Reviews by elven lily
Summary: A poem about Elu and Melian in both Sindarin and English.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Melian, Other
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 205 Read Count: 1983
Published: Nov 23 2006 Updated: Nov 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Melian and Elu Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! I really admire you for being able to write poetry in elvish! I don't think I could ever do that! Very beautiful and enchanting!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I\'m very flattered. But I think that you\'re under-estimating your own abilities. I\'m certain that you could write in Elvish if you had the tools that I used.
Date: Jun 26 2007
Summary: The LOTR characters all go to school and make two new friends. Parody. Also on fanfiction.net.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1486 Read Count: 7212
Published: Nov 24 2006 Updated: Mar 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Timetable Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love the idea! But am I allowed to add more than one chapter?

Author's Response: If you have any ideas for it then yes. Thanks for the review.
Date: Mar 24 2007
Summary: A poem I had written originaly for a poetry contest but I never entered it. So, here it is.

Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124 Read Count: 1598
Published: Nov 26 2006 Updated: Nov 26 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! if you had entered it in the contest, you would have won-it's beautiful, just like everything else you write!

Author's Response: Thank you! *blushes* I really appreciate that! iggybaby
Date: Apr 24 2007
Alone by Vanya Vasa Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A simple off topic poem I wrote this summer. Its about something I love very much.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82 Read Count: 1707
Published: Dec 01 2006 Updated: Dec 01 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Alone Reviewer: elven lily Signed
That was really pretty, thinking...your thoughts on how it is to be alone? If so, I completely agree with you, sometimes it it wonderful to just tune out the outside world and be alone...
Date: May 24 2007
Summary:

After the end of the Third Age many thought that evil had been defeated forever from Middle-earth.Yet in the darkness of secrecy Sauron begot a son with one of the Eldar, one called Elenion Caunardhon, that ever sought to avenge the overthrow of his father.


 

As the days of Arda near their end and the situation worsens in our world, a young Tolkien fan is allowed by the Valar to be brought to Middle-earth and be part of a conflict to save Arda from destruction at the hand of Sauron's Son... and perhaps his own world...

This story covers a timeline that leads up to and includes the Dagor Dagorath...


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arathorn, Aredhel, Arien, Arwen, Aule, Balrog, Barahir of Ithilien, Beleg, Beren, Bilbo, Blue Wizards, Boromir, Caranthir, Celeborn, Celebrían, Celebrimbor, Celegorm, Cirdan, Curufin, Dior, Earendil, Earwen, Eldarion, Elendil, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Elros, Elwing, Eomer, Eomund, Eonwe, Eorl, Eowyn, Erendis, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Feanor, Finarfin, Fingolfin, Fingon, Finrod, Finwe, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gil-Galad, Gildor, Gimli, Glorfindel, Goldberry, Gwaihir, Huan, Idril, Indis, Ingwë, Irmo / Lorien, Isildur, Landroval, Legolas, Lúthien Tinúviel, Maedhros, Maglor, Manwe, Melian, Míriel, Morgoth / Melkor, Mouth of Sauron, Namo / Mandos
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146334 Read Count: 123366
Published: Dec 05 2006 Updated: Feb 05 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Old Stories made New Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh my word! do you have any idea how many times I have wanted to go to Middle-earth? Great idea, a few mistakes here and there, but overall, I like it, very awesome and intriguing story idea!

Author's Response: THANKS A LOT!! I love to write!! Please, tell me what are the mistakes that I may be able to improve the story. Thanks Again!! I think that you will love chapter 5!!
Date: May 12 2007
Title: Chapter 7: Tom Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh dear, I sure hope her ears are up to it...I am enjoying this, I hope you add more soon, I want to know the fate of Annie Jo!

Author's Response: Thank you your review! I am enjoying writting this story. I will be updating very soon!!
Date: May 23 2007
Title: Chapter 8: Findings Reviewer: elven lily Signed
This is getting really interesting, I'm enjoying it! There are still a few typos scattered throughout the story though. Do you need a beta? I could help you out a bit if you want. Anyways, great story, I'm really getting into it!

Author's Response: Thank you for your offer for help! I sure do need some help typing. How can you help me with this? Thank you for your support and for liking the story!
Date: May 26 2007
Title: Chapter 10: Sad News Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! I am really enjoying this! I am also very intrigued by the idea of Tom and Goldberry living in a forest near a large city...anyway, you were wondering how I might help you. I was thinking of a beta arraingement, you could send a chapter to me via email a few days before you wanted to post it, and I could send it back with the corrections. I do not promise that I would catch everything, but judging from your previous chapters, I could find a few minor typos that need to be corrected.



