Reviews by Henoluin_Elsilim
Careless by estelstheone, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 16]
Summary: When Aragorn fails to return with needed supplies, Gandalf and Legolas go searching for the missing Ranger. AU, noncanonical, hints of violence and nonconsensual behavior, nothing graphic. Mainly a hurt, comfort short story.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gandalf / Olorin, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10862 Read Count: 7611
Published: Oct 20 2007 Updated: Sep 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: A Glimpse of Freedom Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Good chapter! can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Glad you still like it. Hope the subject matter isn\'t too disturbing.
Date: Oct 26 2007
Title: Chapter 4: An Elf's Keen Eye Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
ooo... Dundundun. The barman is in trouble now! *claps* Good chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and my apologies for not responding sooner. I appreciate your interest. Glad you like the story.
Date: Oct 28 2007
Title: Chapter 5: A Wizard's Restraint Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Dude, I don't even want Gandalf to try and restrain Legolas this time. I want Legolas to... to... well, I'm not going to say what I'd like them him to do. I only hope that Aragorn will be able to not feel totally disgusted with himself. Hurry and post!! I want them to find him!!! :D

Author's Response: *Cringe* The way I wake my readers wait is nothing short of criminal! I know people probably think I\'ve given up on my stories, but I absolutely have not. It\'s mostly just that circumstances have not been conducive to writing for quite some time. I need to get to the \'comfort\' part of this \'hurt/comfort\' story soon or nobody\'ll be reading it! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Apr 14 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Prelude to Rescue Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
*pokes Estelstheone* when are you going to post mooooooore???!!! I'll give you free cookies if you post soon! :D
Date: Dec 30 2008
Chains by Gemini_Elf, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Aragorn, Elladan and Elrohir are captured by slave traders. The ties and friendships forged between Imladris and Mirkwood are strengthened, as Libren, Rethan, Legolas, Niphredil and Glorfindel ride to the rescue
Note: Sequel of The Black Rose
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21864 Read Count: 16702
Published: Oct 30 2007 Updated: Jul 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1, Broken Hearts Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Aw poor Libren! I hate it when elves get their hearts broken. But it does make it all so much more interesting. I loved the story 'the Black Rose' and I can't wait for more of this one! :)

Author's Response: Yes, mwhaha, I\'m evil. But Nymph has a point. Still, poor Libren *Huggles him* Update coming next week!
Date: Oct 30 2007
Title: Chapter 2: 2. Painful awakening Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
oooo slave traders. Hehe. Did Tarrin make it? Will help come? *plays drmatic music* I hope so, but dont let them get saved to soon! :D

Author's Response: Yeah, Tarrin made it last chapter ^_^ The time-line is majorlly messed up! Help will come...eventually. *Poses to dramatic music* Don\'t worry, this fic will drag on for a while before they are \"saved\" XD Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Nov 06 2007
Title: Chapter 3: 3. Erech Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
ooo! I want a virtual cookie!!! lol. Love the thing about Legolas' eyes + mortal woman = Mortal woman melting! Its probably true. If Legolas looked at me, I would SO melt! XD good chapter, post more soon!

Author's Response: *Hands over virtual cookie* lol. Enjoy! ^_^ lol, if \'Las looked into my eyes, I think you\'d notice a little trickle of drool coming out of my mouth (Eiw!)
Date: Nov 13 2007
Title: Chapter 4: 4. Marked Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
OMG. I cannot believe that! those FF.net 'police' are insane! I love it! Don't listen to them Gemini!

Author's Response: Well, I\'ll definitly keep posting here! Trufully, I love the fic too much to give it up! *Hands over another virtual cookie*
Date: Nov 19 2007
Title: Chapter 5: 5. Legolas' accident Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Heh, Legolas is allways getting into troule like this! Poor guy! He's gonna have fun with this one... accidently killing a guy..
And as for which of your OC's should die...
As much as I would LOVE one of those double chocolate chip cookies, and I'm afraid I can't answer. I love all your OC's (excpet Marko of course) and it would make me sad if any of them died. So I guess a regular cyber cookie will have to do for me. ;)

Author's Response: lol, poor \'Las, the things I put him through...\r\n*Sighs* *Gives you half a double choc chip cookie for being the lucky 13th reviewer and a normal cookie* You love them all huh? The plot bunnies love you ¬_¬ But one will die! ^_^ \r\n
Date: Nov 26 2007
Title: Chapter 6: 6. An oath of revenge, a dead drunk and hot tea Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Lol, I love the title of this chapter. Totally random, yet it makes sense too.
Uhm... I have no idea who she will end up with (Legolas maybe? His brother would have to kill him for that), but as for who I want her to end up with... that would be Libren. I mean, he is so obviously in love with her.
*holds out hands for both cookies and chocolate snowman* ;D

Author's Response: LOL, he couldn\'t be any more obviously in love with her if he suddenly went down on one knee with a rose serenading\r\nher!\r\nlol, the theory about \'Las is incorrect...but it would be amusing to watch Libren kill Legolas. :O I am evilly mean!\r\n*Hands over cookies and chocolate snowman* I really REALLY need to make some of these biscuits ;\'(
Date: Dec 13 2007
Title: Chapter 7: 7. The stables Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Awww, so sweet. The thought of Elrond holding puppies is just adorable! Sorry it took me so long to read/review.

