Reviews by ladygreensleeves
Summary: What if Sleeping Beauty was not a woman? What if they were not a man either, but an elf? Follow Alice in her journey to find out the truth behind the myth and the fairy-tale. Set in modern times. LegolasOC.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87939 Read Count: 27784
Published: Jun 11 2007 Updated: Aug 29 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Breakdowns, apologies and discoveries Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
AUGH!!! Please please please write more!!!!! This is most excellent!

Author's Response: I am SO sorry it took me ages to reply. I'm really happy you enjoy my story and thank you for your review!
Date: Oct 05 2007
Summary: I think the title explains it all.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Asfaloth, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Celebrķan, Eldarion, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir, Merry, Nazgūl, Other Canon Character, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, General, Humor, Mystery, Other, Parody, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13470 Read Count: 40065
Published: Jan 09 2009 Updated: Jun 21 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Entry 4 Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
*shakes head and smiles*
You have ENTIRELY too much free time lol (jk jk don't shoot me... or kick me in the shins!!! *wince*)
Keep up the AMAZINGLYAWESOMEFANTABULOUS work that you do!

Author's Response: I wouldn't dream of kicking you in the're the one with the bow and arrows in your room. Well, actually....I run faster then you so this might work out for me. Plus it'd take you a while to string your bow, and I'd be waaaay outta range by then. Hahahaha
Date: Jan 10 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Entry 1 (Ada says to put the date but I don't feel like it now.) Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
Hmmm.... if she has this big of a crush on Glorfindel now, I can't WAIT until she and Aragorn meet...*ducks and covers from raging Arwen hormones*

Author's Response: Yeah...though when she meets Aragorn she is out of the teenage-Arwen-hormonal phase. Plus Aragorn doesn't reject her, so she will be happier and less moody.
Date: Jan 19 2009
Title: Chapter 30: April 2508, Third Age Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
HA! You SO based Elladan's children after us... er, at least in gender and number! Sneaky, sneaky! ^_^ That being said, I think this chapter was lovely. Keep up the good work, and PLEASE write a new chapter for "Walking the Line" soon!!! *every time I see the title, all I can hear in my head is Johnny Cash...* :P

Author's Response:

Okay, you caught me. So, do you like your elven name?

Next chapter of WTL is coming soon!

Date: Apr 21 2009

2009 MEFA Third Place Winner in the Adventure Category. 

Brandon wakes up in the middle of a forest in another world. Is it a dream? Or is he stuck in an unfamiliar place where his life might no longer matter? Please read and review!

Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Balrog, Bill the Pony, Celeborn, Galadriel, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50612 Read Count: 34944
Published: Jan 24 2009 Updated: Jul 08 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Stuck Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
... You took the whole sleep crossover from Everworld, didn't you?! Tricksy tricksy! But good! Bravo! I can't wait to see what else happens to poor Brandon... he's so confused... gotta feel sorry for the guy!

Author's Response:

Actually, that hadn't even crossed my mind. Everworld and L.O.T.R are two completely seperate pieces of my brain. Next time I get ideas, I'll cross-reference them with my library and see if they're too repetitive.

Poor Brandon, yes. He has no clue as to what's going on.

Date: Jan 27 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Goodbye, Brother Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
oh. my. god.
... I cried SO hard when I read this. Truly, you are an amazing writer. You have far surpassed me, little sister.
Words fail.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry/glad that this made you cry so hard! Sorry because I hate seeing people cry, glad because this chapter was supposed to be a tear-jerker. And you know me...there'll be more...eventually. WTL: Book Two, Ch. One will be out in a week or two, after an update to Moria with an H and a little WTL filler :-D

Thanks for the review!

Date: Jul 08 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Not in Kansas Anymore... Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed

Author's Response: Ok!
Date: Jan 25 2009
Title: Chapter 16: The Unexpected Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
What. The. Heck. I'd use stronger language, but then I might be kicked off the review site. But still... WHAT?!?!?!??!?!! GAH! There isn't enough room in these review boxes for the amount of question marks and exclamation points that I have for this latest plot development. Anyway... keep up the good work! I EXPECT AND DEMAND A NEW CHAPTER SOON. :P

Author's Response: I told you you'd freak out, haha. A new chapter is coming, don't worry!
Date: Mar 31 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Heavy Thoughts Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
Oh! Poor Brandon! *gives him some tea, a blanket and lots of cuddles... poor guy NEEDS some serious cuddle time!!* :( Although, if I tried to even go near him, I'd probably get gutted... or at least thoroughly yelled at. I can't help that I'm a caring soul by nature! Anyway, yeah. I feel really bad for the poor guy. However, your writing is magnificent as always! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

He'd be weirded out, but I doubt Brandon would attack you. He wouldn't yell either--maybe give you a weird look, but no yelling. He'd appreciate the tea and blanket though! Thanks for the review!

