A nice solid opening. It's interesting that Aragorn should think that Arwen should set his friends up with common wenches (much unlike the scene from Disney's The Three Musketeers that comes to mind).
Wonderful attention to detail! Definitely not your grandmother's romance story.
Wonderful!!! I was wondering when this fantastic fic would continue.
It keeps getting better and better!!
Very, very good, this one. Lothiriel knows how to put her foot in her mouth sometimes. The cleft bit was very fun, it put me in mind of Beavis and Butthead for a moment. Cleft. Huh Huh. I can hardly wait for more.
Absolutely superb!! You are a master of suspense! I can barely wait to see how things will end.
Very well written! I'm sorry to see it end though. Perhaps we may read about the trials of pregnancy for both Eomer and Lothiriel?