You have combined my two favorite series! I love the way you introduced all three of these characters, and hope to see more of this story!
I must say I was wary about reading such a metafanfiction, but this story is phenomenal! The character development is amazing! I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: My favorite stories are always the ones that take what should be a horrible, trite and predictable plot line, and turn it on its head with vivid language and characters with depth. Take Maya\'s \"Drop Dead Gorgeous\". How may Godawful Harry!Veela/Draco stories are there out there? How many make you shutter and cringe? Just that combination ought to be toxic and every one I’ve glimpsed has been, but holy fuck is it brilliant under Maya\'s steady pen, and all the more impressive for it. I know people who\'ve read Maya\'s fics never having read a single Harry Potter book or seeing a Smallville episode and become immensely disillusioned when the real thing isn\'t as good as her fanfic. I\'m no Maya, but I\'d like to do the same with Mary Sues. They may have a horrible reputation, but they don\'t have to be horrible. I mean, Peter Jackson proved that fantasy films can be as moving, and gritty and real as any other. Why not fanfic? Why not treat Mary like she’s a real character instead of a tacked on amusing puppet? I could rant further, but I think I’ll stop now . . .
Interesting story, wish you would write more.
The donkey scene was hilarious! I'm glad you are giving the characters distinctive personalities, it makes this so fun to read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you enjoyed that. I love exploring the characters\' personalities. I thought there was not nearly enough in the books or the films, at least not for the minor characters.
This is so intense! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I love writing this story and I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it.
I love everyone's reaction to Mary Sue...and how stereotypical the "Mary Sues" are! This is such a funny idea, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll try to update as much as possible!
Awesome god impressions! I can't wait to see how the plot with Achilles develops.
Author's Response: The Achilles plot is basically what it was in the film, until the wooden horse. And then...I have a few surprises up my sleeve. Thanks for the review.
Oh, Jack! I love the plot development in this chapter! The characters are really coming into their own. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. The characters make their own decisions about what to do after a while. I can\'t really control them.
Can't wait for more!
I'm so anxious to find out what happens! I want to kill Calchas! And excellent shooting!
Author's Response: Calchas will get what he deserves. I believe in Karma. Thanks for the review. Legolas will get an opportunity to use his newly acquired skill.
I hope Will gets a nickname, too! I really love the "divine" character twist.
Author's Response: Jack\'s already got one for him. He\'s \'the whelp\'. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it
I can't wait for more, this concept is so interesting! I love the time period, and Harry's transformation. Great characterization of the twins.