Now I want some tea :-D.

Date: May 28 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Beyond Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed

Author's Response:

Wow. Um, okay. A new chapter should be done by Friday, if not before.

Date: Apr 06 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Concerning Hobbits Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
GLEE!! WRITE MORE!!! This is AMAZING!! I'd say that it's either neck-in-neck or surpasses "Story of Seven" *which you need to start over again*.
Keep up the good work, and I'll see you soon!

Author's Response:

I don't think I'll be able to continue with "Story of Seven". I know that you and Dad liked it a lot, but now that it's been deleted, I really don't remember how I wrote it and I can't bring back the original sound of the story. Seven sounds very different from how I remember him each time I try to start over. It makes me sad, but I can't do anything aside from move on. Maybe I'll try again some time in the future. I'll let you know if I do.

Thanks for the praise. It takes about two days to write a chapter for this story since it's so hard to stop telling Brandon's story! I'm more excited about this story than I've ever been about any other thing I've ever written in my entire life.

Can't wait to see you! Yay February break! GLEE!

Date: Feb 01 2009
Title: Chapter 15: The West Gate Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
GAAAAH. HOLY. CRAP. LAST LINE = EPIC!!!!!! Write more. Like, now. :P Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: I don't have time to write more right NOW. But I should have something by the end of this week. You're my sister. If you want plot spoilers all you have to do is ask, silly.
Date: Mar 30 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Small Talk Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
OOH!!! This chapter is GREAT! You did an excellent job capturing the voices of all the members of the Fellowship... research pays off lol. By the by, nice cliif-hanger at the end. Keep up the amazing work!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Appendix B of Return of the King has been my BEST FRIEND. That, and different quotes from the books. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so you'll see where the cliff hanger leaves off...mwahahaha....
Date: Feb 18 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Shadow and Flame Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
*facepalm* Brandon, you dork! DO NOT CAST AWAY EVIDENCE. ESPECIALLY STUFF LIKE THAT. And ESPECIALLY since there are more CLUES in the first book! ARRGH!!

Ok... sorry. My rant at your character is over now *sheepish look*.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I know Brandon made a crappy decision. But keep in mind this is his first experience with the death of another in Middle-earth. He's going to be just a little irrational. But I felt like yelling at him too, after I wrote it. I yelled at myself a little bit, but then I apologized. Just wait until Boromir dies...dun dun dun.

It might take me a little while longer to get the next chapter out because of the Williamsburg trip that I'm going on with the symphonic band...I usually update on the weekend and once during the week. Fortunately, this upcoming week is April Vacation, so when I do get back, there will probably be several chapter updates due to plot bunnies and an over-abundance of spare time.

Thanks for the review!

Date: Apr 14 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Not in Kansas Anymore... Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
YAY! Write more soon, please! 'Fields of Gold' has always been a favorite of mine (but, since you're my sister, you know this). And, I have a question: why did you say Legolas' hair was brown? Not criticizing it, I've always thought it as such as well. Maybe since he's a wood Elf from Mirkwood? Meh. *shrugs* As I said, write more soon, please! Oh, and when you get the chance, (I know you said you'd do it when you were done with this particular 'book' of WTL) you said you'd write the story of your typo involving me and the Fellowship. I eagerly await said one-shot! :P Love you, little sister!

Author's Response:

Thanks! And of COURSE I knew! I thought of you when I wrote this chapter, just because I included the song. :D I said Legolas's hair was brown because that's the way I imagined it when I read the books. What I'm writing is almost completely book-verse, so portraying Legolas as the way I saw him in the movie felt wrong.

I am about to write your story. I will write more of WTL, but I'm going to take a little break. Don't worry about it, when I say little I mean that maybe I'll post on Sunday instead of Friday or Saturday.

