Reviews by meerkatalex
Summary: Another response written again to answear one of Karlimir Stonewain's wonderful challenges, this time its "Whats in a name"
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1083 Read Count: 2362
Published: Feb 04 2008 Updated: Feb 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
This was very interesting to read as it tells the reader more about yourself whilst answering why and how you chose your name. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always find these essay challenges a pleasant challenge to write :)
Date: Dec 24 2008
Black Arrow by owlett, Adora Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Death scene of Boromir.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Legolas, Merry, Other Canon Character, Pippin, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160 Read Count: 1911
Published: Feb 22 2008 Updated: Feb 22 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Horn of Gondor Sounds One Last Time Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
It would be great if this story could be continued! I like it; will there be more?

meerkatalex
Date: Apr 25 2009
Summary: What if the Battle of the Black Gate failed? What if Frodo and Sam were delayed in destroying the Ring? What can Middle-earth do against the black tide that now threatens it.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Faramir
Genres: Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11386 Read Count: 7169
Published: Mar 10 2008 Updated: Jul 17 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Very thought-provoking AU story. Kind of scary to think about too, but nevertheless intriguing. I love it, but there could be some more emotion in it for people (like me! ;-) ) who thrive on reading angsty stories. However I do love this and hope to read more of your works!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Thank-you! At first I thought this fanfic wouldn't work too well. (It is my first shot at an AU. Don't you worry, there are going to be some good emotion coming soon! Shall be posting the other chapters soon. (I am currently working on chapter 5). Thank-you again for reading!
Date: Jan 07 2009
Summary: Boromir has died. Unfortunatly, there has been a glitch. Rather than ending up in the Realm of Mandos, Boromir has been sent to Hogwarts. But this is not the Hogwarts that we've all fondly read of . . . .
Categories: Book-verse, Crossovers Characters: Boromir
Genres: Action/Adventure, Horror, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2675 Read Count: 2687
Published: Apr 11 2008 Updated: May 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Other. . . world? Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Whoa... These stories you write are bizarre - in a good way, of course. I'm going to read the next chapter now. Isn't that spiffing? *Snickers* This story is humorous, dude! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Bizarre is an understatement! Thanks for the review! At the moment it's kind of at a stand still... but who knows, I mght continue it some day.
Date: Jun 15 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Something happened! Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Still reading, dude! D'you respond to these reviews? I'd better check next time I come on here to read these types o'stories!

Author's Response: Sorry! I haven't been on here in ages... :P
Date: Jun 15 2008
Orc Talk! by Kitt Otter Rated: PG [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Young Legolas learns a new word and his older brother learns to be more prudent. MEFA 2008 Nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1721 Read Count: 2150
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Orc Talk! Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
This story makes me laugh! It is funny but also reminds me of when my younger brothers & sisters learnt 'naughty' words. ((But according to my parents 'loo' is a naughty word; so we must say 'toilet' instead. I hope to read some more of your stories, and well done for writing a little Legolas story!

Author's Response: *laughs* Loo is a naughty word? I'll keep that in mind! My brothers started repeating words they heard on Nickelodeon and since then that channel is off-limits (can't say that I minded!). My brothers were in my mind when I wrote this, and typically are when I write little Legolas. Thank you! You are very encouraging! -Kitt
Date: Dec 23 2008
Summary: In Moria, Legolas takes his watch and something watches him. MEFA 2008 nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gollum, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 725 Read Count: 2032
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Oh yesh! Legolas sounds macho rather than la-di-da as I have read in some other stories! However what's best about it is that he is not too macho, if you know what I mean. Aragorn speaks exactly like he does in the books - I struggle with that, so well done!

Author's Response: Well, I struggle constantly with making Legolas *not* la-di-da. Oh yeah, I love that he's somewhere inbetween air-headed and mancho. But he's so in-between things he's hard to write! I'm glad Aragorn spoke alright. Thanks so much for reading! -Kitt
Date: Dec 20 2008
Summary: Frodo's Journal chronicles Frodo's life between the time that Bilbo vanished and Frodo departed on his quest.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 108809 Read Count: 32843
Published: Jul 04 2008 Updated: Oct 07 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 -The Gamgee Family Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Very interesting chapter, very, very, very, good! I hope to read more; keep going! Will we hear about the Ring and the Quest soon? Little Hobbits are adorable, aren't they? :-) Such a brilliant story! Well done!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments! I love writing about the wonderful characters in LOTR. (Yep, gotta love those Hobbits!) I've grown so fond of the Shire and its denizens that I just ca't resist adding my own characters into the mix. To be honest, all the extra characters in my stories aren't all my own creations. I have a very good friend and writing partner that I met at a LOTR gathering and we have been collaborating on Frodo's Journal for quite some time. I'll be sure to pass the compliments on to her! Thanks again!
Date: Feb 07 2009
Summary: This is my idea of what could have happened for the end of The Lord Of the Rings: The Rturn of the King. Please, I know that the book and movie are both out, but this is my own theory for the end.
Its my first Lord of the Rings Fanfiction, so please bear with me.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Celeborn, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 776 Read Count: 4364
Published: Jul 27 2008 Updated: Nov 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Message Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Please carry on this story; I like alternate endings, especially if they're dark and include character deaths! (I sound so darn EVIL!) Meerkatalex

