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Name: Erin
Gender: Female
Country: USA
Age: 2,145
Hobbies: Reading, playing violin, writing, pranking. :P
Pet Peeves: Chatspeak, people who cannot take a hint, people who insist upon being oblivious.
Favorite Movie: Lord of the Rings trilogy
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The Black Rose by Gemini_Elf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 51]
Summary: This story has been completely and fully edited. Several chapters have been taken out and re-written and others have been collapsed to make shorter, and an OC has been cut out. If you have read this before, I advise re-reading it to catch up
Enemies from the past are coming back to haunt Elrond and Thranduil, and what better way to get at a Father, than to kidnap a son? Aragorn and Legolas are in trouble. Big Trouble

Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Torture
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15896 Read Count: 14854
[Report This] Published: 05/11/06 Updated: 05/07/08
Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Awakenings

What!?!
Ooh...scary. Legolas and Aragorn didn't meet though... :(
But plot was really good. It will be interesting to see how this all works out... nice work so far! Your imagery is pwnful, I can imagine being there.
~~Twilight

Author's Response: pwnful? Um...Not familiar with that word ^_^ Don\'t worry, Aragorn and Las will meet soon enough! (Although more pleasant circumstances would have been nicer for both!)

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Meeting

Hmmm...
The beginning was kind of confusing, being who was who and what they looked like (ie positions) But other than that, I'm still interested. This just keeps on getting better because...
ARAGORN AND LEGOLAS MET!
Yay!
Evil lady and my two favorite people ever, yep, perfect story.
In fact, that's what I'm writing about now.
Dunno if you've finished this yet, (though I will soon)
But keep writing!
~~Twilight

Author's Response: There\'s too many male villains, so I wanted a girl ^_^ More fun.

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Not just a messenger...

WHAT?
Ha ha...
Cliff hangers no workie for when I am reading this when you've already posted, lucky you.
Other wise, I'd have to torture you and TRY not to kill you so you can inform me of what happens.
Dude, you like, totally stole my plot.
The 'your sons will die so I can rule' whole thing
You know...
That is so not fair... tnf.
YOU STOLE EVERYTHING!
Shame, shame... :(
:P
~~Twilight

Author's Response: ¬_¬ It\'s an ANCIENT plot. Something prehistoric people would have been telling around campfires. And technically, it\'s not a \"your sons will die so I will rule\" thing, it\'s a \"your sons will die because you killed/tried to kill me\" Ok, admittedly Durband DID try taking the throne from Thranduil, but Morwen\'s just evil. And wants revenge. (By the way, if you were joking, I have a tendency to take everything to heart, so people normally have to tell me they\'re joking.)

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: The Black Rose

Nicely done, Niphredil... :P
~~Twilight

Author's Response: I know :D

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Discussions

*sigh*
~~Twilight

Author's Response: Not very much content in that chapter...

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 10: A sacrifice

*gasp*
Do not torture me with self-sacrifice on Amren's part...
you evil elf... :K
That's my job.
Hmph.

Author's Response: I know...I\'m evil! :D Aw, but I\'m on the good guy\'s side really...I just like writing stories which involve Elves and fighting! ^_^

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: The Black Rose

You. Better. Have. An. Update.
OR DIE!!!
Mwah ha hah... :P
Nicely done. Please do a sequel/update... I love this!
~~Twilight

Author's Response: Right, good news, I am writing the last chapter *Does happy dance* Bad news: Dunno when it\'ll be finished!

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: The First Move...

Ooh... interesting. I haven't read a good fic for a while... I'm adding this to my favorites. You've got my attention now... :P

Author's Response: O.O I could not BELIEVE it when my inbox said I have nine reviews. Thank you SO much! ^_^ I\'m glad you think it\'s good! And *Hugs* thank you for adding it to your favs!

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Ambush

So I guess Legolas and Aragorn will meet now that they are both alive and hit by orcs? I love Legolas and Aragorn... can't wait to read more. I like your style of writing, you portray the characters pretty well. Keep it up!
~~Twilight

Author's Response: I love them too ^_^ Although you wouldn\'t know, the amount of trouble I write them into!

Reviewer: Twilight Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: The Black Rose

Ai. Half of those reviews... more than half, to be precise, I was joking. I know, it's hard to tell when I write stuff. But whenever I include ':P' anywhere in the review, it means I'm joking. I love this story... and I'm glad you are updating soon.... else I really would have to kill you.
NOT JOKING.

:P

Now that there was contradictory...but I'll let you decide. "D

Author's Response: I\'m very happy to know you were joking. yeah, it is hard, most of the time I sound sarcastic, when I don\'t mean to. I HOPE I update soon *Hides so you can\'t kill me* I was writing some in Physics, but I might re-write it. But it should be up soon, hoping to get it done before my birthday (Eeep! Only a week to go!)