Reviews by Lady of the Lake
Little Lady by Anwyn Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Years after the War of the Ring, Aragorn once again returns to Edoras and has a very unusual encounter with one of the city's younger inhabitants.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Original Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1957 Read Count: 1636
Published: Nov 19 2008 Updated: Nov 19 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Cat and mouse Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
That is very sweet i like it. Especially how you only hint at who the girl was. Clever. -Lady of the Lake

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it! Yes, I find it is much more fun to kind of skirt around who someone is sometimes but it is tricky becuase I found myself nearly just coming right out with her name again and again. Thank you so much for the view!
Date: Nov 20 2008
Summary: An essay. Varda kindled the stars and set them into patterns. Many of these stars the Professor named in Elvish, but which real-life stars was he referring to?
[cat] Genres: Non-fiction

Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2720 Read Count: 2094
Published: Dec 11 2008 Updated: Dec 11 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed

I like it. I too am an at-home astronomer. I hope to become proffesional someday though. I find that you essay mades a lot of sense. I recently did a project involved with sky glow limiting magnitude, and other light pollution. I wish I had known this when I gave my speech today however it would probably be considered "off-topic". Thanks for the wonderful essay anyhow. Happy star-gazing!

-Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: Cool! I'm studying to be a professional astronomer myself. It's silly, but the fact that Tolkien's Elves "like the stars" is what made me interested in astronomy in the first place. What are your favorite sights? I've an 8-inch scope and I love to track down galaxies and nebulae; I've also a solar filter and I occasionally drag it out to look at the sun. Did you see the exploding comet from last winter - Holmes I think. That comet made me hyperventilate in excitement. (Bother, I'm rambling). Whew, I’m relieved the essay made some sense. I hope your speech went well. Glad to meet another star-gazer! -Kitt ; )
Date: Dec 12 2008
Summary: A little forum incident which I turned into a little story-parody-thing. Glorfindel is quite OOC here, be warned.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Glorfindel, Maeglin, Original Character, Tuor, Turgon
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1025 Read Count: 1394
Published: Dec 15 2008 Updated: Dec 15 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed

I do like it a lot. It is an interesting perspective.

-Lady of the Lake

Date: Dec 15 2008
Summary: The title says it all.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1054 Read Count: 2562
Published: Jan 03 2009 Updated: Jan 03 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No Chapters Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed

I haven't done all yet (I've done 10) but many more are on my list of things to do. Great list!

-Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: Don't worry, 10 is enough to qualify as a LOTR freak. Even one would be, but still. Glad you liked it!
Date: Jan 04 2009
Summary: Faramir and Eowyn ponder a conundrum that has vexed holiday gift-givers throughout the Ages.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eowyn, Faramir
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2273 Read Count: 1157
Published: Jan 12 2009 Updated: Jan 12 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed

I enjoyed that very much. I especially liked the AN. I never noticed but that's interesting.

-Lady of the Lake



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for commenting.
Date: Jan 12 2009
Summary: A rather uninterestingly boring essay on why I choose "Ar-feiniel" as my penname and a response to Karlmir Stonewain's Challenge, "What's in a Name?"
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 806 Read Count: 1326
Published: Jan 31 2009 Updated: Jan 31 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Nothing's in my Name... Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Interesting story. I still don't know how people like you and Aragorn keep track of all their different nicknames.

Author's Response: Oh, I can’t keep track of *all* of my nicknames. I have more than Aragorn – hands down. “Mag” and “Mags” are the most frequent and the easiest to remember. I mean; honestly, Magsaroni and Cheese? Thanks for reading and reviewing! How is TSR coming along? I’m working on the RTM chapter. Lenore’s POV on Legolas’ healing -- that should get interesting. Thanks again!
Date: Feb 01 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Nothing's in my Name... Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
It's going OK, I'll email you.

