Reviews by elven lily
Summary: what the title says, a poem.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154 Read Count: 1899
Published: Feb 20 2007 Updated: Feb 20 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, it's sad and wonderful at the same time...not to mention beautiful :)
Date: May 05 2007
What if? by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem, and my favourite of all the poems I have written. What if I was some of the people I see every day.....
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Other, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370 Read Count: 1307
Published: Feb 21 2007 Updated: Feb 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh my word! that was so moving, I nearly cried! Like all your other things, this is absolutely beautiful!
Date: May 04 2007
Fix my heart by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This poem is not about me, nor is it about any particular person, but it could be any of us.
The subject is fixing a broken heart
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145 Read Count: 1450
Published: Feb 21 2007 Updated: Feb 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
So beautiful! I love the ending and the way that you are not ashamed to put Jesus in it, I love the picture it paints!
Date: May 05 2007
Summary: a poem.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86 Read Count: 1301
Published: Feb 21 2007 Updated: Feb 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
So beautiful and very true! I love it!
Date: May 05 2007
Never Forever by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 7]
Summary: what I would do if an elf proposed to me :) LOL :)

Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327 Read Count: 1661
Published: Feb 22 2007 Updated: Feb 22 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Such a terrible predicament to be in... I like it!
Date: May 05 2007
Fear by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: We have all been held back by fear at some stage in our lives, this poem is about those times.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 142 Read Count: 1508
Published: Feb 24 2007 Updated: Feb 24 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very true, it sums it up quite nicely!
Date: May 04 2007
Summary: a song about the greed in our society, and the pain it's causes in third world societys.

~*Sweetie*~
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 314 Read Count: 1528
Published: Feb 24 2007 Updated: Feb 24 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Down the dusty road Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very thought provoking-and well written!
Date: May 05 2007
The Cliff by freakanature06 Rated: PG [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Merry and Pippin discuss their limited future. Sad. Takes place after Lord of the Rings.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Merry, Pippin
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 691 Read Count: 1688
Published: Feb 28 2007 Updated: Feb 28 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
A bit sad, but very beautiful, I love it!

Author's Response: :: grins :: Glad you liked it!
Date: Mar 27 2007
Summary: A song I wrote three nights ago when there was a lunar eclipse. Basically about love.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144 Read Count: 2139
Published: Mar 05 2007 Updated: Mar 05 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
So sad! but beautiful!

Author's Response: yeah i know. i write sad poetry. thanx for the review! iggybaby
Date: May 10 2007
Evil Elrond by greywing Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Written for the March Prompt: E-- like an Evil Elrond. Mistreatment of Glorfindel by his lord. Not what it seems, really.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Horror, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 1617
Published: Mar 06 2007 Updated: Mar 06 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Great, I can see Elrond doing that- I hate Elrond!

Author's Response: Oh no, why do you hate Elrond? :( I\'m afraid the movies made him seem rather mean. He is really a very nice, even tragic, character who\'s always compelled to do what\'s best for the world.
Date: Mar 24 2007
Summary: The fellowship in the modern day world all living in the same apartment block. Expect madness, mayhem and chaos.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1349 Read Count: 5266
Published: Mar 10 2007 Updated: Apr 02 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The death of Rosie Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love it! I can think of some interesting occupations- Legolas as a hair styler, Gimli as a waiter- anyway, thank you for writing this! Please add more soon!

Author's Response: Waiter O.O I love you (not litreally!) I couldn\'t think of ANYTHING for Gimli, so he ended up being a jewller, but now... *Hugs* You ROCK! As for Legolas... *Giggles* Sorry, but Wizzosis and I have something planned ;D You just can\'t beat an elf in uniform!
Date: Mar 23 2007
Title: Chapter 1: The death of Rosie Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh my word! I love it! Sooo funny. Ideas for the next episode...hmm... How about a trip to the zoo or something where they go out in public? And just a question, where in the world are the real Rosie and Arwen?

Author's Response: Hm...Public...I like that! Rosie\'s dead (Both the real one and the hampster/gerbil/pet) because only the Fellowship were made immortal, not their families. However, because Arwen is an elf (and Aragorn\'s now immortal) she\'s still alive somewhere... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Apr 28 2007
Elbereth by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem about the Queen of the valar, Varda, or in the sindarin tongue, Elbereth. From the perspective of an elf.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Varda
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75 Read Count: 1978
Published: Mar 20 2007 Updated: Mar 20 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very Pretty! I'm currently reading the Silmarillion and I have to say that Varda is definitely my favorite of the Valar, I liked it very much!

Author's Response: i love Varda, although i prefer the name Elbereth because i think it sounds prettier! thanx for the review! iggybaby
Date: May 10 2007
Frodo's Quest by Merry Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem of Frodo's journey to Mount Doom.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Frodo
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 415 Read Count: 1567
Published: Mar 21 2007 Updated: Mar 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love it! It sums up Frodo's journey so beautifully! I'm adding it to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am glad you liked it!
Date: Mar 29 2007
Summary: A quick one-shot for all you gamers out there.
Rated "PG" for suggested sex between husband and wife.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Eldarion, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1623 Read Count: 1925
Published: Mar 24 2007 Updated: Mar 24 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Eldarion's Day Off Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Interesting...my brother would probably like that game...