Author's Response: Don\'t worry about it. Where have you been, I\'ve been worried about you :) Yeah, elves and puppies, triple cuteness!
Date: Jan 10 2008
Title: Chapter 9: 9. In the slaver's camp Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Eeeep! Oh no! You can't split the twins up! You just can't!!! *throws something soft* Marko needs to die a SLOW, PAINFUL death. And I have no idea who the other elf is, but Im sure i'll figure it out eventually. *holds out hand for cookie*

Author's Response: lol, I can and will XD More fun this way. *Ducks object* Ha! *Walks into wall* Damn. I keep walking into walls\r\n*Sniffles* I agree, slow, painful, filled with agony...:D You\'ll figure it out at some point! Thanks for reviewing \r\nhunni, looking forward to your next update!
Date: Jan 26 2008
Summary: Aragorn gets into trouble (again) but this time he watches everything from a very different perspective. lol
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3474 Read Count: 8324
Published: Nov 07 2007 Updated: Nov 18 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Green Globe Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Ok, one, to put up a new chapter, you simply login, go to your account area, and click 'add new chapter', which will be next to the stories title. Two, I LOVE the way you devide the segments of the story with the LOTRLOTRLOTR things. its funny :D And three... Aragorn!! Great begining to the story! Post more soon!!

Author's Response: Yay Yay! Someone reviewed! thanks you soooo much. is putting a new chapter up really that simple? I love aragorn\r\ntorture and i hope to incorporate quite a bit here. im glad you liked it.\r\nFishpaste
Date: Nov 07 2007
Title: Chapter 2: Weired Ghostly Happenings Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Lol, Glorfindel all covered in honey, wish I could have seen that! The twins had better watch out! So, Aragorn's a ghost huh? Thats a new one. Bit creepy that he's going down into a grave.. *shiver* lol! Lovin' it!

Author's Response: Yay! Reviews! I love you all! Aragorn isnt quite a ghost. He just lost his body. lol. Thank you so much for reviewing, it keeps me alive!
Date: Nov 08 2007
Title: A Slightly Different Perspective Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
OMG a HORSE?! And not just anyones horse, but Legolas dead horse! Never saw that one coming!! XD It would be SO funny if he actually went in and sat down at the table as a horse. Poor Erestor would probably die of shock! Sweet story, post more soon!

Author's Response: Reviews!!! Im happy again! Thank you so so much, you really make my day. Im glad you like the idea of him being a horse\r\na horse. I may actually have to make him go and sit down at the table now as it seems so popular. Thank you for supporting me in this.

Author's Response: Reviews!!! Im happy again! Thank you so so much, you really make my day. Im glad you like the idea of him being a horse\r\na horse. I may actually have to make him go and sit down at the table now as it seems so popular. Thank you for supporting me in this.
Date: Nov 10 2007
Title: Chapter 1: The Green Globe Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
omg, Legolas is going to freak when he finds out that he is actually riding Aragorn! lol
Date: Nov 14 2007
Title: Chapter 5: Rivendell Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
hehe! The twins are going to kill him for that once he gets back to his normal self again! I can't wait for them to find out its him! But don't rush it, I'm liking Aragorn as a horse (even if he is less cute than when he's a human) lol!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. Dont worry, I plan on keeping Aragorn in horse form for a very long time. Can you\r\n imagine a horse with intelliegence that loves pranks running around Rivendell? lol. Gotta agree with you about \r\nAragorn cuteness. He absolutly rules!
Date: Nov 14 2007
Title: Chapter 6: The Small Choice Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
I think he should do something to get all three of them a the same time. but if you only want him to go for one then it should be... Legolas. *smirk* I love it when people pick on him. But only because I love him so much lol.

