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This is a good story. No doubt you are one of the best authors here to write from Gimli's POV, and it is very well written. There is no speech, which makes it better, and the description is nice without it being overwhelming. I'm glad that you write about Legolas' and Gimli's friendship - it is a matter that not all authors attempt. Maybe you should post it on the challenge 'Friendship' to get it more noticed, as it is quite sentimental and portrays both Legolas and Gimli very well. Good luck with your writing, and keep posting!
Dark indeed. Yet incredibly soulful. I love the emotion and message that it gives.
meerkatalex
Oof. Why'd it go for Legolas? The descriptive writing is good, and I will read and review the next chapter. I assume 'TBC' means 'To be Continued'? Anyway, yes, this story is good.
Author's Response: No mysterious reason. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. :o) I'm glad you like my writing and think the story is good. You are right about TBC.
Lovely ending. Good idea for Aragorn's sword to be found by Legolas, and viceversa; there are no spelling mistakes - except 'ax' which is spelt: 'axe'. This story is very good.
Author's Response: Glad you like how the story ends. They are not always easy to write. I, myself, thought the sword part was kind of neat. :o) Thanks for liking the story. Actually ax is spelled both ways. Americans tend to spell it without the e and the British with. I'm American, hence ax.
The last paragraph is quite thought-provoking. However there are a lot of rhymes in this story, which makes it short and to the point. It's good to see Frodo's POV on this subject as I have not read much about his reasons for not settling down/marrying.
You should definately continue writing - I am a Hobbit fan so I'm glad to read anything about any of them, especially Merry and Pippin, although I enjoyed reading this overall. Best wishes in your present and future writing,
meerkatalex
Indeed. Sam letting Frodo go at the Gray Havens was one of the hardest things he ever had to do. Hopefully you write some more - you obviously have a passion for writing poems!
meerkatalex
Hmm. This poem expresses Frodo's thoughts and feelings quite well, although it is rather long. Maybe you should write a poem from Sam's POV on the way to Mordor?
I love the way that you have handled Sam's and Frodo's relationship, almost tenderly, as they have a bond that is so strong. You have portrayed Frodo well, and the rhymes are quite good. Please read some of my stories - I'm sure you would enjoy "Joined", which is about Frodo and Sam too. Well I've enjoyed reading and reviewing, and I wish you luck with your writing!
meerkatalex
"Sam was there" - this is so true! I hope you like the other reviews I have left for your stories, and I have to tell you this is one of the best!
meerkatalex
Lovely descriptive writing at the beginning; you made a few spelling mistakes but I like this story. Still reading as long as you keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like my descriptions. I try to catch all the errors, but some slip past me anyway. Glad you are enjoying the story. I'll keep at it, don't worry.
Still reading, dude. Write some more fictional humor, please. I think you're good at it. Deformed ears... *Laughing*
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still reading. I appreciate that. Thanks. I like to sprinkle humor in my stories. I think when L & A are together, it just comes out. I thought the deformed ears part was funny, too. Poor dumb troll.
OMG! What happened?!?! If this were a book I'd be flipping over to the next page immediatly!
Author's Response: Good! I love it when my readers are so into a story they just want to keep reading as fast as they can. That's a nice compliment.
Very cute, interesting and awesome story - I like it!
meerkatalex
Author's Response: Thank you, meerkatalex. I'm delighted to know that you enjoyed the story.
Hmm. Very casual and light, not too deep, this discussion. However Faramir is right, he may chose who he wants to be with, whatever be their sex, age, etc. Good writing!
Author's Response: :O I am SO sorry I haven't replied! Chances of anyone revieiwing my older stuff is slim (Because it's honestly not that good, two years will really change a person) so I never check for reviews! Thanks very much for reviewing :)
Oh... Kay. Yes, the movies could have been a lot worse, but I do like them. Thank goodness Disney hasn't done a lotr movie. OMG, can you imagine someone twisting and turning all of the plot! That would be just unbearable! :D Anyway this is a very funny if somewhat thought-provoking story. Just brill!
Author's Response: Thanks. I like the movies too, but I wouldn't have liked them if they'd been like this.
Well done! I've read this all the way through, and it's very good. Normally I do not read actor fics as they are hard to come across but this one is very cool!
This is deep, moving and emotional. It is very well written and puts one's view into words originally and perfectly.
This story is so nice; I never thought that there may be a monument for Frodo and Sam if they had died. Lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks meerkatalex; somehow I didn't get this comment before and just now saw it. Glad you like the story and thanks for commenting! Yes, there would have to be a monument, wouldn't there?
Thanks again!
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HAH! Laughing out loud at the minute! Brilliant humor!
lol! This is brilliant! I especially love the dig about Gollum! It's so funny! :-)
meerkatalex
This is such a sad story but it's so beautifully written! I like it that Pippin had bacome older in spirit and in mind, whereas Merry is eight years older than him still and it's beginning to take it's tole. You've written this superbly and it's a good story, just the right amount of emotion. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks oh-so-much! It warms me right up inside to come back here to find a review like this. ^^ I'm really glad you liked it and thank you for the compliments! *blush*