I have been a LOTR fan for quite a while now so I decided to try my hand at writing fanfics. I am also a beta-reader so let me know if you want help editing a piece. That being said, I love getting reviews and constructive criticism on my own pieces.
Favorite book: Faith of the Fallen by Terry Goodkind
Favorite LOTR character: Estel/Aragorn/King Elessar
Favorite song: "I've Got the Magic" by B.O.B.
Favorite subject: Physics
Favorite TV show: Doctor Who
I also have an account on fanfiction.net...
I could attempt to edit it if you want. I can't guarente I'd catch everything but I can try. The Valar and I wish you great luck!
Amazing, I love how it's the girl who figures it out, poor Pippin. He's going to be so confused.
I like it better than the first. A title suggestion, "Weeping Heart". I think it alludes nicely to her latest line to Legolas. I am enjoying how you use Sindarin in your stories. I'm attempting to learn the language myself. A nd so I will say to you, keep writing mellon celeir, namarie!
I like it, it sets the tone very nicely. I would have to say though, please make the chapters longer. Thanx!
Author's Response: Thank you! i am glad you like it, i havent finished so it will be much longer, i just wanted to see if it was good enough to continue with it. Thanks again!
Wow, short but chilling sweetness. Keep posting!
Lady of the Lake
I like it, keep going.
I like it. Somewhat unexpected but it's good!
First review! Congrats! I know how you feel when you look at the screen not knowing what to do. Keep thinking hard on these! Oh, and if you could please read and review my fanfiction. Thanks!
Author's Response: Tell me about it! Don't worry, I'll be checking out your fan fics too! :) Sarah
I am amazed. I loved the poem, I'm not usually one to go for poems but I have to say this was magnificantly done. If you could, please check out my fanfiction. Keep up the outstanding craftmanship!
I love it! I'm currently picturing a huge room decorated like the disco age and badly too. It's very interesting. I hope you write more about the Nazguls. And if you can please read and review my fic too! Thanx!
Author's Response: I will almost definitely be writing more about the Nazgûl, maybe not for a while though. Thanks for reviewing -- it's nice to know someone likes it.
I like it. especially the author's note. However I cannot get the picture to show up. I'm sure it's good though. Please read and review my fic if you have time. Keep the writing up.
I like it. i hope you post Chapter 2 soon. And dump some water on Lego's head for me will you? Keep writing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! You know how sometimes you get a great pic. in your head that would make a great story? well, that is how this started... I liked it so much i just had to write it down. :) Good thing I don't go anywhere without a pen and notebook!
I think that is a very good point. I like the reasoning behind it too. Good job defending yourself.
Namarie-Lady of the Lake
I like it, have you been writing long? I think it is wonderful, I love the forshadowing. Can't wait for the next bit. I would appreciate some tips on forshadowing for you. Thank you and keep writing!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and commenting; I really appreciate it! I suppose, in a way, I have been writing a long time, but truthfully, this is only my second multi-chaptered story. I've a few scattered oneshots here and there, but my first multi-chaptered fic took me over a year to write, although that was mostly because of laziness :-) As to foreshadowing, thank you very much. It's easier to do foreshadowing if you know the general direction that your story is going, and the more you know, the better. Chapter 3 will have some major foreshadowing I think you will enjoy; if you like you can look it up on fanfiction.net, although I do intend to post it here as well. Thanks!
That was wonderful!!!! I love the mind-clasp idea and i totallly wish i could have one with a few of my friends. I am hoping the story will continue. I would be very interested what will happen when Boromir goes to Rivendell. Keep Writing!
-Lady of the Lake
I currently have tears in my eyes, that is amazing! You have portrayed all of their characteristics extremely well and I am amazed. Keep writing! Namarie-Lady of the Lake
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding. I'm glad I could evoke a strong emotion, which was a goal in this story. I'm very pleased that you liked my characterizations. I always try to get those right. I'll keep writing! :o)
Nice list, I have only done 8 things. Not to mention that I want to do another 10 things. I saw in your favorites that you have read Forever: the sequel to My Immortal, you did read the first one right? Because that was amazing. Keep working on writing! Namarie-Lady of the Lake
Author's Response: Thanks I have read the first one. I think the second one is way better than the first though!
Wow, that was definatly interesting. Is another chapter forthcoming?
Namarie-Lady of the Lake
Wow, random much? Death hyper? A lot of Fantasy realms crashing in a big huge bloody disaster? Any of these things sound familiar to you?
Good job-Lady of the Lake
Wow, what MP episode is that on?? Good job!
Lady of the Lake