I would love to be your beta if you want me, I have been considering becoming one for a while, but have not volunteered yet. Let me know if you are interested!
Date: Jun 08 2007
Title: Chapter 14: Creation Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow! this is getting really interesting, not that it wasn't interesting before, it's just becoming more so...nevermind. Anyway, I am really enjoying this, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for your support! Please, tell me if you feel that the story is progressing and including the \"Genesis\" bit was good or not.
Date: Jul 12 2007
Title: Chapter 17: North Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love this chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens to Annie Jo! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank You elven lily I will be sending in to you for beta help the next chapter within a week.
Date: Aug 08 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Introductions Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love it! It gets better with each and every chapter!
Date: Aug 18 2007
ABUSE by Callisto Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: this is a poem about...abuse. I have said that it has rape in it because it is implied but it's not graphic or icky or inapropriate. i have also rated it PG13 for the same reasons.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91 Read Count: 1995
Published: Dec 13 2006 Updated: Dec 13 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
This is so sad, but the society we live in today is just like this. You wrote it in a very beautiful and moving way. Great job!
Date: Mar 29 2007
Summary: A parody of Irving Berlin's song "White Christmas."
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 1469
Published: Dec 21 2006 Updated: Dec 21 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I like it! That's how I feel every year when Christmas rolls around. We have only had one white Christmas that I can remember, and I threw up in it!(I was three at the time)

Author's Response: Sad!!! Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it!
Date: Mar 26 2007
Summary: Another poem of mine, a little "raw" as my father puts it, but you can judge for yourself
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 283 Read Count: 1500
Published: Dec 23 2006 Updated: Dec 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: forgive and forget Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very thought provoking, I know what you mean, it made me think of the verse that says; Vengeance is Mine, I will repay. Handing your problems over to God ca be so hard though sometimes! Anyways, very nice!
Date: May 05 2007
Summary: Elrond's point of view watching the Fellowship leave Imladris.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144 Read Count: 1464
Published: Dec 29 2006 Updated: Dec 29 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Departure of the Fellowship Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I like it! it sums up the characteristics of each of them quite nicely!

Author's Response: Thank you; that\'s what I was aiming for.
Date: May 15 2007
Summary: An AU story that dares to ask: What if the Eagles had not come for Frodo & Sam? Surely there would have been a monument...Not as sad as you might suppose!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Faramir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fantasy, General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11326 Read Count: 5294
Published: Feb 04 2007 Updated: Feb 04 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
This was a very nice story, aren't we glad that Frodo and Sam were rescued by the eagles! I know I am. I was glad that you didn't go any further with the relationship between Arwen and the sculptor, as I would have a very difficult time seeing Arwen having an affair, she and Aragorn are too much in love! ;) I really liked it and thought that it was very cute, especially the thought of Frodo as a glowing, smiling spirit! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Why thanks, Dearie! Yes, very glad indeed! But on a message board I used to visit someone asked the question, \"What if the eagles had NOT come?\" and I puzzled over this until I just had to write a story answering it! Yes, an affair would have been out of the question, I\'m sure, at least for this kind of story. And just had to work Frodo into it somehow! So glad you liked it, and thanks so much for the feedback! ~~~~{~@
Date: Jul 24 2007
Splish Splash by Armariel Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A silly song by Treebeard & the Ents
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Treebeard
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196 Read Count: 1783
Published: Feb 10 2007 Updated: Feb 10 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Splish Splash Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love it! I can play Splish Splash on the piano, and next time I do, I'm definitly gonna sing along with the LOTR version. Very enjoyable!

Author's Response: Thank you! Somehow I wasn\'t notified of this review and came across it by accident. Glad you like my version:D ~~~{~@
Date: Mar 21 2007
Summary: Gimli goes on a diet. Legolas helps.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2495 Read Count: 1866
Published: Feb 11 2007 Updated: Feb 11 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Gimli? with sweat bands and a tutu? I can see him doing pirouettes and arabesques...lol! I love it!
Date: Mar 24 2007
Summary: An ancient quest reveals to be an adventure and it is all up to a 13 year old girl to help a world from dying, but it is not even her world.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4470 Read Count: 3273
Published: Feb 11 2007 Updated: Mar 01 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Path To No Where Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, I have to say I never would have thought about Frodo switching bodies with a teenage girl, but it's very interesting! I can't wait to find out what happends next!

Author's Response: Yeah, I\'ll try to update as soon as my school year ends, which is in a week!
Date: May 17 2007
Who am I? by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 8]
Summary: This is a poem my younger sister wrote, about bugs in their various forms. She is eleven, and it would be a great encouragement for her if you reviwed this, a simple word like "great" would be worth more than you know!

Thank you


~*Sweetie*~
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163 Read Count: 1473
Published: Feb 12 2007 Updated: Feb 12 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: who am I? Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very sweet, tell her that I love the P.S., it ends it in a cute and innocent note.
Date: May 05 2007
Summary: what the title says, a poem.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154 Read Count: 1896
Published: Feb 20 2007 Updated: Feb 20 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, it's sad and wonderful at the same time...not to mention beautiful :)
Date: May 05 2007
What if? by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem, and my favourite of all the poems I have written. What if I was some of the people I see every day.....
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Other, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370 Read Count: 1304
Published: Feb 21 2007 Updated: Feb 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh my word! that was so moving, I nearly cried! Like all your other things, this is absolutely beautiful!
Date: May 04 2007
Fix my heart by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This poem is not about me, nor is it about any particular person, but it could be any of us.
The subject is fixing a broken heart
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145 Read Count: 1447
Published: Feb 21 2007 Updated: Feb 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
So beautiful! I love the ending and the way that you are not ashamed to put Jesus in it, I love the picture it paints!
Date: May 05 2007
Summary: a poem.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86 Read Count: 1301
Published: Feb 21 2007 Updated: Feb 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
So beautiful and very true! I love it!
Date: May 05 2007
Never Forever by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 7]
Summary: what I would do if an elf proposed to me :) LOL :)

Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327 Read Count: 1658
Published: Feb 22 2007 Updated: Feb 22 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Such a terrible predicament to be in... I like it!
Date: May 05 2007