Reviews by Sivan
You! by Sivan Rated: NC-17 starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: One sentence could change everything... somehow...
Categories: Actor Slash Characters: Orlando Bloom, Sean Bean, Viggo Mortensen
Genres: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 616 Read Count: 2603
Published: Dec 12 2004 Updated: Dec 12 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Thank you...

Believe me, i'm doing my best through RL.

Sivan Shemesh
Date: May 15 2006
Summary: Merry and Pippin tearing up the ship...Aragorn stalking Elrond...Boromir abandoning ship mid-cruise...and a disaster to rival Titanic!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elrond, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Humor, Parody, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4268 Read Count: 2048
Published: Feb 06 2007 Updated: Feb 06 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Default Chapter Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Original idea you have in here.

Love it.

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thank-you!
Date: Feb 06 2007
Legolas by Snowflake Rated: G Round robin [Reviews - 11]
Summary: 5 ways to torture Legolas.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Ways To Torture...
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 252 Read Count: 3061
Published: Feb 20 2007 Updated: Mar 20 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Actually choice number 4 with the Mary Sue, should be killed him right away... but that's my opinion.

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thanks for that comment and thanks for the review.
Date: Feb 20 2007
Summary: After an argument with Aragorn, Legolas disappears. When Aragorn at last finds him, he discovers that Legolas no longer remembers their friendship, and not even Aragorn himself. What will it take for Legolas to remember? Written for the EAC entry, ‘Prejudice in Middle-Earth.’
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9622 Read Count: 5653
Published: Jun 29 2007 Updated: Jun 06 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Meetings Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Great chapter Mellon-nin, poor Aragorn, as he must be wonder what the heck is wrong with Legolas.

Looking forward to read the following chapter.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and try to update ASAP!

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh
Date: Jul 12 2007
Summary: Poor Legolas is forced to spend several hours on a tree with an injured and grumpy young Estel. But a few hours can change a lot and the young man learns an important lesson, surprising everyone. Written for Teitho challenge: On Location
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3338 Read Count: 1447
Published: Aug 15 2007 Updated: Aug 15 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sivan Signed
I second that with Ria, welcome to lotrfanfiction, mellon-nin, and good luck with the next teitho as well.

It's a great story and i love to re-read it again.

Have a great trip, i will miss you, and remember - keep smiling.

*Hugs and kisses*

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for re-reading, mellon nin! I love this place and I think I\'ll post my other stories here as well (when I\'m not too lazy)
Date: Aug 15 2007
Summary: Elladan receives a black tunic from Erestor for his Begetting Day but this is no ordinary tunic. Elladan and Elrohir end up going on the adventure of a lifetime but will it be for better or worse? Please R&R
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5160 Read Count: 9573
Published: Nov 04 2007 Updated: Nov 13 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Strange Gift Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Life will be worst in Imladris... as the black tunic - he could hear voices, i do hope that he won't kill his half... I can smell lots of angst in this story, and you should update it asap.

Are you making Elladan Psycho?

Thank you for posting! :-), and keep up the great work that you are doing, and don't forget to update.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Hannon le. I don\'t know whether or not i\'ll make Dan a psycho or not but i\'ll think about it. I just wanna say how \r\nmuch appreaciate this review, your story was one of the first i read on this site and i loved it. Thanks for reviewing \r\nand i\'ll proabably update tomorrow - Li
Date: Nov 05 2007
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Talking With Miley & Erestor Reviewer: Sivan Signed
But Elladan won't get it off, the voice might tell him, like precious and the ring...

Thank you for your review, and i created another series: Eldarion's Stories, where you can find all Eldarion's stories...

That was quick update... now i do hope, that Elladan wouldn't do something that he might regret of, and where is lord Elrond? He should make appearance, which i will love to read of how he's handle it... *grin*

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update asap!

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, the update was quick. I was halfway through writing the second chapter when i had to leave for somewhere. \r\nI think i will drag Elrond into it, i always manage to anyway. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: Nov 05 2007
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Can't Get It Off Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Nice, just hope that he will not kill my Legolas.

Great chapter.

*Hugs*

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Nah, Elladan won\'t kill Leggy, i\'ve killed that welf too many times before, about thrice i think. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: Nov 08 2007
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Overtaken of Mind & Body Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Elrohir will be back like Sam, he figure out that it had something to do with the tunic, he will back.

