Penname: FrndsRmnsCntrmn [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 13/04/07
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Marc Antony is a good orator.

Unlike a mjority of the writers here, I am male. I am not gay, and in fact joined this site becasue I like writing, and I don't have an effeminate obsession about beign an elf. Unlike virtually everyone who is on here, I have never read a thing of LOTR (I can just imagine all your faces lighting up in amazement, fury, and consternation! It is a very nice feeling to inspire such emotion. Occosainally I'll be bored and read LOTR stuff on here but I'm basically here for writing in general. I will most likely never publish and LOTR fic on here.

I play the violin, viola, and bass guitar. I am the concert master of my highschool string orchestra. I play the bass with my friends in a garage.

In the realm of athletics, I used to swim but that was unrewarding and now I swim in a gym to keep my pectoral muslces big. On the track and field team at my highschool I do the pole vault, the event where you run down the runway, stick the pole into a stationed box in the ground, bend the pole, jump and go flying extremly high over a bar and then land on a padde dpit, and YES, in fact, it is very hard. I always play soccer, and resent baseball, which I had been forced to play for my younger years.

I work very hard at school, probably harder than I need to, as people every day tell me that I am extremly smart and I would describe myself as such. I am very goal-oriented, and I maintain a 4.33 grade average (2 wieghted classes.)

When I grow up, I want to be a politcal scientist and lawyer and make the ibg bucks as well as becoem a politican. I heart politics and I am a liberal. Consevaitve Christians who think that religion shoudl be involved in government I believe to be evil and trying to destroy a good thing about America (which is the country in which I live; more specificlaly I live in Southern California on the coast north of San Diego.)


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Summary: F├źanor and Melian meet in Valinor.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Melian, Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28375 Read Count: 11854
[Report This] Published: 08/12/05 Updated: 12/04/06
Reviewer: FrndsRmnsCntrmn Signed
Date: 13/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter

Your first two senstences of 'A chance encounter' threw me off becasue they could have been better. The second sentence introduces only one semi-new idea to the reader: "constant" and the rest of it is just synopszing the first sentence. Also, though it is much shorter the first sentence, the 2nd repeats the first in that it changes "served to calm" to "helped to calm." Try 'soothe' or 'mollify' or 'assuage' instead of 'calm' twice and change up the syntax of (some word related to causation)-ed + infinitive. Try just directly saying calmed/soothed/mollified/whatever you decide.

Summary: Title says it all.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191 Read Count: 10659
[Report This] Published: 18/04/07 Updated: 18/04/07
Reviewer: FrndsRmnsCntrmn Signed
Date: 18/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Random Things

I heart (

Author's Response: I glad. Thank you so much for reviewing! ^__^

8 by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 19]
Summary: I wrote this poem for a 7 year old boy who's dying from cancer. His wish was to recieve the most birthday cards, so he could get into the guiness book of world records. He's turning eight at the end of may, thus the title being called 8.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 4351
[Report This] Published: 09/05/07 Updated: 09/05/07
Reviewer: FrndsRmnsCntrmn Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The power of positive thinking...

I think your poem is one of the nicest things you can do for anyone(I'm guessing you've read this to the poor kid.) Such a few words can really make a difference, especially for little kids, as they wouldn't have possibly the idea that the first eight years of a person's life "reaps" less than a following eight, and quite possibly I think there might not be a difference, anyways.

Regarless of the existance of innate ideas (or lack therof) and the purity of children's thought, your poem would make for an excelent birthday card to other children in the same situation.

Author's Response: Actually I haven\'t read it to him. he lives two hours away so i\'m just sending him a card. i\'m not even sure he\'ll understand it because he\'s french. oh well. And yeah, I should give other kids birthday cards like that. thanx for the idea and review! iggybaby