Reviews by Sivan
You! by Sivan Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: One sentence could change everything... somehow...
Categories: Actor Slash Characters: Orlando Bloom, Sean Bean, Viggo Mortensen
Genres: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 616 Read Count: 2583
Published: 12/12/04 Updated: 12/12/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Thank you...

Believe me, i'm doing my best through RL.

Sivan Shemesh
Date: 05/15/06
Summary: Merry and Pippin tearing up the ship...Aragorn stalking Elrond...Boromir abandoning ship mid-cruise...and a disaster to rival Titanic!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elrond, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Humor, Parody, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4268 Read Count: 2005
Published: 02/06/07 Updated: 02/06/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Default Chapter Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Original idea you have in here.

Love it.

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thank-you!
Date: 02/06/07
Legolas by Snowflake Rated: G Round robin [Reviews - 11]
Summary: 5 ways to torture Legolas.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Ways To Torture...
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 252 Read Count: 3046
Published: 02/20/07 Updated: 03/20/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Actually choice number 4 with the Mary Sue, should be killed him right away... but that's my opinion.

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thanks for that comment and thanks for the review.
Date: 02/20/07
Summary: After an argument with Aragorn, Legolas disappears. When Aragorn at last finds him, he discovers that Legolas no longer remembers their friendship, and not even Aragorn himself. What will it take for Legolas to remember? Written for the EAC entry, ‘Prejudice in Middle-Earth.’
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9622 Read Count: 5589
Published: 06/29/07 Updated: 06/06/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Meetings Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Great chapter Mellon-nin, poor Aragorn, as he must be wonder what the heck is wrong with Legolas.

Looking forward to read the following chapter.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and try to update ASAP!

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh
Date: 07/12/07
Summary: Poor Legolas is forced to spend several hours on a tree with an injured and grumpy young Estel. But a few hours can change a lot and the young man learns an important lesson, surprising everyone. Written for Teitho challenge: On Location
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3338 Read Count: 1415
Published: 08/15/07 Updated: 08/15/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sivan Signed
I second that with Ria, welcome to lotrfanfiction, mellon-nin, and good luck with the next teitho as well.

It's a great story and i love to re-read it again.

Have a great trip, i will miss you, and remember - keep smiling.

*Hugs and kisses*

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for re-reading, mellon nin! I love this place and I think I\'ll post my other stories here as well (when I\'m not too lazy)
Date: 08/15/07
Summary: Elladan receives a black tunic from Erestor for his Begetting Day but this is no ordinary tunic. Elladan and Elrohir end up going on the adventure of a lifetime but will it be for better or worse? Please R&R
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5160 Read Count: 9524
Published: 11/04/07 Updated: 11/13/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Strange Gift Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Life will be worst in Imladris... as the black tunic - he could hear voices, i do hope that he won't kill his half... I can smell lots of angst in this story, and you should update it asap.

Are you making Elladan Psycho?

Thank you for posting! :-), and keep up the great work that you are doing, and don't forget to update.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Hannon le. I don\'t know whether or not i\'ll make Dan a psycho or not but i\'ll think about it. I just wanna say how \r\nmuch appreaciate this review, your story was one of the first i read on this site and i loved it. Thanks for reviewing \r\nand i\'ll proabably update tomorrow - Li
Date: 11/05/07
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Talking With Miley & Erestor Reviewer: Sivan Signed
But Elladan won't get it off, the voice might tell him, like precious and the ring...

Thank you for your review, and i created another series: Eldarion's Stories, where you can find all Eldarion's stories...

That was quick update... now i do hope, that Elladan wouldn't do something that he might regret of, and where is lord Elrond? He should make appearance, which i will love to read of how he's handle it... *grin*

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update asap!

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, the update was quick. I was halfway through writing the second chapter when i had to leave for somewhere. \r\nI think i will drag Elrond into it, i always manage to anyway. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: 11/05/07
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Can't Get It Off Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Nice, just hope that he will not kill my Legolas.

Great chapter.

*Hugs*

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Nah, Elladan won\'t kill Leggy, i\'ve killed that welf too many times before, about thrice i think. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: 11/08/07
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Overtaken of Mind & Body Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Elrohir will be back like Sam, he figure out that it had something to do with the tunic, he will back.

*Hugs both Elladan and Elrohir*

Great chapter, love the angst.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, this one was pretty angsty. I actually got one of things Elrohir says off Sam from the third movie when Frodo tells him to get lost. When you think about it this is just a d ifferent version of LOTR but with different main characters and a slightly different plot. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: 11/08/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Guilt Trip Reviewer: Sivan Signed
By the last lines, it seemed that Elrond does not have faith in his sons... health.

Great chapter.

*Hugs*

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah but when ya think about all the injuries they\'ve accumulated during their lives, it makes sense. I\'m glad you liked it and i\'m sorry it\'s taken me so long to reply, i only just got home. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: 11/09/07
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - What Happened? Reviewer: Sivan Signed
I love Thranduil and Legolas in your story.

Glad that Thranduil caring of Elrohir, and he is right, not wished him the worst...

