It was such a surprise to get a new chapter for this - but a welcome one! :)

While I love to read about Feanor, I can't help but feel glad that I don't have to ever meet him in person. *g* He is just too much, even for Fingolfin, Glorfindel and Maglor combined.

And I just love this description:
Laurëfindë lay in his spill of gilt hair like a lion whom had battled another more powerful.

(oh, and a small tip that might be helpful, if you use something like Open Office or Googledocs for writing, there is a 'find & replace' function. So you could just write 'Feanor' throughout the chapter and when you are finished, do a find&replace for 'Feanor' with 'Fëanor'. That's how I do it, because I'm lazy. ;)

Author's Response: Thank-you so much for the review, Esteliel. Lol, I would 'run away' rather than personally meet Feanor. I don't have the energy to cope. XD

I had to expand a little as the original story was co-written and I had to delete that part. Even if it was just for my own satisfaction I wanted to tie it in with Glorfindel's conversation with Gil and Tin in LoL, long after. I said to Anwyn I am not sure if there will be any more, as I refer back to this time in LoL and DP, but I am leaving it as unfinished, just in case. Possibly a later chapter with feanor and Glorfindel.

I used Open Office. Thank-you for the tip! I will use it next time. I got so used to copy/paste originally, but it is a bit of a pain.

I just want to say it here as well - I love this story to bits and am so completely thrilled you like my Legolas enough to use him for this!
Even Glorfindel doesn't dare to say anything because even he has to admit that Van and Legolas together are just *hot*! ;)

Author's Response: It thrills me that you like it so far. I do so devour your stories and so love both Legolas and Glorfindel in them, it's such an engrossing and evolving tale apart from being damned hot and thought provoking, that I find it very easy to imagine Legolas. it seems Van also likes your Legolas, and the nipple rings are just the icing on the cake d;-) ( so at least your Glorfindel and van have the same taste, even if Glorfindel would be after him with a very big sword XD

Actually, it is just as well I decided to skim that Legolas flashback, since your birthday fic has given me a perfect opportunity to write about it in greater detail. It will fit into that fic very well (I hope) and I will link to it from this story, as it is really going to be an unwritten chapter or two.

*squees* That sounds absolutely perfect! I feel almost like a little child again, counting down the days to my birthday now! :)

It makes me sad to think of Vanimórë and Elgalad's life from Tanith onward, so writing snippets of them in these 25 years feels almost like giving them more time together.:(

Me too, they just deserve so much more. :/ But the knowledge of their eventual fate makes these moments of happiness just so much more poignant.

I liked Elrond's reaction too, to Glorfindel's little "surprise"... Maeglin. It truly looks like he won't have an easy time in Imladris (but then, why should he have? Maybe living in such close proximity to people whose fathers/grandfathers he would have killed will prove a learning experience for him.)

Author's Response: I hope the fic is okay. I realized it was the ideal place to write about Glorfindel and Legolas at the beginning, as certainly Finrod would want to know :)

There is a poignancy for me in writing of Van and Elgalad, but these years, which I didn't cover, will be quite full for them, I think.

Imladris will have a definite atmosphere for a while. I think Glorfindel knew there was no easy way to introduce Maeglin so (showing some Finwion arrogance) just decided to explode him on Elrond - and the others (Legolas, Tindómion, Elladan and Elrohir) have not even got there yet. Of course Maeglin's best defense is Aredhel, which his pridwe does not like at all, even though he loves her.
Thank-you again!!

Oh, I am so glad I decided to have a look at this site when I came back today - two new chapters at once!

I loved that Finrod gave Legolas a horse.... and ohh, I could kiss Feanor for the condition he demands for his compliance! *g* It was lovely to get more of Glorfindel and Legolas' backstory, so thank you, Feanor! ;)

He was very tall, powerful as a sunrise, and as approachable.

That is such an amazing description of Glorfindel!

Glorfindel raised a hand. “Not now. There is much to do.” And he did not wish Fëanor to dwell on the image of Legolas in bed.