Author's Response: I certainly will keep this going. I am so glad someone finally said something in a review for this. Thanks so much.
Date: Oct 12 2008
Summary: ‘Fraid so. Frodo’s a stinker and Bilbo’s worse. Sauron’s beard is pointy and his minions wield chainsaws. Aragorn couldn't find his nose in the dark. And the worst of it…? Gandalf owes me money. MEFA 2010 nominee; thanks Clodia!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23779 Read Count: 12365
Published: Aug 06 2008 Updated: Jan 17 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Day of Doom Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Laughing very loudly; this story is very funny and portrays all the characters well in a way that makes you want to laugh. You should definately continue to write humorous stories and I hope you do well in the future!

Author's Response: Thanks! *shrugs* I like writing humorous stories BUT they don't always turn out that way. I do intend on finishing this one, though it take 5 years... A fun chapter that I am looking forward to writing is when they reach Bree, at the Sign of the (excuse me) Pooping Pony. Thanks again! -Kitt : )
Date: Dec 23 2008
Summary: Estel makes breakfast for his Ada and takes it to him while he's in bed
(Completely not good with summeries, sorry)
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 438 Read Count: 1952
Published: Aug 30 2008 Updated: Aug 30 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast in Bed Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Aw, it's cute! I love it! Afterthought: Is Estel what Aragorn was called when he lived in Rivendell?

Author's Response: Yes, he was called Hope (Estel). Thanks, I hoped it was cute.
Date: Oct 31 2008
Summary: An off topic poem about entering another world.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118 Read Count: 1334
Published: Sep 09 2008 Updated: Sep 09 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
It's a good poem overall, and the only critisism I have is that "...skeptical mind... it melts" The 'it' I think should start with a capital I. Otherwise I like this poem as it rhymes, it's a good topic and it's just... Brill!

Author's Response: So it does... Thanks! I didn't realise. I'm very glad you liked it, thanks!
Date: Dec 23 2008
Summary: Legolas and Arwen have been friends since infancy. They discuss thoughts and fears under a moonlit sky.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen
Genres: General
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 866 Read Count: 2397
Published: Sep 17 2008 Updated: Nov 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Well, this story shows a well written relationship that I have not read about before between two Elves. As not many people write about it I was unsure at first, but this is delicately and well-written. I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it would be a different thing to write about and i am enjoying writing it, thanks for your comment!
Date: Dec 23 2008
Summary: A poem of the elf prince of the Mirkwood. Of a dreadful memory that will not soon be forgotten.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115 Read Count: 1347
Published: Sep 24 2008 Updated: Sep 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Reminder Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Hmm. Thought-provoking and unusual. Was Legolas being tortured? 'Cause if he was I will be trying to KILL whoever it was trying to hurt him.

This is very different to your other stories' formats as it's kind of a poem, but I love it! It's well written and quite descriptive, and I LOVE description! The memories are a little creepy and scary but this just adds to the atmosphere! Brilliant! Well done!!

meerkatalex
Date: Jan 05 2009
Summary: When Legolas abandons his post to brush his hair, Aragorn must punish his friend. After all he is king. When his cosmetics are taken away how will the elf react?
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 357 Read Count: 1538
Published: Sep 25 2008 Updated: Sep 25 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Cosmetics Confinscation Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
I enjoyed this story as it is appropriatly humorous. There are a few spelling mistakes but it is very well written and I hope you issue a challenge or respond to one soon, as it will be very good for more people to read and review your stories. Are you new to this site? If so please don't hesitate in asking other authors for hints or advice, as they will gladly give it to you. In the near future I think you should write another funny story as this one was very good. Well done!

Author's Response:

No.... well yeah, I am kinda new. I'v had my account since the end of August or so and I havent been on much recently. I am not very good at getting around this site yet. What do you mean by challenge? I've  heard of them, but could never seem to figure out what they were. I am really glad that you like my story, being as you are the first reviewer. I was kind of getting dissappointed that nobody was reviewing as this was one of the first stories I put on. If you or any other authors have any hints or advice for me I will be happy to have them as it would probably make my time navigating this site easier. And I will try to correct my spelling mistakes.... I'm not that great at spelling. As I found out that being 15 really has no effect on your spelling ability. At the moment I am trying to write another funny story, but I am having trouble comming up with some ideas so if you have any that you would be willing to give I would be more than happy to accept them!
Thanks!

