Penname: Anwyn [Contact] Real name: Bayley
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Twenty-something Perioperative Nurse, Hopeless Romantic, Counsellor, Loving Daughter and Protective Older Sister, Gamer Geek, Workaholic, Writer, Painter, Music Lover, Dog Trainer, Photographer, Painter, Shameless Flirt, Shopaholic, Maid of Honor, Best Friend, Arch Nemesis, Traveler, Drink Mixer, Lover of Local Wines, Nature Enthusiast, Swimmer, Book Lover, Teacher, Student, All around smarty pants...

…and when I am not up to any of that, I write.

Though usually during all other things I wish I was writing!

Feel free to contanct me anytime at lady_dragon116@hotmail.com

I am a magnet for all kinds of deeper wonderment
I am a wunderkind
I am a pioneer naïve enough to believe this
I am a princess on the way to my throne
Destined to seek
Destined to know

"Wunderkind"

Alanis Morissette



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Summary: When young Aragorn survives an unspeakable trauma, he and his family must find a way to heal, and not only from new wounds, but also from those that have long been left to fester. Aragorn, Elrond, Elladan, Elrohir, Glorfindel. Very dark, disturbing, adult content.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Glorfindel
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12827 Read Count: 5655
[Report This] Published: 28/05/09 Updated: 16/12/09
Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Date: 10/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: Despair

As usual I am running to play catch up but I wanted to leave a comment as I am often guilty of reading a story and enjoying but not leaving a review and I must appolgize as I read this chapter which I found extremely deep and well written, and nearly forgot to review! So I do appolgize.

The subject itself is very difficult to read, not becuase of the way you write of it becuase your writing has a beatiful mature flow to it that makes it a pleasure to read but what happened to Aragorn in itself I find difficult to read as you capture his emotions so well I can feel his anguish.

It is sad that he wants to push away all those who love him and want to help but I can understand at the same time why he would do this as he is hurting and suffering just as much mentally as he is physically and you handle it very well as it is not about the act itself, but the healing that comes afterways.

Though I tend to prattle on, so I just wanted to say that I am find this story thoughly well written and while again I must stress I find the subject matter itself hard to read, I apprechiate the mature way which you are writing of such a subject as it is tricky to do well though you have certainly managed.

Author's Response:

Well, thanks, Anwyn! I appreciate that you took the time to review, and I’m glad to know that despite the difficulty of the subject matter, you are still reading and enjoying the story. Thank you again for your very kind words about my writing—I’m very flattered that you think I am treating this horrible situation in a mature and believable manner. And yes, the story is mainly about healing, and the strength of the human spirit to ultimately overcome tragedy, and I hope if you stick with it, you will find it rewarding and uplifting in the end.



Thank you again so much,



peredhil lover

Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Date: 28/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Evil to Come

Goodness, what a place to leave off at! I am really looking forward to more of this story as I do like dark fic as long as it is well written and since you are writing this I know it will be abseloutely fantastic. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as now I am quite concerned for Aragorn!

Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Date: 08/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: The Ways of Men

Hmmm, Judging by the warning at the beginning of this chapter I do not imagine our dear Aragorn is going to receive a warm welcome from these strange men but that is just me and I do not mind being proven wrong! I am deeply intrested by this story already and am on pins and needles for the chapter as there are too few stories of Aragorn's younger years with his adoptive family in Rivendell and you write them so superbly it fills in the gaps incredibly well.

This chapter raised an intresting point of how Aragorn would receive meeting other men after being raised amongst the Elves for nearly his entirely life, I found that quite fascinating how he was so intrested in something such as grey hair and wrinkles.

Fantastic chapther and whatever I can do to motivate you to get the next chapter up faster I am game! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Anwyn, for reviewing! (And I apologize for not responding to your last review—sometimes they slip by me here as I don’t get notified when someone leaves me a comment on this site.)

I appreciate your kind and generous comments on my writing, and I’m glad to know you think I do an effective job of portraying young Aragorn and his foster family of peredhil. And thanks for your comments on this chapter. It’s something I’ve thought about a lot obviously—what it would be like to be raised completely surrounded by beings so very different than yourself, and then suddenly having to try to make your own way amongst your own kind.

I’m tweaking the next chapter right now, so thank you for helping to motivate me! :-D

Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 3: The Evil Men Do

Oooh, a new chapter, fantastic! :D

While I do not mean to sound like a know it all I did have one of those pit in the stomach worries as how to this would end espically when they offered Aragorn a drink! Though chalk that one up to being told more times than I can count not to accept drinks from strange men!

Also, unfortunately my yelling at the screen for Aragorn to run away did little as well!

I found the little touches of this chapter quite fascinating, such as Aragorn being understandably turned off by the crude manner of the men and wanting to go but then scolding himself for being so judgemental of them.

I love reading stories such as this one where it feels that we are truly meeting the boy who grew into the King that Aragorn has lived a pretty nice and sheltered life and could not really understand these men who have come from who knows where and proably have had a very tough life.

It does not excuse them of course from what they have done and what they might yet do but I believe that no one is ever born bad but circumstances do definately tend to sculpt us.

Your writing style is excellent and I found myself feeling just as uncomfortable and uncertan as Estel through the exhange of these men and that is certainly the mark of a fantastic writer.

Aragorn was certainly raised quite well to remain so polite in the face of such rudeness, that is for certain!

The only critique I would offer is actually the exact same as Fanari's in that you really should not have to post a warning with the beginning of every new chapter as the story does have a high rating and while it is certainly unpleasant for a reader to inadvertantly stumble into something they are not prepared for, you have really left amble warning up to this point.

This is dark fic but I do as it happens to enjoy dark fic but ONLY if it is well written which in this case it most certainly is as you are not writing of a dark, touchy subject matter just for the shock value of it but you are taking your time and developing a story around it and the lesson that will come out of this for Estel though I write that with worry but whatever doesn't kill you can only make you stronger, right?

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Anwyn, for the wonderful review and for your kind words! I’m so glad to know you enjoyed the chapter. I appreciate that you can see I’m not just doing this for the “shock value” but taking the time to develop a story. I do believe I have some important things to say here. And I think you are so right –whatever doesn’t kill us can only make us stronger (or, at least, wiser!).



As for why I keep warning all the time, see my response to Fanari below. But I will stop warning for every chapter now, at least at this site.



Thank you again so very much. I really appreciate it!



peredhil lover

Summary: Sequel to Second Chance.

"Middle-earth is real. It's just...I don't know...hiding."

Anna and Derry try to understand their connection to Middle-earth while Beomia adjusts to married life. Better summary to come ;)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers
Characters: Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Second Chance
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2668 Read Count: 3342
[Report This] Published: 13/05/10 Updated: 30/03/11
Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Date: 15/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Retracing and Remembering

Oh wonderful! It was such an excellent surprise to see that you have posted a sequel to this story. You have such a lovely natrual style of writing, It just flows so well and your stories are always such a pleasure to read. I am looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks, Anwyn!! :) I needed a break from NaNo and decided this was well overdue for updating :P