Lol! Good story! I like little Estel stories and this one is humorous without going over the top. Good storyline and not too graphic, nonetheless, a brill story!
Kee-kee-kee-kee! Love it! Especially number 51 and 47! Thanks for writing this!
ARGH! This scared me and I'm extremely frightened! Although I am not against M/M pairings, and the story is very every funny!
LOL! I am rolling around in my seat right now! This is so funny and I love your username!
Uhhh... This was scary but at the same time totally hilarious to read. The characters are out of character but this is what makes it even funnier. I hope to read more of your stories soon.
This is appropriate humor! More people should review this as it is groovyfied and I love it!
This is one of the best AU stories I have ever read. You should write another one, and yes, you should try to update regularly to not keep your readers in wait for too long. Overall, a great story!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, I'm gla dyou like it. I'll consider writing anothe rAU but for now I just want to get this one done :P. I really hate that I leave it so long, I just get caught up with work and school so much. I'm really sorry, but I'll try to get he next chapter up ASAP. Thanks again
Hehehehe! That is one of the funniest things I've heard in ages! Please write more soon!
Indeed. Very well-written and very wise. Well done! I hope to read more of your works soon... I think I already have. Anyway, this is well brilliant! I'd love to write a poem about seedcake but I have never tasted it... Darn. An excellent story, and I love your pen-name! -
Author's Response: Thanks so much, meerkatale. I had almost forgotten this story but I think I should remember it more often and not force the words :) Good luck with your poem!
This is simply beautiful! The last chapter is entancing, although I would have loved to read about Frodo's first word being spoken. What do you think it would be? It is enchanting to read Frodo's mother's diary; enchanting and lovely. I love this! Well done!
Author's Response: You mean, Frodo's first word apart from "no"? :) That's a good question, actually and I don't think I can answer it just yet. Maybe Primula will tell me one day so I can write it down?
This story is so... Natural. It seems to be exactly the sorts of things Pip would say, and how Frodo would retaliate. I'm glad that everyone thinks that Frodo eventually ages... In the moves he still looked like a tween, and no older throughout any of it. However, back to the point... I love this story! It's as good as your others, and the second-last paragraph about Pippin being cheeky puts them both into character. Well written! :-)
Author's Response: Aging is not a bad thing, especially not at Frodo's age. He can be proud of those silver strands and Pippin, well, Pippin will tease him about them, but only because he loves Frodo so much. Thanks a lot!
Love the title of this story! It is quite emotional and I do blame Legolas's father, and I should love to see a sequel on how Aragorn and Gimli cope with his death. However this story is very well written, as the plot flows and there is enough speech to keep one interested. It's a very good story; you should definately continue with your writing of Elves and their friends.
Oh, thank you for the translations at the end; I was going to ask about that! It's good to see someone else's POV about Legolas' and Estel's relationship, and I'm glad he doesn't have anything against it. Very well and delicately wrote, and I hope to read more of your stories soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind & lovely feedback--It is truly appreciated. I hope to start writing again; I have been on a hiatus of sorts due to RL. I have read many wonderful A/L stories, but the majority of them seemed to be along the theme of a doomed relationship where Aragorn leaves Legolas for duty, marries Arwen and neither gets to follow their hearts. This is unacceptable to me. Why write fanfiction if you can't change things around? *g* Patty.
Very emotional - I loved reading this as it is rather calming but makes you think about certain things - Frodo's parents, and him having to cope with the pain. It also shows that Pippin is a Took through and through, and the brotherly bond between them. Well done!
Very good! Humorous too, the way it connects with the first chapter! I love to think of Frodo as being a faunt; it's so cute, and gathering from your pen-name and subjects of writing, you like Hobbits too! Way to go! -
Author's Response: You will n ot find me write anything other than hobbits :) Unless, of course, it is hobbits interacting with Elves, Dwarves, Men... whatever :) I agree, Frodo must have been a really cute faunt :)
"I wonder how Gimli will look clean-shaven?" Is my favourite line in this story. It is very good and although one of the warnings is slash it's not over-done, which is good. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am pleased you liked reading this and I am grateful for the feedback. I enjoyed writing this one; I love angst, but I like to do a bit of humor occasionally, too! *hugs* Patty.
Wow. I wasn't expecting this, but it's good. Not too descriptive, and you can see rather than read the passion. You are a very good and blessed writer.
Author's Response: Oh wow--Thank you so very much! It is always satisfying to me to meet or exceed what the reader wants or expects. You have made my day. <3 Patty.
Dramatic. Completely AU, as you warned, but it was delicately told. I am glad we do not know how he died. It gives an aura of mystery and it makes it more emotional. Good story!
Kee-kee-kee-kee. Love it!
Yepyep. This is a very honest and true poem which desrcibes the courage and sizes of Hobbits very well. I gather from your name that you love Hobbits - just like me! If you like stories about Merry you may enjoy my stories! I will look at some of your other stories/poems soon!
Author's Response: Thank-you for reading and your nice review! I will take a look at your stories.