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ermm...*raises hand* Can i have chapter 1 please...to go? Thanks.
Wow. it was cute. then hot. guess i'd better read on. :)
Well, i have goosebumps (the good kind)
that was so sad and beautiful
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Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing - and I\'m pleased you enjoyed it! For some strange reason, I often end up writing really angsty, sad stories when I\'m in a really good mood - and this was one of them...
I'm so tired after work, my eyes are burning. But i've just finished chapter 2, there is no way i can not carry on!
Damn this torture. hahaha. I love this so far!! :D
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Oh my god!! Foolish girl!!!
(namely because i would never make any pact unless it was "as soon as we make physical contact, i own you").
I think my eyes will fall out if i look at anything before getting some sleep. I am so not moving tomorrow until i've bitten off another sizeable chunk!!
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just finished chapter 7. What a bad bad man!! You go Marissa!!
Men! Even in fiction they are a little bit too dumb.
love it. I'm powering through it.
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oh my god that was so beautiful. i have sadness goosebumps, especially at the last line!!
Ooo!! Ooo!! Its so pretty!!
That sounds really patronising and i apologise for that, it isnt intended at all. This is such a lovely sotry so far. I love how easily it reads, just slides right in and makes you feel all squishy inside. (that sounds awfully rude. But its not) I just keep putting my foot in it. Lets try again.
I love this story. I'll be crawling back and forth to this one to check for updates.
Thankyou for posting it.
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Author's Response: Aw, thanks Junior! :) This was my first fanfic and just a nice feel good story. It\'s based on a real place that I love and visit whenever I can. Sadly, there won\'t be anymore updates as I wrote this story four years ago and it\'s complete! I tend to ruin stories if I drag them out too long. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
oh my god, that was so good. My emotions have been rollercoastering around through the whole thing, but now i just want to cry because i am so happy!!
Loved it!
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Author's Response: Thank you! I am so pleased to find these stories, which were sort of hard to catagorize, finding an audience. They were great fun to write and I am so glad they are proving fun to read too! Thank you so much for letting me know how much you enjoyed this one.
Hahah! That was so cute. And it was realistic because I'm doing that thing i do when ever a baby strays into my eyeline (broodiness vs. interal crumbling from the cuteness.) hahaha
Loved it!
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Author's Response: Thanks, Junior, for the sweet review. I\'m glad you enjoyed the story so much and that it made you laugh.
naaaaw!!! cuute! Very glad she sat him down and told him off though...Go Mia!! Hahah
Love this!!
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Oooo!! Controversial!
I started reading this ages ago, and then forgot who it was by an had to trawl through the archives to find it, but i'm glad i did. Its a really good story, and i like where i think the plot is going (i'm probably completely wrong, and i will let you know when what i think does or doesn't happen.)
So you have to update it just to see if my predictions are true! :D
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Author's Response: I\'m flattered you that you remembered it! I\'m interested in what you think is going to happen now.. once things are revealed you\'ll have to tell me if that\'s what you predicted! x
She wants to kissss him!
But the question remains..will she?
Hooray for the update, thankyou for adding some more! Still loving this!
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Ooooh!! Poor Orlando!
And it would appear that my predictions are coming true, which means i'm even more excited that you updated!
I love this story!
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Author's Response: Ah poor guy! Glad you like the story! xx
Wooo!! Fabulous! Finally they kissed! And it was so lovely!
Cannot wait for the jealous orlando repurcussions! bwahahaha. Love the drama
Anyway, enough exclamation marks and dramatic statements, really good chapter, loved it.
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Author's Response: Yes, finally they did! I loved writing this chapter at long last! xx
Haha im so confused that words have lost all meaning.
Hahaha. My life finally has a point now i have read this story.
Hahaha. My life finally has a point now i have read this story.
Hahaha!! I cant comment any further, it made me laugh. Alot
wow...
I am actually speechless.
You write incredibly beautifully, and the chapter that you said wasnt very good was my favourite. The description is intircate without being heavy. I'm so impressed.
im sort of blundering through this, grasping at any words that will do justice to my reaction but i cant! I'll resort to sounds instead.
just....gah!
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(i had to repost this because i forgot the out on without, so it sounded a bit critical...oops..)
Ooo. I like this, very interesting plot, and very well written.
I would love it see more!
:)
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Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I\'ll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can.