Awww, Glorfindel... Now I will have to dwell on that image instead. *sighs*

The more we hear of them, the more I come to like young Túrin's parents. I just hope Lorh will not cause trouble for them... :/

I also very very much liked Aredhel hitting Maeglin; it is truly the least he deserves, and this must be very hard for her - loving her son, and yet knowing that he is responsible for the death of her brother and her people.

Seeing Glorfindel able to talk to Finrod was maybe the best surprise of the chapters. I have such a weak spot for Finrod, and I am glad that Glorfindel has his counsel and support at least in such a way, because it must be very lonely in his position.

Rosriel and Borniven... Gah, I have no words for them, save that I hope that their punishment will be as harsh as their deeds. :/

Author's Response: Thank-you so much :)
Not that Fëanor wouldn't have agreed to what Glorfindel asked anyway, as it was in his own interests, but he is curious. d;-) I am sure the rest will come later :D
I am glad you liked the description of Glorfindel, I thought it sounded like how he would appear.
I thought it would be a good thing for him to be able to speak to Finrod, even if they're separated. Of course he has Legolas too, but an older brother always feels like an older brother I suppose, and Glorfindel loves him, so Finrod is a comfort.
Lorh is going to be trouble, no doubt, but until he is no-one is going to do anything, and although Carreg put a stop to him touching Cell, he's very young himself and it would go against the grain to just get rid of some-one. The same applies to the Elves. Van would do it without blinking, XD but there's a reason for all things and a time for everything.
Aredhel is in a really invidious position, yes, she loves her son, but hates what he did. I also think it's a complete contrast to Rosriel, that whatever Maeglin did, Aredhel cannot help but love him even if she does want to ding him around the ear. I liken Rosriel and Borniven to leaving a bottle of milk on the doorstep month after month, some very odd processes go on inside it, beside it going sour.
Thank-you, and I hope you have a good day tomorrow; wall-to-wall Tolkien :)

I just wish Tin and Gil wouldn't be so stupid, but I know that's too much to ask for. ;) At least I have the consolation to already know that they'll give in at last.

I'm really really curious now for more of that backstory of Celegorm... The Feanorians all aren't exactly rational, so it would make sense that Celegorm would try to take over the kingdom of the one he loves. *g*

To see Beren still thinking of Turin after such a long time... Such a sad fate for both of them, I hope this will be a happier life for them. I loved that Orome gave him another bow!

Author's Response:

I just wish Tin and Gil wouldn't be so stupid, but I know that's too much to ask for. ;)

This was a wonderful chapter - it was great to see more of Beleg! I really was annoyed by Glorfindel's presumption as well when he couldn't go and visit Turin's grave to say his good-bye... But then, what a surprise will wait for him in Imladris!

It's so strange to think of him meeting his great grandson, and to imagine them looking as if they were the same age. I wonder what Thranduil will think when he hears that his grandfather has returned.

As to Feanor and Fingolfin... Well. No surprise there. Those Finweans don't need others to tormemt them, they've perfected the art of it themselves. *g* Still, even if they drive me crazy with their games sometimes, I can't help but love them. Especially that Gil tinks of Tin as a falcon whose feathers he wants to ruffle - I think once Tin finds out about Vorimoro, Gil will have to be careful or his falcon will bite off his fingers. ;)

And this is just so true - it should be the family motto, really: *snickers*

“I was asking my grandfather how one handles a Fëanorion.” The reply was something of a challenge. Fëanor glanced back at Fingolfin, then moved to Gil-galad and leaned down to murmur in his ear, “One does not handle us, we handle thee.”

Author's Response: *I really was annoyed by Glorfindel's presumption as well when he couldn't go and visit Turin's grave to say his good-bye.*

I think there's a reason for that, which will be dealt with in a rather different way in the future. Beleg will definitely go there - just not yet. Tor Fuin and Tol Morwen will be in forthcoming chapters.
There was also the time factor. People are going to wonder why Aredhel stayed, and Glorfindel did not want them to have enough time to go to Imladris and ask her. (Turgon especially XD) They've lingered a fairly long time and Glorfindel's motives were pure, he does not think Beleg needs more hurt, rather he wanted to send him on his way without telling him precisely what waits for him. Although I think Beleg was moved by Legolas rather than Glorfindel. So he will be on his way.

