared, habbits is hobbits, stoped is stopped, ageed is agreed, wiating is waiting, sop is so, mistaks is mistakes, witch, in this context is which.
A few other things, when they are talking about who has the most lollipops, I think you meant we’re instead of were and there are a few other places where you forgot to add apostrophes in your contractions.
I really do not mean this in a rude way; I just think that a few easy things could be changed to make this more uncomplicated to read. I really do think that this is a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more!
P.S. Do you have spell check on your computer? It makes it a lot easier and also makes stories more grammatically accurate.


Author's Response: i had redone the story a while ago but i had forgot about it, and then i found the new one so i changed it. hope its better

Wow, that is so sad! please write more, I want to know what happends!

Very sad, but it sums up Boromir's life very well, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it!

I love it! especially when Legolas starts screaming...amazing, I laughed really, really hard!

Wow, very nice. I have a hard time at the end of the movies, the last scene, although I've seen it many times, still makes me cry!

Author's Response: I know that scene that your talking about, it makes me cry every time I watch. Anyway thanks for reading and reviewing.

You amaze me! Your poems are so consistently wonderful! Although, this poem didn't make me think of a boy/girl relationship, it actually reminded me of my relationship with Jesus and how much he really loves us. Keep up the lovely work!

Wow, I like the songs, but I'm having a hard time seeing Arwen in a bikini top and miniskirt...not to mention being in love with Frodo...lol

Author's Response: Yep; just be thankful Disney DIDN\'T make Lord of the Rings!