This story made me cry! beautiful phrasing and characterizing. keep writing!
.... Amazing, i really feel the sense of loss.... so haunting. You have such a gift; the gift of being able to write in such a beautiful way. this poem really made me think..... amazing, it really was
i love this! it's so heartfelt, i especially like the second last verse.
Very good story, but you just need to check over the grammar a bit, but it was well written and i liked your characterisation! well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know my grammer isn't 100%, but I'm trying to improove. Thank you for the review!
Very funny, and cleverly written, well done!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading... glad it was amusing. ; ) -Kitt
i wonder ... what if gollum HAD attacked the fellowship?
Very good story.
Author's Response: There is an endless supply of interesting (and frightening) what-ifs. Ooh, but yours is a good one - if Gollum had tried to attack them alone, he might not have gotten very far, unless he got to Frodo and the Ring first. Hmm. I am tempted tp explore that idea.... Well, thanks for reading! -Kitt : )
Very good, very nice tone, also very believable! well done and keep writing!
Thanks a lot!
very anachronistic but i like it! however there are a few typos in there but still good story!
Good story, there is something about Annabeth that is very likable. keep it up, it's very interesting and well written. well done!
Author's Response: YOU'RE AWESOME!!!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE COMPLEMENT MY WRITING! Your my best friend.
Book 1 of the Lost Horizons series.
Vaniriel finds herself in a place she never could have imagined while Vanessa is living a dream come true. To make things interesting, Erynion discovers that the truth of the past is sometimes better left alone, and all of them find out that things are not always what they seem to be.
Again, brilliant. I hope Vaniriel is alright when she gives birth... keep writing, its great!!!
Brilliant! but you cant leave it like that!! im dying to read more!!
Author's Response: Oh don't worry, it definitly gets better. There are 11 stories in this series, and this is just the tip of the iceberg. Thanks for reading! Hope you keep reading as I post more.
ooh, keep writing, this is brilliant!!! And such twists, i could really feel the pain of Vaniriel, keep it coming!
Author's Response: If you think Vaniriel's pain is tear-your-heart-out-and-brutally-stomp-it-into-the-ground, just wait until you read the third story, As Long As It Matters...but that's all you get out of me on that subject *evil laugh*
such a shame Vanessa cant remember, will Vaniriel die in child-birth or is it a coincidence that she isn't mention? keep it up, i'm loving this story!
Author's Response: Well, i hope you enjoy the ending! Saturday morning when i get out of work i will be posting the prologue of story #2 Until I Fall Away. I love the fact that you coment on how much you like it. Thanks luv!
Very funny. And very ironic for eowyn! well done!
Wow!!! loved the little twist at the end! brilliant. this story was very very good, keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much again! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!
Wow! Excellent, i really enjoyed this! thought Legolas without his hair.... definitely a tragedy for him!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really happy you liked it! His hair... yes... and I will tell you that this is not his only... disability now. But, you know, mum's the word. ;)
This just gets better and better! such a cliff hanger! and blind, very good one! by any chance do you dislike the character Legolas?
Author's Response: Thanks! Trust me, I like Legolas very much! But I simply cannot write anything else than angst. I think this is one of the effects MC has on me. ;-)
Wow, definitley wow!! i love all the elvish you put in there, its very good, and i thouroughly enjoy it!! keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so exceedingly glad you like it!
Very humourous and cute, well written; i particularly like the description of the "breakfast".
one word. Wow..... that was so chilling and beautifully written. please keep writing! cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. :D