Date: May 03 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Found Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
Oh... oh SH*T. Double that!!! Crap crap CRAP!!!! THAT is BAD. VERY BAD. (not sayin that the chapter is bad, far from it! Just the situation...) GAHHH!!!! WRITE. MORE. SOON!!!!!

Author's Response: Ok
Date: May 24 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Brother to Brother Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
*sniffle* Gaaaaahhh.... stupid angst. Stupid Death! *not saying that the chapter is stupid!* Keep up the AWESOME! ^_^

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks sis! I'm so happy you think the story is awesome. Right now I'm brainstorming for the next chapter...hmm...

Thanks for the review!

Date: Jun 05 2009
Title: Chapter 29: The Giving of Gifts Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
Yay! Flutes! ^_^ Now I want one that looks like Brandon's. *envy*. Ah well. I highly doubt that an Elven craftsperson exists in our world. Curses. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Well, when I have job and an eBay might just get one. :-D Thanks for the review!
Date: Jun 12 2009

Moriah is your standard college girl. Nothing out of the ordinary. So why are there nine confused travellers at her dorm? I promise this is not a Sue-fic.

Categories: Crossovers, Off Topic Characters: Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Fantasy, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3948 Read Count: 6981
Published: May 04 2009 Updated: Aug 02 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: I swear to God, I'm not tripping. Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
Ow. My first bloody nose is given to me via kick in the face by a Hobbit. COOL! And I really REALLY hope that Gandalf does some magic to make said confused college boy forget everything he saw... he could pull an Obi-wan Kenobi thing! "This is not the Fellowship you're looking for... move along..." lol Star Wars reference. Write more soon please!

Author's Response: Whether Gandalf makes him forget or not remains to be seen. I'm not going to do the Obi-wan thing though. It's been done too many times, haha. But thanks for the suggestion!
Date: May 12 2009
Title: Chapter 1: I swear to God, I'm not tripping. Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
AMAZING. LOL!!!! Of course, I am biased since this IS a story about me. *sheepish grin* Just a few corrections:
my skull's name is spelled wrong; its Freidreich.
And he's made of plaster, not plastic. Just little things. :P

Author's Response:

Okay, did I get the way you talk right? I think I did, but I wanted to make sure. I will fix the errors right away! So glad you liked it!

Date: May 04 2009
Title: Chapter 1: I swear to God, I'm not tripping. Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
Yes, that's more or less how I talk. Maybe I speak a little more flowery? Idk. Don't change it, though! It also lends a bit of 'you' to the story. Speaking of which, how long is this going to be?

Author's Response:

I'm thinking it'll be no less than three chapters, no more than seven.

Date: May 04 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Lost in Translation Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
BWAHAHAHA!!!! Oh lawdy lawdy, I LAUGHED!!! What the hell Gandalf, indeed! And, also, just so you know (and may deny) I am NOT that much of a Legolas fangirl anymore. I mean, of COURSE I would be looking... and drooling (only a little!). Mostly, if this happened in real life, I would be running around and FREAKING OUT! And yes, wondering if the cafeteria food had been drugged. MORE PLEASE!!! ^_^

Author's Response: I would freak out too. No, this would be nothing like what we would play-act in the kitchen when we were supposed to be doing dishes.
Date: May 05 2009
Title: Chapter 3: My Big Fat Mouth Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
I have to agree with... um... myself? This isn't turning out well at ALL! And the car with the alarm going off is about to be blown to pieces by a certain freaked out wizard and probably hacked/slashed/filled with arrows by the rest of the Fellowship. Eeeexxxcellent. :P PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!

Author's Response:

More is on the way!


Date: May 08 2009
Title: Chapter 1: I swear to God, I'm not tripping. Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
GAH! Write more please! I want to know what... um.. I.. er, do next. Plus, it's kind of odd to see people in the reviews talking about me! *snork* lol. ANYWAY, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

More is coming, and if you want to know what you're going to do, all you need to do is ask. Wow, that was a strange sentance. Anywho, it's definitely weird reading reviews talking abotu you for me as well!

Date: May 18 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Sorry Bilbo, My Unexpected Party Totally Pwns Yours. Reviewer: ladygreensleeves Signed
*snork* Hah! That's GREAT!!! I think I actually do have a security guard named Marty. Not sure, but I think I do! :D Keep up the great work! ^_^
Date: Aug 02 2009