Penname: Lady of the Lake [Contact] Real name: Linorien
Member Since: 24/06/08
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I have been a LOTR fan for quite a while now so I decided to try my hand at writing fanfics.  I am also a beta-reader so let me know if you want help editing a piece. That being said, I love getting reviews and constructive criticism on my own pieces.

Favorite book: Faith of the Fallen by Terry Goodkind

Favorite LOTR character: Estel/Aragorn/King Elessar

Favorite song: "I've Got the Magic" by B.O.B.

Favorite subject: Physics

Favorite TV show: Doctor Who

I also have an account on fanfiction.net...

Fanfiction.net



To read more of my recent, non fanfiction, writings, check out my figment page below. Thank you!
Web Site: Figment.com/users/230855-Jennifer-Sieben
Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by Lady of the Lake
My Immortal by LegolasLoverLimwen Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Limwen is the daughter of the most trusted advisor to Lord Denethor Steward of Gondor and has yet to be married. She is haunted by dreams of an bloody epic battle and a mysterious figure cloaked in shadow. When she is sent to Rohan to marry Theodon King's son Theodred, Limwen's life is turned upside down for better and for worse.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Eomer, Eowyn, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, Théoden, Théodred
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13725 Read Count: 34116
[Report This] Published: 13/09/08 Updated: 19/10/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 19/10/08 Title: Chapter 39: Author's Note

I could attempt to edit it if you want. I can't guarente I'd catch everything but I can try. The Valar and I wish you great luck!

Forever: Sequel to My Immortal by LegolasLoverLimwen Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Limwen grieves for the loss of her childhood friend, Haldir and begins to distance herself from Leoglas and the rest of the Fellowship. Will Legolas love be enough to bring her back or will another rude awakening shatter their relationship?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Denethor, Eowyn, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Théoden
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9901 Read Count: 12900
[Report This] Published: 14/09/08 Updated: 23/10/09
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Steward of Gondor's Secrets

Amazing, I love how it's the girl who figures it out, poor Pippin. He's going to be so confused.

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 10/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: Broken Hearts and Last Goodbyes

I like it better than the first. A title suggestion, "Weeping Heart". I think it alludes nicely to her latest line to Legolas. I am enjoying how you use Sindarin in your stories. I'm attempting to learn the language myself. A nd so I will say to you, keep writing mellon celeir, namarie!

Midnight sky by caladhiel amariel Rated: G [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Legolas and Arwen have been friends since infancy. They discuss thoughts and fears under a moonlit sky.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Arwen
Genres: General
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 866 Read Count: 1881
[Report This] Published: 17/09/08 Updated: 01/11/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it, it sets the tone very nicely. I would have to say though, please make the chapters longer. Thanx!

Author's Response: Thank you! i am glad you like it, i havent finished so it will be much longer, i just wanted to see if it was good enough to continue with it. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 12/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, short but chilling sweetness. Keep posting!

Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: Thanks, i'll try to make the next chapter longer, thanks so much, i love to hear that people enjoy my work! thank you!

The Pevinzies Meet Middle Earth by evenstar_17 Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary: I've downsized this story into _after_ the War of the Ring.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1794 Read Count: 3623
[Report This] Published: 20/09/08 Updated: 11/02/09
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 13/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Introductions

I like it, keep going.

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 4: Returning

I like it. Somewhat unexpected but it's good!

Five Ways to Annoy... by Aranel Erulisse Rated: G [Reviews - 32]
Summary: The top 5 most annoying things for characters from LOTR.
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Balrog, Boromir, Elrond, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, The Fellowship
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Series: Parodies
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 632 Read Count: 16884
[Report This] Published: 24/09/08 Updated: 12/01/09
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Five Ways to Annoy Gimli

First review! Congrats! I know how you feel when you look at the screen not knowing what to do. Keep thinking hard on these! Oh, and if you could please read and review my fanfiction. Thanks!

Author's Response: Tell me about it! Don't worry, I'll be checking out your fan fics too! :) Sarah

The Reminder by I am an Elf Rated: PG [Reviews - 10]
Summary: A poem of the elf prince of the Mirkwood. Of a dreadful memory that will not soon be forgotten.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115 Read Count: 998
[Report This] Published: 24/09/08 Updated: 24/09/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 24/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Reminder

I am amazed. I loved the poem, I'm not usually one to go for poems but I have to say this was magnificantly done. If you could, please check out my fanfiction. Keep up the outstanding craftmanship!

When Nazgûl Redecorate by atouchofhobbit Rated: PG [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Two ringwraiths and an orc try to make Minas Morgul look more… evil. It's not easy.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Sauron, Witch King
Genres: Humor
Warnings: First Draft, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1028 Read Count: 1261
[Report This] Published: 26/09/08 Updated: 26/09/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! I'm currently picturing a huge room decorated like the disco age and badly too. It's very interesting. I hope you write more about the Nazguls. And if you can please read and review my fic too! Thanx!

Author's Response: I will almost definitely be writing more about the Nazgûl, maybe not for a while though. Thanks for reviewing -- it's nice to know someone likes it.

The Suprise by I am an Elf Rated: G [Reviews - 14]
Summary: When Young prince Legolas decides to prove that he is a grown up by making breakfast by himself, things don't go as planed.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash, Book-verse, Movie-verse, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 480 Read Count: 1020
[Report This] Published: 27/09/08 Updated: 27/09/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. especially the author's note. However I cannot get the picture to show up. I'm sure it's good though. Please read and review my fic if you have time. Keep the writing up.

