I liked how you mized in the fictional character with the actual script from the movie. Its unlike any other story I've read. Good Job!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad that nobody minded me placing a character into the script. SG345
Really awesome!!!!!!!!!Best erotica I've read, and there are plenty of laughs. The only bad thing is that you ruined my thoughts of Orlando for ever!!!:)
Author's Response: Hee. Hope I ruined them in a good way. :) Thanks for the FB and I\'m glad you enjoyed!