Reviews by FrndsRmnsCntrmn
Summary: FĂ«anor and Melian meet in Valinor.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Melian, Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28375 Read Count: 16448
Published: Dec 08 2005 Updated: Apr 12 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Chance Encounter Reviewer: FrndsRmnsCntrmn Signed
Your first two senstences of 'A chance encounter' threw me off becasue they could have been better. The second sentence introduces only one semi-new idea to the reader: "constant" and the rest of it is just synopszing the first sentence. Also, though it is much shorter the first sentence, the 2nd repeats the first in that it changes "served to calm" to "helped to calm." Try 'soothe' or 'mollify' or 'assuage' instead of 'calm' twice and change up the syntax of (some word related to causation)-ed + infinitive. Try just directly saying calmed/soothed/mollified/whatever you decide.
Date: Apr 12 2007
Summary: Title says it all.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191 Read Count: 13378
Published: Apr 18 2007 Updated: Apr 18 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Random Things Reviewer: FrndsRmnsCntrmn Signed
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Author's Response: I glad. Thank you so much for reviewing! ^__^
Date: Apr 18 2007
8 by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 26]
Summary: I wrote this poem for a 7 year old boy who's dying from cancer. His wish was to recieve the most birthday cards, so he could get into the guiness book of world records. He's turning eight at the end of may, thus the title being called 8.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 5804
Published: May 09 2007 Updated: May 09 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: FrndsRmnsCntrmn Signed
The power of positive thinking...

I think your poem is one of the nicest things you can do for anyone(I'm guessing you've read this to the poor kid.) Such a few words can really make a difference, especially for little kids, as they wouldn't have possibly the idea that the first eight years of a person's life "reaps" less than a following eight, and quite possibly I think there might not be a difference, anyways.

Regarless of the existance of innate ideas (or lack therof) and the purity of children's thought, your poem would make for an excelent birthday card to other children in the same situation.

Author's Response: Actually I haven\'t read it to him. he lives two hours away so i\'m just sending him a card. i\'m not even sure he\'ll understand it because he\'s french. oh well. And yeah, I should give other kids birthday cards like that. thanx for the idea and review! iggybaby
Date: May 09 2007