A Forming Friendship by I am an Elf Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The first meeting between our two favorite characters, Aragorn and Leggy. The Beginning of a bonding friendship....(quoted text)"Slowing to a walk he neared the dim light; he heard the sound of voices. The voices taunted and sneered at an unknown victim. The voices were unmistakably those of orcs."
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Tragedy
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1236 Read Count: 4572
[Report This] Published: 30/09/08 Updated: 02/10/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Sound in the Dark

I like it. i hope you post Chapter 2 soon. And dump some water on Lego's head for me will you? Keep writing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! You know how sometimes you get a great pic. in your head that would make a great story? well, that is how this started... I liked it so much i just had to write it down. :) Good thing I don't go anywhere without a pen and notebook!

Letters from the Undying Lands by Karlmir Stonewain Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Valinor/Middle Earth communications in the Fourth Age.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Celeborn, Frodo, Galadriel, Sam
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: Arda Musings
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 507 Read Count: 1460
[Report This] Published: 02/10/08 Updated: 02/10/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 30/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Letters from the Undying Lands

I think that is a very good point. I like the reasoning behind it too. Good job defending yourself.

Namarie-Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: Thanks, Namarie. Actually, I'm not the first writer here to come up with the idea of persons communicating between Middle Earth and Valinor. One author, whose name I unfortunately can't recall, posted a story in which Frodo and Sam contact each other either verbally or telepathically via a pair of specially made elfstones.

Children of the Storm by starofelendil Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Courage, Wisdom, Healing, Cunning, Strength, and Honor are six virtues personified in those born under the storm. Their journey to aid in destroying the Nameless One is heretofore chronicled in this story. Non-slash. Dedicated to majorbee and Easter Egg.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Other Canon Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9414 Read Count: 3061
[Report This] Published: 03/10/08 Updated: 04/01/09
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 03/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like it, have you been writing long? I think it is wonderful, I love the forshadowing. Can't wait for the next bit. I would appreciate some tips on forshadowing for you. Thank you and keep writing!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and commenting; I really appreciate it! I suppose, in a way, I have been writing a long time, but truthfully, this is only my second multi-chaptered story. I've a few scattered oneshots here and there, but my first multi-chaptered fic took me over a year to write, although that was mostly because of laziness :-) As to foreshadowing, thank you very much. It's easier to do foreshadowing if you know the general direction that your story is going, and the more you know, the better. Chapter 3 will have some major foreshadowing I think you will enjoy; if you like you can look it up on fanfiction.net, although I do intend to post it here as well. Thanks!

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 26/02/09 Title: Chapter 4: Come Away, O Human Child!

That was wonderful!!!! I love the mind-clasp idea and i totallly wish i could have one with a few of my friends. I am hoping the story will continue. I would be very interested what will happen when Boromir goes to Rivendell. Keep Writing!

-Lady of the Lake

The Friend I Leave Behind by White Wolf Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Shortly before his death, Aragorn reflects on his long friendship with Legolas.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2032 Read Count: 757
[Report This] Published: 20/10/08 Updated: 20/10/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I currently have tears in my eyes, that is amazing! You have portrayed all of their characteristics extremely well and I am amazed. Keep writing! Namarie-Lady of the Lake

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding. I'm glad I could evoke a strong emotion, which was a goal in this story. I'm very pleased that you liked my characterizations. I always try to get those right. I'll keep writing! :o)

So you think you're obsessed with Legolas? by lovelovelove legolas Rated: G [Reviews - 13]
Summary: If you think you are obsessed with Legolas than check this out!
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 452 Read Count: 1600
[Report This] Published: 20/10/08 Updated: 20/10/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Legolas obsession

Nice list, I have only done 8 things. Not to mention that I want to do another 10 things. I saw in your favorites that you have read Forever: the sequel to My Immortal, you did read the first one right? Because that was amazing. Keep working on writing! Namarie-Lady of the Lake

Author's Response: Thanks I have read the first one. I think the second one is way better than the first though!

A Story of Many Parts, Throughout Which Faramir is Craving Orange Juice by KimberlyJane Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: ...guess
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Faramir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1173 Read Count: 2689
[Report This] Published: 24/10/08 Updated: 26/10/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 30/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Hysterical

Wow, that was definatly interesting. Is another chapter forthcoming?

Namarie-Lady of the Lake

Fei's Arena by Ar-feiniel Rated: PG [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Random Fun.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Beregond, Boromir, Captain Jack Sparrow, Cirdan, Elizabeth Swann, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Figwit, Fingon, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Legolas, Maedhros, Mouth of Sauron, Original Character, Pippin, Théodred, Tom Bombadil, Treebeard, Will Turner
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19404 Read Count: 12476
[Report This] Published: 02/11/08 Updated: 03/01/09
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 17: King of the Hill

Wow, random much? Death hyper? A lot of Fantasy realms crashing in a big huge bloody disaster? Any of these things sound familiar to you?

 

Good job-Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: ME?! Random?! ‘Tis folly you speak of!!

Galactic Fellowship by owlett Rated: G [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Gandalf sings the Galaxy song from Monty Python to spur Frodo's energy to climb Caradhras.
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers, Off Topic
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenges: Comedic Songs
Series: My Crossovers
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 366 Read Count: 1008
[Report This] Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Might Mountain's Peril

Wow, what MP episode is that on?? Good job!

Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: I dont know, I just like the song :) thank you