*Hugs both Elladan and Elrohir*

Great chapter, love the angst.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, this one was pretty angsty. I actually got one of things Elrohir says off Sam from the third movie when Frodo tells him to get lost. When you think about it this is just a d ifferent version of LOTR but with different main characters and a slightly different plot. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: Nov 08 2007
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Guilt Trip Reviewer: Sivan Signed
By the last lines, it seemed that Elrond does not have faith in his sons... health.

Great chapter.

*Hugs*

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah but when ya think about all the injuries they\'ve accumulated during their lives, it makes sense. I\'m glad you liked it and i\'m sorry it\'s taken me so long to reply, i only just got home. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: Nov 09 2007
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - What Happened? Reviewer: Sivan Signed
I love Thranduil and Legolas in your story.

Glad that Thranduil caring of Elrohir, and he is right, not wished him the worst...

*Hugs: Elrohir, Legolas, and Thranduil.*

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great weekend and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, after some of the stuff i\'ve done to Thranduil in my other fic Death Brands Are Horrible Things i thought it\'d be nice to have a kind Thranduil for once. I haven\'t thought much about this one my mind has been overrun by the Phantom of the Opera this weekend and i\'ve been making plans for a LOTR take on that. It\'s a lovely story. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: Nov 09 2007
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Down By The Forest River Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Great chapter, though poor Elrohir.

I don't wish him to be the one to pray the price, it's not fair... *Hugs Elrohir*

What about Elrond? He should feel something about his son, ain't he?

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update asap.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Don\'t worry about Elrohir, he won\'t pay the price (to arulia34\'s dislike) but stuff will happen, there will be a sequel to this now, after finding some information about the Forest River. Elrond will be brought back into this at the very end and that is how it will lead onto the sequel. I\'ll try and write some more tomorrow at school but no guarantees, i also wanna start work on my new fic that\'s a crossover with Phantom of the Opera, hopefully that one will be good as well. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: Nov 10 2007
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - This Is All My Fault Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Looking forward to read how you help Elrohir about his home and family.

Great chapter. Thank you for updating.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Firstly i just wanna say thankx to you, for some reason, your reviews are more motivating. Maybe it\'s just something special about you ^_^ I\'ll try and finish it tonight. Thanks again for all the reviews - Li
Date: Nov 12 2007
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - To Mirkwood Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Finally, for Elrond to leave Imladris.

Thank you for updating it, mellon-nin.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update as soon as you can.

Hope for Elrond that he will reach in time, or Thranduil will get everything explained to him...

*Hugs and Ksses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, i decided i kick the elf lord out of Imladris for a while. I\'m gonna take a break from the twins for a while and write about my rediscovered passion, Harry Pothead. Once again, thanx for all the reviews you\'ve made for this fic, i really appreciate it. Thanx again - Li
Date: Nov 14 2007
Summary: Ten Mary Sues...nine challenges...one winner. Who will be the ultimate LOTR Mary Sue?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13082 Read Count: 6483
Published: Nov 12 2007 Updated: Dec 09 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Challenge 1: Mary Sue Q and A Reviewer: Sivan Signed
I love your plot, looking forward for more of it.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update as soon as you can.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: Nov 12 2007
Betrayal by Gemini_Elf Rated: R [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Elladan has been betrayed too many times in his life...
Note: This is a sort've trailer (No spoilers! Just hints!) for one of my up and coming fics (Think in about two years, it's still a while away yet)
Chronologically in Eternal Mellyn, it is after the War of the Ring, and all the fics posted at the moment are set before it.

Disclaimer: I do not own LOTR and I do not make any profit from writing this work of fiction.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: First Draft, Torture, Violence
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297 Read Count: 2620

Published: Dec 26 2007 Updated: Dec 26 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Traitor Reviewer: Sivan Signed
You are so true in those words, mellon-nin.

Anger is the fire that only wished to conquer as you forget about what is in front of you.

*Hugs*

Nice trailer.

Have a great holidays season, and i hope that there good thing between you and your friend, as anger could get all the hurt words and things that you left inside... and made a chaos.

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: *Hugs* Thanks mellon-nin. Things...are changing. Again. Friendships are broken...but new friendships are made.\r\nHave a nice winter!
Date: Dec 26 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Traitor Reviewer: Sivan Signed
This is where you go wrong, mellon-nin.