Author's Response: Awesome! Can't wait! :D
Date: Feb 02 2009
Summary: It all began when Traveller looked at my darling Maedhros the wrong way. Nothing would have happened if she had heeded my threats. In defense, I have assembled what forces were necessary to take on… dun dun dun… KILLER Tooks! That’s right folks—Merry and Pippin have constructed a Trojan Bunny supplied with the deadly Ammo of…Herbal Essences Shampoo Bottles. Witness the battle between Ar-feiniel and Traveller for Lindt’s Chocolate, bragging rights as Ruler of Himring, a free dinner at the Prancing Pony, and Maedhros’ signature.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Bilbo, Celegorm, Esmeralda (Took) Brandybuck, Faramir Took, Farmer Maggot, Frodo, Legolas, Maedhros, Merry, Original Character, Paladin Took, Pippin
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18824 Read Count: 14599
Published: Mar 04 2009 Updated: May 09 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 13: Doesn't Get More Random Than This Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I am shortly going to die from falling off of my chair laughing too many times. I love it. Together you two could win any caption contest by far. Also good choice of songs. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: Mar 23 2009
Title: Chapter 9: What really happens at secret Elf councils? GAMES OF DUCK DUCK GOOSE!! Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I love it! Keep it up!
Date: Mar 07 2009
Summary: Eldarion is jealous of Legolas; he has his reason, what Elessar has to say? Dedicate to rosethorn59

Elessar & Eldarion: I Want to be an Elf! Nominee
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eldarion
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Elessar & Eldarion
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 607 Read Count: 1371
Published: Mar 11 2009 Updated: Mar 11 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I like it. However, I would enjoy another chapter. Keep finding plot bunnies!
Date: Mar 11 2009
Summary: The lost first draft of The Hobbit. We can see, now, why Tolkien rid himself of it as it is really very repetitive and annoying to read.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: Bad Beginnings
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 280 Read Count: 1715
Published: Mar 22 2009 Updated: Mar 22 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Party Not Expected Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
That would've been a horribly nasty start to a book. However I think you should continue just for amusment.

Author's Response: Only horribly nasty? Or horribly nasty, dirty and wet? :P I've been thinking of doing just that, actually, to see what I come up with. Although the phrase "nasty, dirty and wet" will be quickly dispensed with I think.
Date: Mar 23 2009
Summary: Aragorn's on his deathbed.
Talking to Eldarion about being king.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eldarion
Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209 Read Count: 1257
Published: Apr 25 2009 Updated: Apr 25 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
That was very sweet. I looking forward to more short fics like this! That was a fitting verse.
Date: Apr 25 2009
Summary:

Moriah is your standard college girl. Nothing out of the ordinary. So why are there nine confused travellers at her dorm? I promise this is not a Sue-fic.


Categories: Crossovers, Off Topic Characters: Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Fantasy, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3948 Read Count: 7010
Published: May 04 2009 Updated: Aug 02 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Lost in Translation Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Wow that's really random, I like it though. Keep going!

Author's Response: It's supposed to be random, I'm glad you like it :). It will keep going for another couple of chapters, this is a short story :)
Date: May 05 2009
Summary:

Angela Gallo, a fiery, mouthy FBI agent, is shot and killed trying to take down a gunman after disobeying orders. Her friends and colleagues think she is dead, when in reality, she is everything but. After awaking in a strange land, Angela is fascinated by the concept of a war and a ring.

“A war because of a ring? Really? That is right up my alley.”

Angela must learn how to wield a sword and fight like a warrior; guns are of little use in Middle-earth.

This is the first story I have posted in a while, but I am so happy to be back and I really hope that people will take the time to read and review! Constructive criticism is always welcome!


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1049 Read Count: 1183
Published: Nov 30 2010 Updated: Nov 30 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I really liked this. Good job describing her character without too many words. I like how you tell the reader things without coming right out and saying it. I await more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comments! I should have another chapter or two up by later today. I hope you enjoy what is to come!
Date: Nov 30 2010
Summary:

Prompted by Aragorn, the Fellowship goes on a roadtrip through the newly-transformed Middle-earth after the War of the Ring.


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1791 Read Count: 952
Published: Mar 17 2012 Updated: Mar 18 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What's Up With Aragorn? Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I'm enjoying this so far. I'm curious to see why Aragorn has lost it, and how he got his hands on an RV. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: Mar 17 2012
Summary:

Once upon a time, there was an FBI agent who had given up on love; that is, until an expensive car showed up in front of her house. The next thing she knew, she was learning how to surf, meeting celebrities, and realizing that not everyone in the world needs to be put in handcuffs.


Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Dominic Monaghan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25861 Read Count: 7915
Published: Mar 20 2012 Updated: Aug 22 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: What's a Jaguar Doing on My Street? Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
This is great!! I love the cop's thoughts, it flows really well. I feel like you did a good job setting up their personalities and I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Date: Mar 22 2012
Summary:

Inspired by a conversation on twitter regarding the quote "It's true you don't see many dwarf women. And in fact, they are so alike in voice and appearance, that they are often mistaken for dwarf men." and how LOTR would be different if Gimli was actually a girl.

This story is a story about the complicated romantic stories that evolve when gender is flipped.

Any and all feedback is welcomed with open arms.

ENJOY!


Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Elrond, Eowyn, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Gríma, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2227 Read Count: 2275
Published: Mar 22 2012 Updated: May 09 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Conversation Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed

gamwae

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add prolouge to help wioth character descr

 

Date: May 24 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Diary Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed

Gondafilia

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Date: May 24 2012
Summary: Legolas's thoughts on his life in Middle-Earth.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Family
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1904 Read Count: 772
Published: Nov 16 2012 Updated: Sep 07 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Breathe In and Hold It Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
That was very sweet! I really enjoyed it. It left me wanting more, yet at the same time, it felt like it ended with the right feeling. :)
Date: Nov 16 2012
Summary: A collection of potentially embarrassing and awkward situations between members of the Fellowship. For example, what happens when Gimli insults Legolas? Or when the hobbits decide play a practical joke? And what is Boromir's secret he doesn't want anyone to know?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9126 Read Count: 4243
Published: Jun 11 2013 Updated: Jun 11 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Games Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I love how you incorporated the cast's game of Tig into the story!!

Author's Response: How could I not?! It's so funny! But I'm so glad you liked it :D
Date: Jun 17 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Mistakes Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Ahh no! I want more.
I really enjoyed this chapter and the one about taking dating advice from a hobbit. Simply because in each if them there were very relatable, awkward situations. I hope you continue to do the other two books as well.

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for reviewing! I really am thrilled you liked it :) I am actually planning the other two books now, so that will be posted some time soon! I really am so happy you enjoyed the story and thank you for reviewing! :)
Date: Jun 18 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Dating Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I can totally see that happening!
I really like how you have the awkward moments but then you are also telling the story in order. I shall continue on.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I found that telling it in order was just logical and made it seem a bit more like a story and not just random chapters, so I'm glad you think that's good! :) and I tried hard not to make them too cliché and to make sure they were believable, so it's great that paid off! I really hope you continue to enjoy! :) T.E.
Date: Jun 13 2013
Summary: Charlotte Maretti, a reckless 21st century nineteen year old, wakes up from a car crash expecting to see hospital staff tending to her injuries. But when she opens her eyes, it soon sinks in that she hit more than the guard rail; she clashed with space and time, and finds herself becoming one of the many helpless victims of the War of the Ring. Will the trials of surviving war and love be enough to turn her life around?
Categories: Crossovers, Movie-verse Characters: Eomer, Eowyn, Original Character, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4294 Read Count: 912
Published: May 11 2015 Updated: May 20 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
Wow it has been so long since I got an email from this website. It's a good beginning so far. Very descriptive and a good insight into Charlotte's personality. I look forward to seeing where this will progress to.

Author's Response: Wow, it's definitely been a long time! Thank you for the compliments, and also for being such a faithful reviewer all these years. :)
Date: May 13 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
fanfiction.net does have a better email alert system but if you post here more often it's no trouble to check back here often. I just didn't know of you posted in more than one place as I seem to post stories on three different website simultaneously.
Date: May 22 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Lady of the Lake Signed
I really liked her descriptions of the three hunters. It is interesting to read a story where the main character does not recognize that they are in Middle Earth.

Also, do you post your writings on any other sites? This site doesn't have the best notification system for new chapters set up.

Author's Response: Thank you again for your lovely review! Currently working on chapter three, so I hope you will enjoy it once it's posted! As for other websites - I have an account on fanfiction.net, but haven't posted there in a while. Would that be more accessible for you?
Date: May 22 2015