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The Healer and the Warrior by Madeleine Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A meeting at the Houses of Healing in the aftermath of the Great Battles between a Horselord and a young woman
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Eomer
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13256 Read Count: 4374
[Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 12/04/07
Reviewer: Dav Flamerock Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brava! I love it! Very well written, and although Eomer isn't quite my favorite character I couldn't help but like this story a lot. I also liked how you didn't use names at all and yet we still get to know the two of them very well. I look forward to your future installments.

Ancient Evil by Asa13 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: The Elves of Mirkwood have found something disturbing in their borders. Remnants of an ancient evil. But can they destroy them? Or is it not quite what it seems...? Post RotK
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Horror
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9254 Read Count: 6046
[Report This] Published: 10/04/07 Updated: 01/11/07
Reviewer: Dav Flamerock Signed
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ancient Evil, Prologue

Oooohhhh.... cool.
Some points of improvement: I'd personally italicize the elvish, put space between paragraphs (already mentioned), check capitalization, and if you don't already I find reading through mine out loud seems to work really well. Go ahead and try that.

But great work so far! I can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: hey, good pointers, but i was wondering if you could tell me how to italisize? you can email me. thanx!

Reviewer: Dav Flamerock Signed
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2:The Stranger

Eh? There's a big huge space at the end of the chapter.. .it might just be a software bug. Anyway, I like it, although I feel you could go without the parentheses. It makes it more fun if we only half-know what the vampire's thinking. And I sent you an email telling you how to use HTML coding for italics.

Author's Response: thanx! yeah, that must have been a little (or big) typo

Imrahil's Daughter by Madeleine Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Sequel to 'The Healer and the Warrior'.

Returning to Minas Tirith to escort the body of his uncle home, Éomer is in for a surprise when Prince Imrahil introduces him to the fourth of his offspring.


Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Eomer, Lothiriel
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37900 Read Count: 9837
[Report This] Published: 17/04/07 Updated: 15/05/07
Reviewer: Dav Flamerock Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh snap! I love reading these stories, they're really amusing. And they're really realistic. Keep it up!

-Dav

And Now For Something Completely Different... by AraionaDuBois Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Sauron deals with an orc strike. Done for two challenges: Salute to Jules and the 666 words. Enjoy. Jules, you are the best!

Note: The actual text is really 666 words. The Disclaimer bumped it up a bit.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Monty Python's Flying...Nazgul?
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 693 Read Count: 1652
[Report This] Published: 01/05/07 Updated: 01/05/07
Reviewer: Dav Flamerock Signed
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Orc Strike.

ROFL! It was utterly hilarious!

I had to read it in an English accent for full effect.

Author's Response: Thankee! *giggle* I had just been watching Monty Python before writing it so...:) Thankee for the review! :)