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very nice, very deep true love.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me you liked it! I don\'t write much anymore, but it is nice to get kudos for the things I have done.
Cute story. If you are still looking for ideas, why don't you just continue with the Fellowship, maybe have Eowyn figure out her little secret and they help each other as Eowyn rides with the army to Gondor?
Just a thought.
Where can I find the full story?
Where can I find the full story?
good story, it got me hooked!
Any release dates for the sequel?
Good start to the story. ican't wait to see what happens next.
WOW! This was amazing!!!
your story line seems interesting, but the style of writing makes it hard to read. Try writing in word first so you can proofread and run spell check, Then cut and paste for you uploads. This gives you an opportunity to organize your thoughts.
You might also want to research and decide if your writing from a first person narrative or if you want the story to be written like a script for a play
Do I see a hint of CS Lewis? Cute idea on the story, Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I just posted a new story caled ithil if you would want to look into that one as well! This one I\'m stuck at.
During your rewrite, you might want to revisit the flashbacks. They made the story a little hard to follow (or maybe it was the second glass of wine :-) ) Overall a very enjoyable story, I can't wait to see the changes to it.
Author's Response: lol, well, perhaps it was the wine ;p. Which flashbacks do you mean? The ones with Gloríon? Or all of them in general?
During your rewrite, you might want to revisit the flashbacks. They made the story a little hard to follow (or maybe it was the second glass of wine :-) ) Overall a very enjoyable story, I can't wait to see the changes to it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Good start to the story! I can't wait to see where you are going with this one. You might want to describe the characters a little better, hair color, eye color, etc. No spelling or grammatical errors.
Author's Response: Sorry, Lauren, but that was just a short fic. Goleck Dune and Pocosin the scout also appear in \"The Lucky Arrow\" and \"Arwen\'s Journey.\"
Great start t o a good story. Can't wait to see more.
Awesome story!! Very well written. I would love to have the link to the essay about Legolas.
Thanks, and keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Aw... thanks so much! I'm thrilled you are enjoying it! I'll be posting chapter six as soon as possible. :) Here's the link to the essay about Legolas. I hope you enjoy it!
http://www.istad.org/tolkien/legolas.html
I did NOT write this, btw. Let me know if the link doesn't come through. Blessings! ~Ila
I like the fact that you used the biblical perspective. Did you know that CS Lewis was an atheist until he became good friends with Tolkien?
Author's Response: No, I don't believe I knew that. That's very interesting... Good thing God used Tolkien to straighten him out! If he didn't we wouldn't have Narnia! ;) Thanks a ton for the interesting fact and the review!
Blessings! ~Ila
Haldir is always a good choice!!
Author's Response: As much as I love our favorite March Warden, I'm afraid he would not be the correct choice for inserting into PC. I really can't see him following and allowing a bunch of young human boys to make rather rash and reckless decisions. He's much too smart for that! ;) Thanks for the opinion though! It means a lot to hear from you! ~Ila
OK. if not Haldir, how about the twins? They seem the kind to do crazy things!
Author's Response: I seriously considered including the twins, but I'm writing a fic with them in it on fanfiction.net. I want to try something new. Besides, imagine a young Aragorn, Peter, and Caspian all in one place.... poor Legolas. It is a mixture for chaos. ;) So, the sequel will probably be Aragorn (though he'd be called Estel), though who knows? I may changed my mind and do the twins. However, I doubt it. *shrugs* Thanks for the thought! ~Ila