*Hugs: Elrohir, Legolas, and Thranduil.*

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great weekend and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, after some of the stuff i\'ve done to Thranduil in my other fic Death Brands Are Horrible Things i thought it\'d be nice to have a kind Thranduil for once. I haven\'t thought much about this one my mind has been overrun by the Phantom of the Opera this weekend and i\'ve been making plans for a LOTR take on that. It\'s a lovely story. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: 11/09/07
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Down By The Forest River Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Great chapter, though poor Elrohir.

I don't wish him to be the one to pray the price, it's not fair... *Hugs Elrohir*

What about Elrond? He should feel something about his son, ain't he?

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update asap.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Don\'t worry about Elrohir, he won\'t pay the price (to arulia34\'s dislike) but stuff will happen, there will be a sequel to this now, after finding some information about the Forest River. Elrond will be brought back into this at the very end and that is how it will lead onto the sequel. I\'ll try and write some more tomorrow at school but no guarantees, i also wanna start work on my new fic that\'s a crossover with Phantom of the Opera, hopefully that one will be good as well. Thanks for reviewing - Li
Date: 11/10/07
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - This Is All My Fault Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Looking forward to read how you help Elrohir about his home and family.

Great chapter. Thank you for updating.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Firstly i just wanna say thankx to you, for some reason, your reviews are more motivating. Maybe it\'s just something special about you ^_^ I\'ll try and finish it tonight. Thanks again for all the reviews - Li
Date: 11/12/07
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - To Mirkwood Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Finally, for Elrond to leave Imladris.

Thank you for updating it, mellon-nin.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update as soon as you can.

Hope for Elrond that he will reach in time, or Thranduil will get everything explained to him...

*Hugs and Ksses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yeah, i decided i kick the elf lord out of Imladris for a while. I\'m gonna take a break from the twins for a while and write about my rediscovered passion, Harry Pothead. Once again, thanx for all the reviews you\'ve made for this fic, i really appreciate it. Thanx again - Li
Date: 11/14/07
Summary: Ten Mary Sues...nine challenges...one winner. Who will be the ultimate LOTR Mary Sue?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13082 Read Count: 6451
Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 12/09/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Challenge 1: Mary Sue Q and A Reviewer: Sivan Signed
I love your plot, looking forward for more of it.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and update as soon as you can.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/12/07
Betrayal by Gemini_Elf Rated: R [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Elladan has been betrayed too many times in his life...
Note: This is a sort've trailer (No spoilers! Just hints!) for one of my up and coming fics (Think in about two years, it's still a while away yet)
Chronologically in Eternal Mellyn, it is after the War of the Ring, and all the fics posted at the moment are set before it.

Disclaimer: I do not own LOTR and I do not make any profit from writing this work of fiction.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: First Draft, Torture, Violence
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297 Read Count: 2582

Published: 12/26/07 Updated: 12/26/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Traitor Reviewer: Sivan Signed
You are so true in those words, mellon-nin.

Anger is the fire that only wished to conquer as you forget about what is in front of you.

*Hugs*

Nice trailer.

Have a great holidays season, and i hope that there good thing between you and your friend, as anger could get all the hurt words and things that you left inside... and made a chaos.

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: *Hugs* Thanks mellon-nin. Things...are changing. Again. Friendships are broken...but new friendships are made.\r\nHave a nice winter!
Date: 12/26/07
Title: Chapter 1: Traitor Reviewer: Sivan Signed
This is where you go wrong, mellon-nin.

I barely had winter in Israel, and winter is barely rain, real rain for 1-3 days and back to summer days though cold winds.

About friendship, when some friendship ends, a good one start and bring more happiness and trust, as betrayel is about trust.

*Hugs* (good night)

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Oops...I forget people are in different climate/time zones...Happy summer then! I hope I find more friendships...Trust\r\nis one of the most important things in the world...*Hugs* Night!
Date: 12/26/07
Summary: Elladan wants to leave and live on his own.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 333 Read Count: 1388
Published: 06/14/08 Updated: 06/14/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Promises are made to be broken Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Nice twist in the end. Poor Elrohir to thought that, and Elladan answer was quite a mean to him... love the angst you done with this two, and i'm glad that Elrond was there.

Thank you for wrriting it! :-)

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: thanks thanks thanks for your review! You made my day ^^
Date: 06/15/08
Summary: Summary: Legolas finds trouble and conflicting loyalties when he defies his father’s bidding to seek his friend Aragorn.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23384 Read Count: 8567
Published: 06/17/08 Updated: 06/24/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Homecoming Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Oh... This is just mean to end this chapter like this, i want to know the reasons.

Love the angst, hope to read more soon.

Keep up the great work that you are doing on your fic, and keep smiling,

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. There's plenty of angst in this story, so stay tuned! I have just posted Chapter 2.so you can read more.
Date: 06/17/08
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boe aphad (The need to follow) Reviewer: Sivan Signed
Intresting, still i need more to know more. Thank you for posting.

I saw once that you posted at elvenlords, but i missed the first chapters, so i'll wait for you to update in this site *which is the greates*.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic and I hope you'll update soon.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Author's Response: Yes it was posted on the Elvenlords list, and also at Naice a Nilme. Thanks for your comments - I will keep updating!
Date: 06/18/08