I barely had winter in Israel, and winter is barely rain, real rain for 1-3 days and back to summer days though cold winds.

About friendship, when some friendship ends, a good one start and bring more happiness and trust, as betrayel is about trust.

*Hugs* (good night)

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Oops...I forget people are in different climate/time zones...Happy summer then! I hope I find more friendships...Trust\r\nis one of the most important things in the world...*Hugs* Night!
Date: Dec 26 2007
Summary: Elladan wants to leave and live on his own.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 333 Read Count: 1406
Published: Jun 14 2008 Updated: Jun 14 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Promises are made to be broken Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Nice twist in the end. Poor Elrohir to thought that, and Elladan answer was quite a mean to him... love the angst you done with this two, and i'm glad that Elrond was there.

Thank you for wrriting it! :-)

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: thanks thanks thanks for your review! You made my day ^^
Date: Jun 15 2008
Summary: Summary: Legolas finds trouble and conflicting loyalties when he defies his father’s bidding to seek his friend Aragorn.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23384 Read Count: 8630
Published: Jun 17 2008 Updated: Jun 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Homecoming Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Oh... This is just mean to end this chapter like this, i want to know the reasons.

Love the angst, hope to read more soon.

Keep up the great work that you are doing on your fic, and keep smiling,

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. There's plenty of angst in this story, so stay tuned! I have just posted Chapter 2.so you can read more.
Date: Jun 17 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boe aphad (The need to follow) Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Intresting, still i need more to know more. Thank you for posting.

I saw once that you posted at elvenlords, but i missed the first chapters, so i'll wait for you to update in this site *which is the greates*.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and I hope you'll update soon.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yes it was posted on the Elvenlords list, and also at Naice a Nilme. Thanks for your comments - I will keep updating!
Date: Jun 18 2008
Tolog Mellon by Nosterineth Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Legolas simply wanted to take back what was his, but due to a mistake he found more than he had bargained for. Can Aragorn save him? And can he survive this adventure? Based on Mellon Chronicles.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General, Other
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19209 Read Count: 4904
Published: Nov 13 2008 Updated: Apr 01 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: The Stake Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Hello sweetie,

I'm looking forward for your next update, hope you'll update soon.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Happy New Year,

Sivan

Author's Response: Sivan! Hi! *hugs back* Oh, yes, I hope I'll be able to update quite soon. But, unfortunately, no promises. Thanks! Happy New Year to you as well!
Date: Dec 30 2008
Puppy Perception by Moth Rated: G [Reviews - 74]
Summary: The Shire Through The Eyes Of A Puppy... Post War Of The Ring... Follow Diamond, Pippin, Merry, Estella And All The Other Hobbits In Their Day To Day Lives...
Follow Them Though Their Struggles And Elations, Births And Deaths...
Expect The Unexpected... Feel Free To Review :D
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Denethor, Diamond Took, Eglantine Took, Elanor Gamgee, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Ents, Estella Brandybuck, Faramir, Faramir Took, Fatty Bolger, Frodo, Frodo Gamgee, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Goldberry, Legolas, Merry, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Paladin Took, Pearl Took, Pervinca Took, Pimpernel Took, Pippin, Radagast, Rosie, Sam, Saruman, Tom Bombadil, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: Puppy Perception
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 709445 Read Count: 95466
Published: Sep 09 2009 Updated: May 09 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Day One Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Oh... my... didn't they got eaten before...? grin...

Looking forward for more.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update asap.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: hehe.. not eaten... :)
Date: Sep 12 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Day One Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Great first chapter, love the way they entered the pet into their lives.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and write more... or asap.

*Hugs*

See you in the next chapter,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: thanks :) plenty more to come :D
Date: Sep 12 2009
He is Mine Now by rosethorn59 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Legolas is kidnapped by Arwen,being the victim of her affections, as she chooses him over Aragorn after one days' acquaintance.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12758 Read Count: 3156
Published: Nov 22 2009 Updated: Dec 03 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Arwen's Choice Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Thank you for dedicate this story for me sweetie.

Legolas got himself into one big mass call: Arwen... grin..

Hope that Aragorn will open his eyes, to see that his friend not care enough of Arwen and get things better... evil grin... though Legolas will needs his help.

Legolas is going to get himself colors by any abuse that Arwen will do to him... grin... poor Legolas.

Thank you for post it in this site sweetie, and thank you for your writing.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update asap.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh
Date: Nov 22 2009