Reviews by Sil Greenleaf
Summary: A poem of the elf prince of the Mirkwood. Of a dreadful memory that will not soon be forgotten.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115 Read Count: 1298
Published: Sep 24 2008 Updated: Sep 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Reminder Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Wow, that was chilling. So descriptive and you could really feel his pain. I LOVED the last verse especially. Keep writing!
Date: Sep 24 2008
Summary: A short poem about Lothlórien and what happens when the elves leave.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48 Read Count: 1216
Published: Sep 30 2008 Updated: Sep 30 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Wow! This poem is so meaningful and more than that, it actually rhymes!

Loved it, keep writing!
Date: Oct 01 2008
Summary: Creepy little thing that came to me suddenly. I suppose it's appropriate seeing as it's Halloween Month...
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 337 Read Count: 1312
Published: Oct 03 2008 Updated: Oct 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
I enjoyed reading this. Short but creepy. Keep writing!
Date: Oct 04 2008
Summary: How did Elrond and Celebrian get together? This is one theory! (Diary format again i'm afraid- seems to be my best type...)

Each chapter will be a section from either Celebrian or Elrond's diary, related to the same subject . I may even add other elves' diaries to the story, let me know what you think.

Confused or think it doesn't work? Let me know!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elrond, Galadriel, Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1402 Read Count: 7927
Published: Oct 13 2008 Updated: Dec 07 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: A Tutor Down... Celebrian Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
You're right, she does sound young! But I don't mean that negatively, she probably would have been. It does also give great chances for character development etc.

Great story, great format. Keep writing.

Author's Response: thanks! i am going on the principal that el has a lot of experience- orphaned,brother dead and all events leading up to that. my bree hasnt really left lorien much, so she has been pretty sheltered and is quite childish fr her age...
Date: Oct 16 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Offer Accepted -Elrond Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Another great chapter. I think its a really good idea to include the diaries of other elves. It would remove the chance of this being too repetitive (sorry, I can't think of the right word.)

About this chapter . . I really liked the beginning and the job offer as a story. All I could say is that maybe if the chapters were a little longer, that could maybe add to the story. Other than that, loved it.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: cool. methinks the other characters wil enter once el and bree start to get to know eachother- galadriel for instance probably knows more than they do at the time... XD
Date: Oct 16 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Job Offer - Elrond Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
I really liked this extract. It has an oddly arrogant tone which I like in Elrond. Can't wait to read your view on Celebrian!

Author's Response: hehe thanks! i think you will probably find her to be more naive- younger sounding if that makes sense, but heck, read and enjoy!
Date: Oct 13 2008
A Sweet Snore by Ria Rated: G [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Arwen finds that love is a complex emotion, based on quirky and awkward traits as much as traditional romantic ones.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: A Challenging Face, But What a View!
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2066 Read Count: 3595
Published: Oct 22 2008 Updated: Dec 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Nightly Discord Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Lovely, really sweet! I also really liked the second chapter, but it was all so well written!

Author's Response: Thanks. I wrote the main body of the story in response to the Teitho challenge, so I had to give it an extra polish.
Date: Dec 02 2008
Summary: ...guess
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Faramir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1173 Read Count: 3523
Published: Oct 23 2008 Updated: Oct 26 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Unhappy Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Ha ha ha! I was laughing the whole way through this! Loved it, loved it!
Date: Oct 25 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Unhappy Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Ha ha ha! I was laughing the whole way through this! Loved it, loved it!
Date: Oct 25 2008
A Friend In Need by Narya Rated: G [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Eowyn and Eomer are grieving for their parents; can anyone in their new home offer comfort?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eomer, Eowyn, Théodred
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1210 Read Count: 2459
Published: Oct 26 2008 Updated: Oct 26 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
This really is a lovely story and I really enjoyed reading it. Sorry, but I can't give any criticism!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was so worried about posting! Thank you for reading, I'll definitely put up more stories now.
Date: Oct 27 2008
At first sight? by Narya Rated: G [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Flashfic; Eowyn and Faramir's first meeting in the gardens of the Houses of Healing.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eowyn, Faramir
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270 Read Count: 2185
Published: Oct 29 2008 Updated: Oct 29 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: At first sight? Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Aaw, I loved the paragraph of him describing her! This is such a well-written short story and I would love to read more from you. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, for the encouragement, I will do!
Date: Oct 30 2008
Let Us Be Friends by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Lindir is the only elfling in Imladris and is lonely. However, when Glorfindel tries to befriend him, Lindir refuses on account of Glorfindel's great age.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Glorfindel, Lindir
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 788 Read Count: 1042
Published: Nov 01 2008 Updated: Nov 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Let Us Be Friends Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Aaw, this is sweet. Nice happy ending!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it sweet - that's what I was aiming for so I'm stoked. Thank you!
Date: Nov 02 2008
Custody Of Lindir by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Young Lindir has been adopted by his uncle, Erestor. His father disagrees with the decision. One night whilst the pair argues, Lindir slips out of bed and bumps into Glorfindel.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1244 Read Count: 1515
Published: Nov 04 2008 Updated: Nov 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Custody Of Lindir Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Aaaw, another cute little story. Sad, but cheerful. (I know that sounds odd) Keep writing, I would love to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks Sil. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: Nov 04 2008
Summary: Estel loses his favourite hat so Elrond takes him to Lindir the hatter to get a new one. My response to Shadow Maiden's challenge: "Write about Estel and he has try on something."
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elrond, Gandalf / Olorin, Lindir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1769 Read Count: 1241
Published: Nov 07 2008 Updated: Nov 07 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Estel Tries On... Hats Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Ha ha ha! Brilliant! Loved every word. Keep writing and I'll leep reading!

