Reviews by caladhiel amariel
Summary: Aragorn and Legolas argue about, what else? Women!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11881 Read Count: 5665
Published: Oct 11 2004 Updated: Nov 07 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
This story made me cry! beautiful phrasing and characterizing. keep writing!
Date: Sep 09 2008
Summary: A metaphorical poem about lost life and beauty.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192 Read Count: 1675
Published: Jan 31 2007 Updated: Jan 31 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Shards of Broken Glass Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
.... Amazing, i really feel the sense of loss.... so haunting. You have such a gift; the gift of being able to write in such a beautiful way. this poem really made me think..... amazing, it really was
Date: Sep 18 2008
Summary: this is a poem from Elrond's POV when Celebrian left him. This is my first attempt at poetry so please r&r, any help whatsoever is well appreciated!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elrond
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124 Read Count: 1577
Published: Jan 11 2008 Updated: Jan 11 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Farewell My Love Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
i love this! it's so heartfelt, i especially like the second last verse.
Date: Oct 27 2008
Tested friendship by Dae Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: This is a story about Elladan, Elrohir and rather young Legolas. Another tale of friendship, bravery and self-sacrifice.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9928 Read Count: 10765
Published: May 25 2008 Updated: Nov 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Very good story, but you just need to check over the grammar a bit, but it was well written and i liked your characterisation! well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know my grammer isn't 100%, but I'm trying to improove. Thank you for the review!
Date: Nov 02 2008
Orc Talk! by Kitt Otter Rated: PG [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Young Legolas learns a new word and his older brother learns to be more prudent. MEFA 2008 Nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1721 Read Count: 2102
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Orc Talk! Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Very funny, and cleverly written, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading... glad it was amusing. ; ) -Kitt
Date: Sep 23 2008
Summary: In Moria, Legolas takes his watch and something watches him. MEFA 2008 nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gollum, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 725 Read Count: 1979
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
i wonder ... what if gollum HAD attacked the fellowship?
Very good story.

Author's Response: There is an endless supply of interesting (and frightening) what-ifs. Ooh, but yours is a good one - if Gollum had tried to attack them alone, he might not have gotten very far, unless he got to Frodo and the Ring first. Hmm. I am tempted tp explore that idea.... Well, thanks for reading! -Kitt : )
Date: Sep 16 2008
Summary: We all know what happens to Gandalf during the books, but what were his secret thoughts? Read Gandalf's secret diary during his last 20 years in Middle Earth.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Manwe, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6491 Read Count: 7084
Published: Jul 06 2008 Updated: May 22 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Laughter Floating Over My Shoulder Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Very good, very nice tone, also very believable! well done and keep writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Date: Sep 18 2008
Summary: While in Rivendell, the whole Fellowship gets bothered by a couple of bored orcs. Each member tells his side of the story.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3341 Read Count: 3796
Published: Jul 07 2008 Updated: Jul 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Aragorn Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
very anachronistic but i like it! however there are a few typos in there but still good story!
Date: Sep 21 2008
Summary: A vampire falls into Middle Earth, and ends up trampsing through the war, only, the call to become human is tempting, and the ring gets prettier by the day.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9989 Read Count: 17027
Published: Aug 13 2008 Updated: Jun 28 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: A Crazy Old Man Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Good story, there is something about Annabeth that is very likable. keep it up, it's very interesting and well written. well done!

Author's Response: YOU'RE AWESOME!!!!!! I LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE COMPLEMENT MY WRITING! Your my best friend.
Date: Oct 11 2008
Never a Dull Moment by TiraSil Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Book 1 of the Lost Horizons series.

Vaniriel finds herself in a place she never could have imagined while Vanessa is living a dream come true. To make things interesting, Erynion discovers that the truth of the past is sometimes better left alone, and all of them find out that things are not always what they seem to be.


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Orlando Bloom, Peter Jackson, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fantasy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: Lost Horizons
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32716 Read Count: 20631
Published: Aug 18 2008 Updated: Sep 25 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: IN WHICH VANIRIEL GOES HUNTING Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Again, brilliant. I hope Vaniriel is alright when she gives birth... keep writing, its great!!!
Date: Sep 23 2008
Title: Chapter 1: IN WHICH VANIRIEL GOES HUNTING Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Brilliant! but you cant leave it like that!! im dying to read more!!

Author's Response: Oh don't worry, it definitly gets better. There are 11 stories in this series, and this is just the tip of the iceberg. Thanks for reading! Hope you keep reading as I post more.
Date: Sep 20 2008
Title: Chapter 13: UNDERSTANDING THROUGH PAIN Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
ooh, keep writing, this is brilliant!!! And such twists, i could really feel the pain of Vaniriel, keep it coming!

