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A Fading Elda's Lament by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: what the title says, a poem.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154 Read Count: 1447
[Report This] Published: 21/02/07 Updated: 21/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, it's sad and wonderful at the same time...not to mention beautiful :)

What if? by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem, and my favourite of all the poems I have written. What if I was some of the people I see every day.....
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Other, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370 Read Count: 1010
[Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 22/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my word! that was so moving, I nearly cried! Like all your other things, this is absolutely beautiful!

Fix my heart by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This poem is not about me, nor is it about any particular person, but it could be any of us.
The subject is fixing a broken heart
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145 Read Count: 1173
[Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 22/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So beautiful! I love the ending and the way that you are not ashamed to put Jesus in it, I love the picture it paints!

from despair to hope by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: a poem.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86 Read Count: 1059
[Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 22/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So beautiful and very true! I love it!

Never Forever by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 7]
Summary: what I would do if an elf proposed to me :) LOL :)

Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327 Read Count: 1236
[Report This] Published: 23/02/07 Updated: 23/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a terrible predicament to be in... I like it!

Fear by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: We have all been held back by fear at some stage in our lives, this poem is about those times.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 142 Read Count: 1142
[Report This] Published: 25/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very true, it sums it up quite nicely!

Down the dusty road by Sweetie Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: a song about the greed in our society, and the pain it's causes in third world societys.

~*Sweetie*~
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 314 Read Count: 1189
[Report This] Published: 25/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 05/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Down the dusty road

Very thought provoking-and well written!

The Cliff by freakanature06 Rated: PG [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Merry and Pippin discuss their limited future. Sad. Takes place after Lord of the Rings.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Merry, Pippin
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 691 Read Count: 1294
[Report This] Published: 28/02/07 Updated: 28/02/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 27/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A bit sad, but very beautiful, I love it!

Author's Response: :: grins :: Glad you liked it!

A Thousand Little Wishes by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A song I wrote three nights ago when there was a lunar eclipse. Basically about love.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144 Read Count: 1656
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sad! but beautiful!

Author's Response: yeah i know. i write sad poetry. thanx for the review! iggybaby

Evil Elrond by greywing Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Written for the March Prompt: E-- like an Evil Elrond. Mistreatment of Glorfindel by his lord. Not what it seems, really.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Horror, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 1325
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 24/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great, I can see Elrond doing that- I hate Elrond!

Author's Response: Oh no, why do you hate Elrond? :( I\'m afraid the movies made him seem rather mean. He is really a very nice, even tragic, character who\'s always compelled to do what\'s best for the world.

Mellyn: Episode One: The Death Of Rosie by Gemini_Elf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary: The fellowship in the modern day world all living in the same apartment block. Expect madness, mayhem and chaos.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1349 Read Count: 4309
[Report This] Published: 10/03/07 Updated: 02/04/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 23/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: The death of Rosie

I love it! I can think of some interesting occupations- Legolas as a hair styler, Gimli as a waiter- anyway, thank you for writing this! Please add more soon!

Author's Response: Waiter O.O I love you (not litreally!) I couldn\'t think of ANYTHING for Gimli, so he ended up being a jewller, but now... *Hugs* You ROCK! As for Legolas... *Giggles* Sorry, but Wizzosis and I have something planned ;D You just can\'t beat an elf in uniform!

Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 28/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The death of Rosie

Oh my word! I love it! Sooo funny. Ideas for the next episode...hmm... How about a trip to the zoo or something where they go out in public? And just a question, where in the world are the real Rosie and Arwen?

Author's Response: Hm...Public...I like that! Rosie\'s dead (Both the real one and the hampster/gerbil/pet) because only the Fellowship were made immortal, not their families. However, because Arwen is an elf (and Aragorn\'s now immortal) she\'s still alive somewhere... Thanks for reviewing!

Elbereth by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem about the Queen of the valar, Varda, or in the sindarin tongue, Elbereth. From the perspective of an elf.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Varda
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75 Read Count: 1543
[Report This] Published: 20/03/07 Updated: 20/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very Pretty! I'm currently reading the Silmarillion and I have to say that Varda is definitely my favorite of the Valar, I liked it very much!

Author's Response: i love Varda, although i prefer the name Elbereth because i think it sounds prettier! thanx for the review! iggybaby

Frodo's Quest by Merry Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A poem of Frodo's journey to Mount Doom.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Frodo
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 415 Read Count: 1206
[Report This] Published: 21/03/07 Updated: 21/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 29/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! It sums up Frodo's journey so beautifully! I'm adding it to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am glad you liked it!

Eldarion's Day Off by Elaura Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A quick one-shot for all you gamers out there.
Rated "PG" for suggested sex between husband and wife.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Eldarion, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1623 Read Count: 1543
[Report This] Published: 24/03/07 Updated: 24/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Eldarion's Day Off

Interesting...my brother would probably like that game...

Author's Response: I think I would too. I liked Diablo II a lot, especially after I looked up the cheat codes . . . but Eldarion would never sink that low.

Thanks for the review!

Romance by greywing Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: The shortest romance story, ever. 100 words.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Eomer, Lothiriel
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 1427
[Report This] Published: 24/03/07 Updated: 24/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 24/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, very short, but interesting...there's a lot there for being only 100 words.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and good luck with your WIPs!

Pyre by freakanature06 Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Pippin thinks about his life through the War of the Ring. Songfic, set to the Finale of the musical Pippin.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Pippin
Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448 Read Count: 1072
[Report This] Published: 27/03/07 Updated: 27/03/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 27/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice, I love Pippin!

An elven love story by Iwantanoceanliner Rated: G [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Legolas is depressed after the fellowship of the ring and his longing for the sea is getting him down. Can a beautiful she-elf save him from his depression? Or will she cause him even more misery? My first fan fiction, so please read and review. Thank you. CHAPTER 4 IS NOW UP. Don't forget to review then I can make my story better!



Okay after reviews made, and I thank you for it, I have adjusted my story slightly in my style and added slight hunts as to the story further. If you've already read my story these changes do not really require you to re-read, although you may wish to, you will still understand the plot as the outline is the same. Thank you so much.
Please read and review.
Alex
xx
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Legolas, Other, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2814 Read Count: 12177
[Report This] Published: 01/04/07 Updated: 05/04/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 04/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: A stroll in the starlight-to soothe your headache??

I love it! It's so sweet and well written. I can't believe no one else has reviewed it, please post more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks again, I\'ll post as soon as possible, the next chapter isn\'t written yet but I have plans.

Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Catching her eye

Oh, I like it. Poor Legolas, I think you did an excellent job for your first fan fiction!

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'ve posted chapter 3 now, hope you still like it. Tell me please. Oh and thanks for my first ever review yay!

A Very Scrambled Story by Nienna Calafalas Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: THE LORD OF THE RINGS MEETS…
INDIANA JONES
STAR WARS
HARRY POTTER
AND
WHAT ABOUT BOB?
This is going to be interesting... oh yeah, and did we mention an evil Legolas?
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Balrog, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Boromir, Butterbur, Deagol, Denethor, Elrond, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gollum, Gríma, Haldir, Háma, Legolas, Merry, Mouth of Sauron, Nazgűl, Original Character, Other, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Sméagol
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Parody, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2838 Read Count: 5808
[Report This] Published: 06/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07
Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Date: 14/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1--Flat on the Road

Oh dear...what damage could Pippin possibly do with a light saber?...I shudder to think...anyways, very funny, I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you... Pippin is a little inept, as we\'ll see in the next chapter!