Author's Response: Thanks, Sil Greenleaf. So happy you enjoyed it so much.
Date: Nov 07 2008
Somewhere by Shadow Maiden Rated: G Round robin [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Somewhere, oh, they have to exist.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 228 Read Count: 1519
Published: Nov 08 2008 Updated: Nov 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
I think lots of us here feel this way (without meaning to speak on behalf of anyone!). I certainly hope that there is something besides this world, and if its as beautiful as Tolkien's elves and their world seem to me, then thats even better.

Certainly an interesting piece of writing and well worth thinking about.

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah, I hope that elves are real. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed my writing. I never thought I'd be doing essays on here, but I'm opinionated and that's what comes out the easiest.
Date: Nov 10 2008
Summary: A brief, modified excerpt from Arwen's Journey answering Shadow Maiden's challenge (sort of) about Estel having to try something on.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 613 Read Count: 1444
Published: Nov 09 2008 Updated: Nov 09 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Funny story and I loved the ending, what more is there to say? Great, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, Sil. Perhaps I'll post other humorous or serious vignettes from "Arwen's Journey" for those who can't or won't read it on account of the NC-17 rating.
Date: Nov 10 2008
Summary: Another non-rhyming "poem". This time it's about a bird and a girl who sets it free. Yes... I am very bad indeed at summaries.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 162 Read Count: 1404
Published: Nov 10 2008 Updated: Nov 10 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Most certainly like!

It doesn't really matter if poetry rhmes to me, although if it adds to the piece it can be nice. The most important thing is the meaning which you have certainly captured. Great work.

I loved the lines ;

'The girl is whispering
Tells him to go
Tells him to fly
He does
He goes
He flies'

I'm not too sure why but it worked really well.

Keep writing!
Date: Nov 10 2008
Old Friends by Midnight Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Gandalf has somthing amazing to show to Frodo.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130 Read Count: 1328
Published: Nov 13 2008 Updated: Nov 13 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Aww. Short, sweet and sad all in one. I definitely like it!

Author's Response: Thank you, I usually like to get right to the point in my stories. As always, thank you again for reading and reviewing! -Midnight
Date: Nov 14 2008
Summary: What happens when Gimli is an Ozzy Osbourne wannabe, Aragorn is a therapist and Legolas sings opera? Well, to make it worse, the Hobbits have also become the world's best wrestlers. What could possible be worse!? Two people from the modern world who are obsessed with LOTR are transported to Middle-Earth but nothing is the same as the books! Is it all a hoax?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Other Canon Character
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1984 Read Count: 5110
Published: Nov 28 2008 Updated: May 05 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
That was REALLY funny, I loved the beginning, great wording! I look forward to reading more, please update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It will be finished very soon.
Date: Nov 29 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Definitely interesting . . and definitely random! I very much enjoyed it though.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I agree; it was very random indeed. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: Nov 30 2008
Summary: A page for each thing that had to have come from Morgoth.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Torture
Series: This Must be From Morgoth
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160 Read Count: 2582
Published: Dec 01 2008 Updated: Oct 19 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Rubics Cube Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
. . I like Rubics Cubes . . never mind, still funny!

Author's Response: Hm, I wonder what that says about you . . . *looks at title, and back at Sil Greenleaf* Oh, never mind:)) Thanks!
Date: Dec 02 2008
Summary: Gilraen reflects on how Estel his like his father.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gilraen
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 410 Read Count: 1677
Published: Dec 02 2008 Updated: Dec 02 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Just Like You Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Aaw, this is an adorable story. Well written and original. Keep writing!

Author's Response: I will definitely keep writing. Thank you for encouraging me so much. My heart is so warm right now! Hannon le mellon-nin.
Date: Dec 05 2008
Celebrian by Zhie Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The residents of the Last Homely House deal with the reality of Celebrian’s capture and return. Written for 'A Long Expected Contest' Sept 2008. Winner, First Place, Het.

Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Rape, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1686 Read Count: 2495
Published: Dec 03 2008 Updated: Dec 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Complete Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
This is such a sad and well-written piece. I'm quite interested in this area as the story of Celebrian is one which has very little information available and so few writers choose to really see her as a character.

It doesn't matter that this story doesn't actually include her, she's still one of my favourite characters and it is still very moving and incredibly well done.

The final sentence in particular is definitely one of the best.

“I do not want to tell you, and you do not want to know.”

This story definitely fits in with my views of these characters. Keep writing!
Date: Dec 05 2008
Twins by Shadow Maiden Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Two things that I think are like twins.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43 Read Count: 1341
Published: Dec 04 2008 Updated: Dec 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Twins Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Definitely an odd set of twins, not something I would have thought of, but definitely worth thinking about! Thank you for writing such an original and thought provoking poem. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you for writing such good reviews! I will keep it up. Thanks! I was feeling kind of down about my writing before I read this and now I feel great!
Date: Dec 05 2008
Summary: A poem on light and darkness.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98 Read Count: 1487
Published: Dec 04 2008 Updated: Dec 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Light and Darkness Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Another great poem from you, loved it! They always get you thinking. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so happy that people are taking my things to heart. I got a shaky start but I'm running smoothly, I guess:))
Date: Dec 05 2008