Brilliant! This story should have Humor as one of it's genres! I love it, sista! Or brudda, depending... Oh, I'm such a babbler... I also loved the part about Gandalf appearing and sprinkling that stuff over Boromir's wounds, and that part about Lucy Pensieve. Love it!

Author's Response: Ha ha, thanks! :D

Good, but as you say, this story need a little work. I'm giving it 8/10 on a score rating, like they do on HPfanfiction, and I'll say just this - I love the title, although it does sound a bit slashy. Otherwise, it is great! No spelling or grammar mistakes, and the text chosen is lovely! Well done!

Very interesting to read - it's a tad long, (lol,) but I enjoyed reading it. It shows a lot more depth in Goldberry's and especially Tom's character, which I love, and the ending rocks as it is descriptive and thoughtful, yet simple all at once. Incredible!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose I got carried away on the length of this fic, but the story goes as the plot flows. I never could define exactly what the ideal length of a short story was supposed to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's especially gratifying when readers take the time to check out my older stories.

It would be great if this story could be continued! I like it; will there be more?

meerkatalex

Beautiful! And it answers so many questions too, if it be the truth of what had happened whilst the Fellowship was away. I should love to read more of your works, and shall await eagerly for more fictions! I do think that the flashbacks, and the interpretations of the attack and times are very good, and that several points of view do the story it's duty - it is a very good novel, and I vision that, in a while, many reviews should be submitted to it. This story deserves to have a lot of credit, and I hope that by reading this review you will have further inspiration and plot bunnies in the near future. Well done, a job well done! - Although jobs are tedious and writing is not! :-) -

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Hello Meerkatale! Thank you so much for your kind words. It has taken me a long time to gather my thoughts on the story and, eventually, find the courage to write it. I am very glad you are enjoying it. I am trying my best as far as future stories are concerned, but these days I am very busy with my studies and hardly ever find time to write or even just think about stories. However, there are several old ones online, and if you read German as well you can find a LONG one at storiesofarda.com where you can find me under Lily :) Thanks again! Lily

Still reading, dude! D'you respond to these reviews? I'd better check next time I come on here to read these types o'stories!

Author's Response: Sorry! I haven't been on here in ages... :P

Oh yesh! Legolas sounds macho rather than la-di-da as I have read in some other stories! However what's best about it is that he is not too macho, if you know what I mean. Aragorn speaks exactly like he does in the books - I struggle with that, so well done!

Author's Response: Well, I struggle constantly with making Legolas *not* la-di-da. Oh yeah, I love that he's somewhere inbetween air-headed and mancho. But he's so in-between things he's hard to write! I'm glad Aragorn spoke alright. Thanks so much for reading! -Kitt

Very interesting chapter, very, very, very, good! I hope to read more; keep going! Will we hear about the Ring and the Quest soon? Little Hobbits are adorable, aren't they? :-) Such a brilliant story! Well done!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments! I love writing about the wonderful characters in LOTR. (Yep, gotta love those Hobbits!) I've grown so fond of the Shire and its denizens that I just ca't resist adding my own characters into the mix. To be honest, all the extra characters in my stories aren't all my own creations. I have a very good friend and writing partner that I met at a LOTR gathering and we have been collaborating on Frodo's Journal for quite some time. I'll be sure to pass the compliments on to her! Thanks again!

Laughing very loudly; this story is very funny and portrays all the characters well in a way that makes you want to laugh. You should definately continue to write humorous stories and I hope you do well in the future!

Author's Response: Thanks! *shrugs* I like writing humorous stories BUT they don't always turn out that way. I do intend on finishing this one, though it take 5 years... A fun chapter that I am looking forward to writing is when they reach Bree, at the Sign of the (excuse me) Pooping Pony. Thanks again! -Kitt : )

It's a good poem overall, and the only critisism I have is that "...skeptical mind... it melts" The 'it' I think should start with a capital I. Otherwise I like this poem as it rhymes, it's a good topic and it's just... Brill!

Author's Response: So it does... Thanks! I didn't realise. I'm very glad you liked it, thanks!