It's very good, I like it. Just a point on Gemini-elf's comment, have you not said it because of Legolas' trick, saying they were brothers? I don't think it's confusing at all
Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad you are liking the story. Yes, saying they were brothers was a joke on Pickett. Not surprisingly, the troll didn\'t pick up on it, which was the whole point in Aragorn telling him they had different parents.
Very good, it's interesting, I like the way he laughs at Legolas' spider comment keep it coming!
Yay! I like the new chapter it's good, please update again soon, I really like your story. Alex
Very good intro. I'm likin' it so far. Can't wait to see what happens.