Lol, I don't know if Tin would ask outright, but he will definitely suspect - it's just as well they are leaving - and not on the same ship. d;-)

I get the sense that Fëanor is playing, that he knows that Fingolfin is his and just enjoys their sparring. :)

Thank-you so much for the review. Thank-you

Arrrgh, how can you end it there? Now that's an evil cliffhanger!

Poor Maeglin - and I didn't think I'd ever say such a thing! There is quite a contrast between how he was greeted and treated in Gondolin and now in Imladris... Hopefully one day he'll be able to prove himself trustworthy after all.

I also wonder how Carreg and Cell will react to the connection between Túrin and Beleg. Already they worry that there won't be enough other mortals around when Túrin grows up...

Author's Response: There will be some Mortals, I am sure. My belief is that not all the Dúnedain would pack up lock and stock and head to Gondor, after all Arnor was their land, and Aragorn was to rule both Gondor and Arnor.
But there have to be certain mirrors, and Túrin being raised in an Elven realm is one of them. :) Although his mother especially knows old tales, I think it will be some years before they know enough to eventually put things together, perhaps learning Sindarin and being able to read old scrolls and books.

Aredhel is being the positive one of the two when it comes to her son. I feel she is very strong-minded, but other things are in play :)
Thank-you so much for the review!

So Beleg doesn't really realize yet that Turin is truly Turin - but that's for the better, I think, as it must be very uncomfortable to know someone you still love so much as a small child. In any case, as Men age so fast it will hopefully not seem long at all to Beleg.

I'm also really intrigued by what kind of 'test' is in wait for them in the future, and I'm glad Beleg has tried to befriend Maeglin. He is someone who really needs a friend, I think, especially if he does not want to fail whatever test is coming up for him in the future.

Author's Response: Thank-you Esteliel.
No, Beleg, I think, would not even consider the possibility this is Túrin, as this sort of thing just does not happen; well, in a sense Beren was reborn, but he had special dispensation, and it has been so very long. I don't think it would occur to Beleg at all, although he does see a pattern in this. Maeglin sees more of one, and I also think he believes that it cannot be as easy as reforging the sword and Túrin being reborn - there are too many shadows here.

Two chapters at once! You spoil us! ;) Although of course, even though you gave us two chapters, I still want to know what happens next! Your Finrod is so lovely, I just can't get enough of him.

I am so glad Orome came to his aid, and I wonder what Ingwe will now do, as "a prisoner released" - will he want to stay in Valinor, as it seems like sitting at the feet of the Valar all of this time was not entirely voluntary?

So many new questions... but what I'm looking forward to most is Finrod and Celegorm meeting again. That is cvertainly going to be volatile! *g*

Author's Response: Lol, it occurred to me, writing it that there are always more questions than answers XD
I hope (if I finish) to answer most of them, but perhaps not, as I like to leave some question.
Thank-you very much for your review!
I am so glad you like this version of Finrod. He will meet Celegorm (*cringe*) I already know how. When I was writing one of the earliest chapters it just came to me.

I loved the chapter! At first Van's amazing dance and your beautiful, rich introduction of the Mother, and then Celegorm starting to argue with Glorfindel once more! Although it is indeed nice to see Celegorm worry so much about whether Finrod would not rather stay with his wife... *g*

Of course, the last part of the chapter was the biggest surprise - so New Cuivienen is already settled by Elured, Elurin and Daeron? Won't that be a surprise to Celegorm... He'll not just have to worry about Finrod alone any longer, it seems like an even bigger problem has just sprung up for him. I'm really curious what's going to happen with them all!

Author's Response: Thank-you for your review, Esteliel. :)
I am glad the chapter worked, as it was quite a long one.
I have a map of Middle-earth where I placed New Cuiviénen, and should probably put a link up. There is a land of woods and hills (it looks like) on the south-west shores of the inland sea, so it is a very long way from where the Noldor have set up their temporary camp, but technically part of their territory. Elured and Elurin must have been away on a long hunting trip to see them, but see them they did, and Elven eyesight being so keen, they didn't need to be on top of the Noldor to see the banners. So yes XD Celegorm particularly, is going to have more problems.
Again thank-you for the review. :)