How much do we all love that elf?
This was interesting. Weird, but i like it.
I loved this story and somehow it explains so much. Actually, I love everything you write.
Author's Response: Oh my god! Thank you so much! Nobody's ever said that to me before, and it means a ton. You just made my day. Thank you.
Wow, this is good writing. I loved the final sentence, it really filled you with suspense. The only thing I'm not sure of is the name Leo, but other than that I loved it. Keep writing!
A feel like that a lot. Sigh. Good poem though.
Aaw, this was so sad! I am actually crying!
I really liked this poem, you could really feel the struggle he was going through.
This was a really sweet and well written story. I would love to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story. It just came to me as I was sitting at my computer and eating breakfast (which was toast). Thanks again and I read your poem I just forgot to review, I had other things I had to do quickly. Sorry. Shadow Maiden
I really enjoyed reading this, it starred some of my favourite characters, and I especially loved the happy ending. I love reading any poetry so keep writing and I'll be happy! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, i'm so glad you enjoyed it. i have to say it had my favourite characters in aswell but as these change all the time its not hard to include them!!! i'm always one for happy endings even if there is vast amounts of angst in the meantime. thanks again!
I really quite liked this story. Short but well phrased. I loved the comparison made with the lines 'I couldn’t feel its peace.' and 'I could only feel its sadness.' Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank-you, Sil Greenleaf! I am glad you enjoyed it!
I thought this poem was very moving and something a lot of us here can understand. Wouldn't we all love to escape to another world?
I also love the imagery of the once royal halls, though I'm not entirely sure what you mean by that.
(Sorry about this, but it's received, not recieved.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sil, and also thanks for the spelling correction! i'll remember to correct it.
I actually really loved this, particularly the last few lines; 'There are no winners in a war, Only heroes of the dead.' Haunting. Well done and keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Sil. I am a fan of your work. You are my idol. Although i must admit i have one other idol. Please don't hate me for that Sil. I will call Pip and tell him you love the story. Thankyou.
I enjoyed this, it was well written and had some beautiful language.
All I would say is that speech should begin on a new line and always end with a punctuation mark before the speech mark.
If I'm really being picky, her speech in the last paragraph is just a little confusing and the use of the word 'bore' to mean 'produce' (which I presume you mean) is somewhat uncommon.
Sorry if I'm being too negative, I really did like it and hope you keep this story going. Well done and keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! i'm glad you liked it and i didn't realise that i didn't put the punctuation in! i'll sort out the spacing and i'll get the next part ASAP! thank you for reviewing!
Well written indeed. Be proud!
Just one small criticism this time! (sorry) In the second paragraph, the word dear is used twice very close together which sounds a little odd. But this is nothing, I loved the paragraph, and the whole story.
I would also add that these chapters are pretty short . . not necessarily a criticism as the writing is amazing, but it would probably improve your stories to add to and develop each chapter further.
I loved the final sentence! Just had to say that. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! it means so much that you enjoyed it; i write to entertain so im glad it's entertained! i really love to write so i like to recieve things that i can work on. Really glad you enjoyed it, thank you!!
Wow, this was great! A very tasteful and amazingly written piece. I particularly loved the beginning with a very young Legolas.
All in all, a greatly enjoyable and moving piece of work. Well done and keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love it when a reader uses the word amazing in connection with my work. :o) I love elfling Legolas. In my mind, he's so adorable, even when he's sad. I'm very pleased that you enjoyed reading this, and you can bet I'll keep writing.
Loved it! Dark, but I like dark. Sad too. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it. I have ever intention to keep on writing, I am usually at any given time working on some story or another though when I finish it and publish it to the site is another story all together :) This I started and finished last night, it is rare that it happens.
Wow, these are good. I write a lot of poetry myself so I know how hard it can be to get those rhymes, but this is great! I particularly liked 'Thoughts on a world of Grey' and I loved the final line in 'Gandalf and Mordor's fire'. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Last night when I posted this, I was in a dark mood and nedded to get out so I wrote Gandalf and Mordor's fire, showing both sides and the lies that Mordor told people. I mostly thought of Gollum when I wrote it. I meant for 'Thoughts on a world of Grey' to be a poem but prose flows more easily to me. I like it. Thanks for reviewing and I hope I hear more from you.
I love this new peom too, particularly the verse beginning with the line 'When did I get lost?'
I also LOVE the lines 'I look out and sigh. But I am fine.' It really makes you think.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I saw you were online and I'm glad I checked my e-mail. That was completely out of my head in five minutes. I guess I just needed to write. Thanks!
Wow, yet another great piece of writing from you!
I loved the short, dramatic sentences.
Author's Response: Thank you. I do believed since it's a season time of holidays, i've been attacked by bunnies... *grin* Glad that you love it although it was short. *Hugs* Sivan Shemesh
This is really quite funny. There are quite a few of these but that doesn't stop me reading them! Well done for this and keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! I really appreciate it and don't worry, I'm writing the first few chapters of a new tale which is coming very soon-just got to get rid of the waffle! :) Sarah