Penname: caladhiel amariel [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 09/09/08
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Caladhiel is a young aspiring writer who is a huge fan of Tolkien and his works. Before joining the community, she was already a fan of the authors' works on this site. Interests include reading, writing, music and nature.
Favourite Tolkien characters: Celebrian, Legolas, Faramir and Yavanna.
Reviews are very welcome whether you liked the work or not. Stories based on Tolkien will be posted very soon!

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Reviews by caladhiel amariel
Summary: Aragorn and Legolas argue about, what else? Women!
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11881 Read Count: 4914
[Report This] Published: 11/10/04 Updated: 07/11/04
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings

This story made me cry! beautiful phrasing and characterizing. keep writing!

Summary: A metaphorical poem about lost life and beauty.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192 Read Count: 1363
[Report This] Published: 01/02/07 Updated: 01/02/07
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Shards of Broken Glass

.... Amazing, i really feel the sense of loss.... so haunting. You have such a gift; the gift of being able to write in such a beautiful way. this poem really made me think..... amazing, it really was

Summary: this is a poem from Elrond's POV when Celebrian left him. This is my first attempt at poetry so please r&r, any help whatsoever is well appreciated!
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Celebrían, Elrond
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124 Read Count: 1347
[Report This] Published: 11/01/08 Updated: 11/01/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 27/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Farewell My Love

i love this! it's so heartfelt, i especially like the second last verse.

Tested friendship by Dae Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: This is a story about Elladan, Elrohir and rather young Legolas. Another tale of friendship, bravery and self-sacrifice.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9928 Read Count: 9132
[Report This] Published: 25/05/08 Updated: 01/11/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good story, but you just need to check over the grammar a bit, but it was well written and i liked your characterisation! well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know my grammer isn't 100%, but I'm trying to improove. Thank you for the review!

Orc Talk! by Kitt Otter Rated: PG [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Young Legolas learns a new word and his older brother learns to be more prudent. MEFA 2008 Nominee.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1721 Read Count: 1728
[Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 23/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Orc Talk!

Very funny, and cleverly written, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading... glad it was amusing. ; ) -Kitt

Summary: In Moria, Legolas takes his watch and something watches him. MEFA 2008 nominee.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Gollum, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 725 Read Count: 1671
[Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Watcher

i wonder ... what if gollum HAD attacked the fellowship?
Very good story.

Author's Response: There is an endless supply of interesting (and frightening) what-ifs. Ooh, but yours is a good one - if Gollum had tried to attack them alone, he might not have gotten very far, unless he got to Frodo and the Ring first. Hmm. I am tempted tp explore that idea.... Well, thanks for reading! -Kitt : )

Summary:

We all know what happens to Gandalf during the books, but what were his secret thoughts...?


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Manwe, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5569 Read Count: 5811
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 14/06/13
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Laughter Floating Over My Shoulder

Very good, very nice tone, also very believable! well done and keep writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Summary: While in Rivendell, the whole Fellowship gets bothered by a couple of bored orcs. Each member tells his side of the story.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3341 Read Count: 3289
[Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 08/07/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 21/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Aragorn

very anachronistic but i like it! however there are a few typos in there but still good story!

Summary: A vampire falls into Middle Earth, and ends up trampsing through the war, only, the call to become human is tempting, and the ring gets prettier by the day.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9989 Read Count: 15352
[Report This] Published: 13/08/08 Updated: 28/06/09
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: A Crazy Old Man

Good story, there is something about Annabeth that is very likable. keep it up, it's very interesting and well written. well done!

Author's Response: YOU'RE AWESOME!!!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE COMPLEMENT MY WRITING! Your my best friend.

Never a Dull Moment by TiraSil Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Book 1 of the Lost Horizons series.

Vaniriel finds herself in a place she never could have imagined while Vanessa is living a dream come true. To make things interesting, Erynion discovers that the truth of the past is sometimes better left alone, and all of them find out that things are not always what they seem to be.


Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Orlando Bloom, Peter Jackson, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: Lost Horizons
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32716 Read Count: 17793
[Report This] Published: 18/08/08 Updated: 26/09/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 23/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: IN WHICH VANIRIEL GOES HUNTING

Again, brilliant. I hope Vaniriel is alright when she gives birth... keep writing, its great!!!

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 20/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: IN WHICH VANIRIEL GOES HUNTING

Brilliant! but you cant leave it like that!! im dying to read more!!

Author's Response: Oh don't worry, it definitly gets better. There are 11 stories in this series, and this is just the tip of the iceberg. Thanks for reading! Hope you keep reading as I post more.

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 21/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: UNDERSTANDING THROUGH PAIN

ooh, keep writing, this is brilliant!!! And such twists, i could really feel the pain of Vaniriel, keep it coming!

Author's Response: If you think Vaniriel's pain is tear-your-heart-out-and-brutally-stomp-it-into-the-ground, just wait until you read the third story, As Long As It Matters...but that's all you get out of me on that subject *evil laugh*

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: IN WHICH VANIRIEL GOES HUNTING

such a shame Vanessa cant remember, will Vaniriel die in child-birth or is it a coincidence that she isn't mention? keep it up, i'm loving this story!

Author's Response: Well, i hope you enjoy the ending! Saturday morning when i get out of work i will be posting the prologue of story #2 Until I Fall Away. I love the fact that you coment on how much you like it. Thanks luv!

Saddles by eil_sum Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Eowyn unsucsessfully attempts to tag along with the rest of the Riders.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Eowyn
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1321 Read Count: 1084
[Report This] Published: 28/08/08 Updated: 28/08/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 20/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very funny. And very ironic for eowyn! well done!

Immortal by Nosterineth Rated: R [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Aragorn and Legolas are heading for Mirkwood. When the prince is kidnapped, Aragorn has to race against time to save him. Will he manage to find his friend before it's too late? MC-based.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16594 Read Count: 7119
[Report This] Published: 30/08/08 Updated: 24/10/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow!!! loved the little twist at the end! brilliant. this story was very very good, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much again! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! Excellent, i really enjoyed this! thought Legolas without his hair.... definitely a tragedy for him!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really happy you liked it! His hair... yes... and I will tell you that this is not his only... disability now. But, you know, mum's the word. ;)

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 20/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This just gets better and better! such a cliff hanger! and blind, very good one! by any chance do you dislike the character Legolas?

Author's Response: Thanks! Trust me, I like Legolas very much! But I simply cannot write anything else than angst. I think this is one of the effects MC has on me. ;-)

Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 09/10/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, definitley wow!! i love all the elvish you put in there, its very good, and i thouroughly enjoy it!! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so exceedingly glad you like it!

Summary: Estel makes breakfast for his Ada and takes it to him while he's in bed
(Completely not good with summeries, sorry)
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 438 Read Count: 1639
[Report This] Published: 30/08/08 Updated: 30/08/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast in Bed

Very humourous and cute, well written; i particularly like the description of the "breakfast".

Redemption by ArwenUndomiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: It was neither my desire nor intention to become an abomination in the eyes of God.
The vampire envies her prey for the gift of life that she so covets. Maybe, if she draws her close enough, she can receive some of that blessed gift herself.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Horror, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 958 Read Count: 1058
[Report This] Published: 31/08/08 Updated: 31/08/08
Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Redemption

one word. Wow..... that was so chilling and beautifully written. please keep writing! cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. :D