Penname: Raine [Contact] Real name: Alatariel
Member Since: 21/04/07
Membership status: Member
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Suliad, mellyn nin.
Please drop a review for any stories that you come across. My username means 'Peace' in quenya, for those of you that were asking. Leave a review for me, and my policy is to do likewise.
Have a wonderful day, remember that Jesus died for you always.
God bless you,
Alatariel
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Lim Aear by silent_niobe Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Elaine doesn't believe in eternity. Can he make her believe or will he lose his life? Legolas/OC, set in modern times.


Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68613 Read Count: 28746
[Report This] Published: 13/07/06 Updated: 04/06/07
Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 06/05/07 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Ouch. Heh. Poor Legolas...
Your story is awesome, great job so far!

Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 06/05/07 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Yeah. Officially. Forever. I hate you. :K

Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 06/05/07 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

I will kill you now. I can guess what happened, idiot. I just need to know what DID!!!
Egh, your stories are too good. Update or die. :K
Now.
You haven't updated...
Still haven't...
I'm waiting...
EGH!!! Die!
Wait... if you die, you can't finish the story...
UPDATE NOW! THEN DIE!
Egh.
Now.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry to disappoint you, but I\'m still alive... :-P Thank you for your reviews, look for an update later on today.

Trolls by White Wolf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 55]
Summary: When Legolas and Aragorn are captured by trolls while crossing their territory, the two friends must use all of the skills, cunning and endurance they possess just to survive. Won second place for Best Work-in-Progress in the 2007 MC Fanfiction Awards.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93623 Read Count: 30752
[Report This] Published: 20/10/06 Updated: 31/10/08
Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Egh...
I love this story too much...
Can I beta for you or something so I can get it earlier? :P
Not that you need it... But sssh... nobody else has to know that. :D (self evident, unfortunately.)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
In chapter fourteen, the only mistake I caught was you spelled 'prey' 'pray.' Yet that is all, mellon nin...
Please update soon for my life's sake. ...
...
~~Raine

Author's Response: That makes me happy. I don\'t use a beta, but thanks for the offer. :o) I\'ll try not to take too long to update, so hang in there. Thanks for letting me know about the typo. I corrected it. See you soon. :o)

Get it Out! by KerowynLinderion Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Glorfindel's daughter, Irvania has never given him any trouble, but one day and a misunderstanding, Glorfindel finds that everything isn't as it seems to be.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Elrohir, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 546 Read Count: 1873
[Report This] Published: 21/04/07 Updated: 21/04/07
Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 22/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing is As It Seems

Lol... it was predictable, but that made it all the more funny. I loved it... nicely done. :P

Author's Response: thank u, I just wrote it like.. an hour ago lol

Summary: Apostates come in every form, and their ruses are often hard to perceive. What happens when one sets his eyes upon Imladris? Much trouble for Estel, who is left baffled by Elrond's strange behavior. No adult themes.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elrond
Genres: Angst, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33295 Read Count: 8809
[Report This] Published: 25/04/07 Updated: 19/03/08
Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 25/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Peculiar Incidents

Oooh... I like this so far. I just updated my estel/legolas fic but this is really amazing... I can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent work...

Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 25/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Confused Without a Doubt

0_o... odd... evil Elrond... hmm.... intriguing... this is really interesting. You're sparking my need-to-write spark... (No, I won't steal anything...) But the emotion in this is incredible. Excellent job, once again, and keep writing!

Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 25/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Undeserved Punishments

No no no no no no no!!! YOU WILL UPDATE NOW!!! I DON'T CARE ABOUT THE AUTHOR'S NOTES!!! Egh... Please?!? Is he controlled by the Palantir or something!?! This will get on my nerves ALL night... eggh...

IN exchange for my burning anger, could you PLEASE review my story... and I could come at you with my arrows instead of my daggers??? Egh... now you're forcing me to check those sites out. Don't say your not. You are. Yes. I'm right. Stop arguing. I heard that.
Bleh...
Egh....
UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!
I have to add this to my favorites now....
In my years of lotr fanfiction the angst in this is the incredible stuff in which I love, I dub this the best story I've ever read.
Great job...
*Adds to favorites*


Author's Response: *grin* I\'ll be updating next week. Recently, my computer went down, and I lost my new chapter. Only yesterday did I get it fixed. Glad you liked it. :-) ~Calenlass

Dark Vision by White Wolf Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: After experiencing a dark vision of Legolas’s impending death, Aragorn tries desperately to save his friend. But can the future really be changed? Won second place for Best Aragorn Angst in the 2007 MC Fanfiction Awards.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5383 Read Count: 3272
[Report This] Published: 30/04/07 Updated: 08/05/07
Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 30/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I now hate your writing, WhiteWolf... blegh. Never... Ever... EVER KILL LEGOLAS AGAIN!!! He's my friend. He DOESN'T DESERVE TO DIE!!! WHAT IN ARDA HAS HE DONE TO YOU!?!
Grr...
I bet someone takes them back in time... or something... they better...

Ok... now to the CC. I think Arwen is slightly out of character in her speech. At times, it doesn't sound... em... right.

EX: "You usually take great pleasure in greeting me before I reach you to let me know you heard my steps."

It's just hard for me to imagine Arwen saying that in that manner...

One more thing that isn't your fault: "...omer"
I hate it when it does that... I think on one of the moderator's posts, they say a way to fix that.

Otherwise, you've got me in suspense that I will kill for to have completed. You'll be sorry... Hmph.

Anyway...
Could you read/review my fic? I'd really appreciate it... I've looked up to you for about two years now...
Cuz I'm Alatariel (Don't know if you remember me reviewing) But you have always been my favorite author.

Until now...

Lol jk. PLEASE update soon... so I don't have to murder my bestest bestest friend... lol.

GREAT STORY SO FAR! *throws letters in the air*

You have to use that many letters next time... I think that was a full bag containing about one million letters, a-z. Use them. :P

Ok, I'll stop my rant. Nice job...
I've said that a million times now, I do believe...
So I'll stop and end with yet another

PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: The story isn\'t over yet. The next chapter will explain everything, so hang in there. This is the first LOTR story in which I\'ve included Arwen, so I\'m not used to writing her. I\'m sorry you don\'t like my portrayal of her. I\'ll try to fix that other problem when I get the chance. Thanks for pointing it out. I\'m glad you like my work. I\'ll read something of yours, but I have to warn you, it will be a while. I have a very long list of stories to read, but I will get to it. I\'m pleased you like the story so far, despite the way the first chapter ended. :o) More will be along soon.

Summary: A belated Motherís Day prose poem written in honor of Gilraen. These are the words of Aragorn as he remembers his mother.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Gilraen
Genres: Angst, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 494 Read Count: 1542
[Report This] Published: 14/05/07 Updated: 14/05/07
Reviewer: Raine Signed
Date: 03/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW this was awesome; great work and thanks for reviewing 'Return Home!'