Author's Response: Legolas eh? I think I could manage that! Not sure how he could get all three at once, theres only one of him even if he\'s got 4 legs! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Nov 19 2007
Title: Chapter 6: The Small Choice Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
*pokes Fishpaste* When are you going to post moreeeeee??? *is dying to know what Horse/Aragorn will do to... whoever you choose for him to pick on* XD
Date: Dec 04 2008
Summary: Even simple things such as rocks can hold some importance. Featuring Estel and Erestor. Written for OAA Prompt 127—Stone. This counts as a normal fic, however, because I couldn’t make the 500 mark. Oneshot. COMPLETE
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Erestor
Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1660 Read Count: 1156
Published: Sep 05 2008 Updated: Sep 05 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Aw! That was very sweet and totally fantastic! I'm definatly adding it to my favorites!
Question: What is Apostate’s Ruse? Its a fanfic, right? I searched for it on this site but didn't find anything.
Date: May 12 2009
At first sight? by Narya Rated: G [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Flashfic; Eowyn and Faramir's first meeting in the gardens of the Houses of Healing.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eowyn, Faramir
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270 Read Count: 2197
Published: Oct 29 2008 Updated: Oct 29 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: At first sight? Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Faramir is one of my favorite characters, and you portrayed him so well in this. I always wondered what he might have been thinking as he stood on the wall before he met Eowyn. I especially liked the final paragraph. It was very sweet and gentle and touching. Good job! =)

Author's Response: Thanks, Henoluin_Elsilim; Faramir's one of my favourites too, and him and Eowyn falling in love is one of my favourite parts of the LOTR. I'm glad you liked my interpretation of it; thank you for the review!
Date: Feb 27 2009
Summary: Legolas is MINE!! Who here will fight me for him?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Fantasy, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4307 Read Count: 10535
Published: Nov 23 2008 Updated: Mar 28 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Luna, Most Fierce & Awesome Super Ninja, Steps In! Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
hehehe! This looks like fun! I think I might add a chapter if I have enought time to do one.
Date: Mar 27 2009
Summary: A conversation I had with Maedhros when we were literally hanging off of Thangorodrim. We go from discouraged, to completely crazy, to hopeful, to crestfallen, to crazy again. Wow, this should get interesting.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Fingon, Maedhros, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Humor, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6296 Read Count: 1803
Published: Dec 04 2008 Updated: Dec 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fate Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
*claps muchley* Bravo!!
Oh my gosh, I absolutly love this. I almost fell out of my chair as they were sining the show songs (especially the "Lovely bunch of Coconuts"!!) and then i almost cried as Maedhros was begging Fingon to kill him.
So, SO good. The way you portrayed Maedhros and his brothers was really good and really sweet. And all the "hanging" puns were hilarious. I totally loved this. If you decide to make it a story, thats cool, but its totally cool the way it is, too! =D

Author's Response: *Bows deeply* Thank you, Henoluin_ Esilim; your words mean so much to me! :D I cannot thank you enough, your review made me beam! Ah, yes, Humor is something I can’t leave a story without; I just HAD to add “Lovely Bunch of Coconuts”. It just fit. YAY! I made someone nearly cry with my work! *Crosses off New Years Resolutions List* Sorry, I’ve always wanted to do that. Aw, thanks. :) The Feanorians were a lot of fun to write. Celegorm nearly killed me, but it was all a good laugh. There’s been a bit of a debate on the way I portrayed Maedhros—some think I did well, others not because Maedhros sounded too (how do I put this…?) “happy” when I met him. I portrayed him to be happy to see someone else—I didn’t want to make him all gloom and doom just because he was hanging. Yes, that would be unbearable, and I truly feel sorry for him, but why should he take it out on someone else? I was going to change a few things because I think Maedhros was a bit to quick to trust and talk to me, but never go around to it. No one seemed to pick up on my Hangin’ Out and literally Hanging off of Thangorodrim pun. I didn’t even mean for the cliffhanger one to start. Actually, I was going to add what actually happens to me to this, and then another instance where this Original Character Elf gets to “hang” with Maedhros, but I haven’t gotten around to it. With the inspiration of your review, I’m thinking about finishing this off. So, thank you! Peace, Fei. :P
Date: Feb 20 2009
Please by Shadow Maiden Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Thranduil asks just one thing . . .
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 508 Read Count: 1565
Published: Dec 07 2008 Updated: Dec 07 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Please Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
Awww.... *sniffle* that was so sweet! *is tearing up* =')

Author's Response: I love little Legolas and I love Thranduil. I thought they should have a reunion with someone they hold close. Thanks for reading!
Date: Jan 20 2009
It by White Wolf Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 19]
Summary: There are many dark places that exist in Middle-earth. Legolas and Aragorn have the misfortune to find one of them.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39660 Read Count: 17057
Published: Dec 19 2008 Updated: Feb 22 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four Reviewer: Henoluin_Elsilim Signed
gyah! You know, it should be illegal to leave chapters hanging like that! Its going to drive me crazy not knowing where Legolas is! I'm pretty sure it wasn't Legolas that Aragorn tripped over, but I could be wrong... Please, please PLEASE post the next chapter soon! I'll give you free cyber ice-cream if you do! =D

Author's Response: Forgive the long delay in replying. I've been sick. Cliffies can be frustrating, I know, but the plot bunny thinks they're fun. Well, you have a fifty-fifty chance of being right. :o) Due to my illness, I will be late with the next chapter, so I guess I won't get any cyber ice cream. :o(
Date: Mar 03 2009