Reviews by Anwyn
Summary: When young Aragorn survives an unspeakable trauma, he and his family must find a way to heal, and not only from new wounds, but also from those that have long been left to fester. Aragorn, Elrond, Elladan, Elrohir, Glorfindel. Very dark, disturbing, adult content.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Glorfindel
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12827 Read Count: 7520
Published: May 28 2009 Updated: Dec 16 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Evil to Come Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Goodness, what a place to leave off at! I am really looking forward to more of this story as I do like dark fic as long as it is well written and since you are writing this I know it will be abseloutely fantastic. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as now I am quite concerned for Aragorn!
Date: May 28 2009
Title: Chapter 2: The Ways of Men Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Hmmm, Judging by the warning at the beginning of this chapter I do not imagine our dear Aragorn is going to receive a warm welcome from these strange men but that is just me and I do not mind being proven wrong! I am deeply intrested by this story already and am on pins and needles for the chapter as there are too few stories of Aragorn's younger years with his adoptive family in Rivendell and you write them so superbly it fills in the gaps incredibly well.

This chapter raised an intresting point of how Aragorn would receive meeting other men after being raised amongst the Elves for nearly his entirely life, I found that quite fascinating how he was so intrested in something such as grey hair and wrinkles.

Fantastic chapther and whatever I can do to motivate you to get the next chapter up faster I am game! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Anwyn, for reviewing! (And I apologize for not responding to your last review—sometimes they slip by me here as I don’t get notified when someone leaves me a comment on this site.)

I appreciate your kind and generous comments on my writing, and I’m glad to know you think I do an effective job of portraying young Aragorn and his foster family of peredhil. And thanks for your comments on this chapter. It’s something I’ve thought about a lot obviously—what it would be like to be raised completely surrounded by beings so very different than yourself, and then suddenly having to try to make your own way amongst your own kind.

I’m tweaking the next chapter right now, so thank you for helping to motivate me! :-D
Date: Jun 08 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The Evil Men Do Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Oooh, a new chapter, fantastic! :D

While I do not mean to sound like a know it all I did have one of those pit in the stomach worries as how to this would end espically when they offered Aragorn a drink! Though chalk that one up to being told more times than I can count not to accept drinks from strange men!

Also, unfortunately my yelling at the screen for Aragorn to run away did little as well!

I found the little touches of this chapter quite fascinating, such as Aragorn being understandably turned off by the crude manner of the men and wanting to go but then scolding himself for being so judgemental of them.

I love reading stories such as this one where it feels that we are truly meeting the boy who grew into the King that Aragorn has lived a pretty nice and sheltered life and could not really understand these men who have come from who knows where and proably have had a very tough life.

It does not excuse them of course from what they have done and what they might yet do but I believe that no one is ever born bad but circumstances do definately tend to sculpt us.

Your writing style is excellent and I found myself feeling just as uncomfortable and uncertan as Estel through the exhange of these men and that is certainly the mark of a fantastic writer.

Aragorn was certainly raised quite well to remain so polite in the face of such rudeness, that is for certain!

The only critique I would offer is actually the exact same as Fanari's in that you really should not have to post a warning with the beginning of every new chapter as the story does have a high rating and while it is certainly unpleasant for a reader to inadvertantly stumble into something they are not prepared for, you have really left amble warning up to this point.

This is dark fic but I do as it happens to enjoy dark fic but ONLY if it is well written which in this case it most certainly is as you are not writing of a dark, touchy subject matter just for the shock value of it but you are taking your time and developing a story around it and the lesson that will come out of this for Estel though I write that with worry but whatever doesn't kill you can only make you stronger, right?

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Anwyn, for the wonderful review and for your kind words! I’m so glad to know you enjoyed the chapter. I appreciate that you can see I’m not just doing this for the “shock value” but taking the time to develop a story. I do believe I have some important things to say here. And I think you are so right –whatever doesn’t kill us can only make us stronger (or, at least, wiser!).

As for why I keep warning all the time, see my response to Fanari below. But I will stop warning for every chapter now, at least at this site.

Thank you again so very much. I really appreciate it!

peredhil lover
Date: Jun 15 2009
Summary: Sequel to Second Chance.

"Middle-earth is real. It's just...I don't know...hiding."

Anna and Derry try to understand their connection to Middle-earth while Beomia adjusts to married life. Better summary to come ;)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Second Chance
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2668 Read Count: 5060
Published: May 13 2010 Updated: Mar 30 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Retracing and Remembering Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Oh wonderful! It was such an excellent surprise to see that you have posted a sequel to this story. You have such a lovely natrual style of writing, It just flows so well and your stories are always such a pleasure to read. I am looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks, Anwyn!! :) I needed a break from NaNo and decided this was well overdue for updating :P
Date: Nov 14 2010