Date: Dec 23 2008
Summary: Two ringwraiths and an orc try to make Minas Morgul look more… evil. It's not easy.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Sauron, Witch King
Genres: Humor
Warnings: First Draft, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1028 Read Count: 1571
Published: Sep 26 2008 Updated: Sep 26 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
HA! This is funny, (although if it's not meant to be I'll look pretty stupid!) and I love the idea of re-decorating it. BRILL! Meerkatalex.
Date: Oct 12 2008
Summary: When Young prince Legolas decides to prove that he is a grown up by making breakfast by himself, things don't go as planed.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash, Book-verse, Movie-verse, Book Verse Slash Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 480 Read Count: 1328
Published: Sep 27 2008 Updated: Sep 27 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Lol! This story is funny also. As I said in my other review for your cosmetics confistication story, I think you should continue writing as it is very good at portraying Legolas!

Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad that you like this one also! As you see I am still writing the end of this one, but I am hoping to update it soon. Thanks for you time and offers to help on your other review, I greatly appreciate it. Sorry if anything is spelt wrong... as I said in my last response, I have always been bad at spelling and even now I am just as bad as ever!
Thanks!
Date: Dec 23 2008
Summary: A short poem about Lothlórien and what happens when the elves leave.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48 Read Count: 1237
Published: Sep 30 2008 Updated: Sep 30 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Sniff.... I love your stories, but I love your poems more! Well done, keep writing! Meerkatalex.
Date: Oct 12 2008
Summary: The first meeting between our two favorite characters, Aragorn and Leggy. The Beginning of a bonding friendship....(quoted text)"Slowing to a walk he neared the dim light; he heard the sound of voices. The voices taunted and sneered at an unknown victim. The voices were unmistakably those of orcs."
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Tragedy
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1236 Read Count: 5742
Published: Sep 30 2008 Updated: Oct 02 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Found Friend Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
I like this story! It portrays both characters well and I can tell that you love Legolas! I hope you continue writing - the speech at the end involving Legolas and yourself is something to giggle at too. Keep writing and reading!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Thanks. I've been trying to write more, but have been having some writers block. I'm starting to get some more ideas, so maybe I'll put something new on soon..... maybe even something funny like Pink and Purple Nightshirts.  :) 
Date: Jan 01 2009
Summary: Creepy little thing that came to me suddenly. I suppose it's appropriate seeing as it's Halloween Month...
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 337 Read Count: 1347
Published: Oct 03 2008 Updated: Oct 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Love the quote at the end by Sunny, and I love this idea. Sure, it's creepy, but it's cool! Meerkatalex.
Date: Oct 12 2008
Summary: What happens when Elladan and Elrohir find out that their brother Aragorn talks in his sleep? What does Legolas think about their little "game"?
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 467 Read Count: 1523
Published: Oct 20 2008 Updated: Oct 20 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Pink an Purple Night Shirts!? Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
This is funny! I'm glad you decided to write it! Very amusing!

meerkatalex
Date: Jan 01 2009
Summary: If you think you are obsessed with Legolas than check this out!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 452 Read Count: 1981
Published: Oct 20 2008 Updated: Oct 20 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas obsession Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
O-kay. I can tell you're obsessed with him - way to go! But I'm afraid I'm not a Legolas-obsessed fanatic, but I do like him as a character. Do you like Orlando Bloom or Legolas best? Well, good luck in your writing! Perhaps you should write a story about Legolas, revolving around him? I bet you would be good at that!

Author's Response: Yes I am-thanks! I m sorry that you're not a Legolas obsessed fanatic but at least you like him as a character. I like Legolas best! I 'm currently working on a story about Legolas but am having great difficulties finding how to put my words on paper and find the time to sit down and write a decent story. Thanks Love love love legolas
Date: Dec 20 2008
Summary: Gandalf claims Pippin as his companion to Gondor. Might there be another? Might this other take pity on Faramir, in the end?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Denethor, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1576 Read Count: 2682
Published: Oct 20 2008 Updated: Oct 20 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mysterious Stranger Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Good. Try not make it Mary-Sueish or I shall puke. Lovely beginning, not enough description though. Love it love it love it!

Author's Response: THat's why this one's on hold for awhile.. I have to figure out how to play it out, dun dun dunnn
Date: Nov 15 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Have you tried google for Elvish translations? I'm sorry but I do not know any Elvish translations except the ones that are in the books. Love this chappy!
Date: Nov 15 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
HA! Funny chapter; I like a little bit of humor! Please continue your stories... I'll give you hugs and cookies!
Date: Nov 15 2008