Author's Response: I think I would too. I liked Diablo II a lot, especially after I looked up the cheat codes . . . but Eldarion would never sink that low.

Thanks for the review!

Date: Jun 08 2007
Romance by greywing Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: The shortest romance story, ever. 100 words.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eomer, Lothiriel
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 1858
Published: Mar 24 2007 Updated: Mar 24 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, very short, but interesting...there's a lot there for being only 100 words.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and good luck with your WIPs!
Date: Mar 24 2007
Pyre by freakanature06 Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Pippin thinks about his life through the War of the Ring. Songfic, set to the Finale of the musical Pippin.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448 Read Count: 1330
Published: Mar 26 2007 Updated: Mar 26 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very nice, I love Pippin!
Date: Mar 27 2007
Summary: Legolas is depressed after the fellowship of the ring and his longing for the sea is getting him down. Can a beautiful she-elf save him from his depression? Or will she cause him even more misery? My first fan fiction, so please read and review. Thank you. CHAPTER 4 IS NOW UP. Don't forget to review then I can make my story better!



Okay after reviews made, and I thank you for it, I have adjusted my story slightly in my style and added slight hunts as to the story further. If you've already read my story these changes do not really require you to re-read, although you may wish to, you will still understand the plot as the outline is the same. Thank you so much.
Please read and review.
Alex
xx
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Other, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2814 Read Count: 15306
Published: Apr 01 2007 Updated: Apr 05 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: A stroll in the starlight-to soothe your headache?? Reviewer: elven lily Signed
I love it! It's so sweet and well written. I can't believe no one else has reviewed it, please post more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks again, I\'ll post as soon as possible, the next chapter isn\'t written yet but I have plans.
Date: Apr 04 2007
Title: Chapter 2: Catching her eye Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh, I like it. Poor Legolas, I think you did an excellent job for your first fan fiction!

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'ve posted chapter 3 now, hope you still like it. Tell me please. Oh and thanks for my first ever review yay!
Date: Apr 02 2007
Summary: THE LORD OF THE RINGS MEETS…
INDIANA JONES
STAR WARS
HARRY POTTER
AND
WHAT ABOUT BOB?
This is going to be interesting... oh yeah, and did we mention an evil Legolas?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Balrog, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Boromir, Butterbur, Deagol, Denethor, Elrond, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gollum, Gríma, Haldir, Háma, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgűl, Original Character, Other, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Sméagol
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Parody, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2838 Read Count: 7416
Published: Apr 06 2007 Updated: Apr 07 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1--Flat on the Road Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh dear...what damage could Pippin possibly do with a light saber?...I shudder to think...anyways, very funny, I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you... Pippin is a little inept, as we\'ll see in the next chapter!
Date: May 14 2007
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 -- A Fond Farewell... sorta... in a way... Reviewer: elven lily Signed
This is very fun to read, I hope you post more sometime in the near future!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will, as soon as I\'m done editing the next chapter...
Date: May 14 2007
Summary: Pippin's scarf is something almost as inseparable from him as Merry is. But why? Legolas asks Merry that very question one night whilst they are on watch. So begins a tale that neither Merry or Pippin is ever likely to forget....

Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21699 Read Count: 6264
Published: Apr 08 2007 Updated: May 29 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh, this is so sweet! I love the description of Pippin in this story, he must have been the cutest hobbit child ever! I hope you update soon! I'm adding this to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! I don\'t see why he couldn\'t have been, he\'s the sweetest adult hobbit as far as I am concerned anyways!! I will try my best to update at the weekend or early next week so do keep an eye out Thanks again! V :)
Date: May 23 2007
Why? by Iwantanoceanliner Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Just an off topic poem about how i've felt sometimes when my sister or family manage to piss me off and I don't know why or how I lose my rag so easily
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 172 Read Count: 1827
Published: Apr 08 2007 Updated: Apr 08 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Very interesting, but I seriously believe that it's not just older sisters... trust me, I have a younger brother that does the exact same thing!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. Siblings are just annoying
Date: Apr 10 2007
Summary: Response to magycal fairy child's challenge.

Britney and Ashley invoke insanity...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3538 Read Count: 2604
Published: Apr 09 2007 Updated: Apr 11 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I—the Journey Begins Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Oh my word, that was like, the funniest thing I've ever read-please add more like, really soon!
Date: May 18 2007
Wind by Asa13 Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Just a poem I thought of on a windy day.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 198 Read Count: 2029
Published: Apr 10 2007 Updated: Apr 10 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wind Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Wow, I think someone doesn't like the wind...anyway, that was really deep and it was thought provoking. I liked the ending especially, nice work!

Author's Response: Right, I really hate the wind. It gets everything all overeverywhere, including my thoughts... anyhow, thank you!
Date: May 22 2007