Author's Response: If you think Vaniriel's pain is tear-your-heart-out-and-brutally-stomp-it-into-the-ground, just wait until you read the third story, As Long As It Matters...but that's all you get out of me on that subject *evil laugh*
Date: Sep 21 2008
Title: Chapter 1: IN WHICH VANIRIEL GOES HUNTING Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
such a shame Vanessa cant remember, will Vaniriel die in child-birth or is it a coincidence that she isn't mention? keep it up, i'm loving this story!

Author's Response: Well, i hope you enjoy the ending! Saturday morning when i get out of work i will be posting the prologue of story #2 Until I Fall Away. I love the fact that you coment on how much you like it. Thanks luv!
Date: Sep 25 2008
Saddles by eil_sum Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Eowyn unsucsessfully attempts to tag along with the rest of the Riders.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Eowyn
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1321 Read Count: 1325
Published: Aug 28 2008 Updated: Aug 28 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Very funny. And very ironic for eowyn! well done!
Date: Sep 20 2008
Immortal by Nosterineth Rated: R [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Aragorn and Legolas are heading for Mirkwood. When the prince is kidnapped, Aragorn has to race against time to save him. Will he manage to find his friend before it's too late? MC-based.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16594 Read Count: 7827
Published: Aug 30 2008 Updated: Oct 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Wow!!! loved the little twist at the end! brilliant. this story was very very good, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much again! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!
Date: Oct 26 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Wow! Excellent, i really enjoyed this! thought Legolas without his hair.... definitely a tragedy for him!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really happy you liked it! His hair... yes... and I will tell you that this is not his only... disability now. But, you know, mum's the word. ;)
Date: Sep 16 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
This just gets better and better! such a cliff hanger! and blind, very good one! by any chance do you dislike the character Legolas?

Author's Response: Thanks! Trust me, I like Legolas very much! But I simply cannot write anything else than angst. I think this is one of the effects MC has on me. ;-)
Date: Sep 20 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Wow, definitley wow!! i love all the elvish you put in there, its very good, and i thouroughly enjoy it!! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so exceedingly glad you like it!
Date: Oct 09 2008
Summary: Estel makes breakfast for his Ada and takes it to him while he's in bed
(Completely not good with summeries, sorry)
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 438 Read Count: 1927
Published: Aug 30 2008 Updated: Aug 30 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast in Bed Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Very humourous and cute, well written; i particularly like the description of the "breakfast".
Date: Sep 16 2008
Redemption by ArwenUndomiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: It was neither my desire nor intention to become an abomination in the eyes of God.
The vampire envies her prey for the gift of life that she so covets. Maybe, if she draws her close enough, she can receive some of that blessed gift herself.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Horror, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 958 Read Count: 1243
Published: Aug 31 2008 Updated: Aug 31 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Redemption Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
one word. Wow..... that was so chilling and beautifully written. please keep writing! cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. :D
Date: Sep 18 2008
Summary: A poem on eowyn's thoughts throughout the two towers and return of the king.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Eowyn
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1260 Read Count: 1725
Published: Sep 01 2008 Updated: Sep 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
"One time I wanted to be queen of gondor ruling at Aragorn’s side,
Now the most perfect thing to me was to become Faramir’s bride" Wow... so beautiful, very very well written. Please keep writing, its amazing!

Author's Response: thank you so much, it means alot that you like my work, i never thought i would get any reviews at all. i will attempt to keep writing but real life does have a way of interfering. i have another poem and a story in the pipeline. thanks so much for your review x
Date: Sep 17 2008
Summary: A metaphorical poem about winter.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80 Read Count: 1389
Published: Sep 01 2008 Updated: Sep 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
This poem is so beautiful, you should publish this one! Really, lovely imagery and metaphor, very powerful.

Author's Response: Thanks. It was difficult to get a few of those rhymes . . . I'm pleased you enjoyed it. And I have nowhere to publish it, other than this site!
Date: Oct 06 2008
Summary: My take on the tragedy of Gollum. Gollum meets a mysterious original character of indefinable race.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gollum, Original Character
Genres: Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 455 Read Count: 1421
Published: Sep 02 2008 Updated: Sep 02 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
ooh mysterious and very descriptive. and, although, apparently, "its plural" it is a great name! keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it and didn't mind the name.
Date: Oct 06 2008
Summary: A song about war, and its futility.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148 Read Count: 1353
Published: Sep 06 2008 Updated: Sep 06 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
This is a great poem and potrays the thoughts and feelings of the soldier very well indeed. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks, Calad. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story too.
Date: Oct 06 2008
Summary: A short off-topic poem inspired by a visit to the trenches of WW1.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116 Read Count: 1401
Published: Sep 08 2008 Updated: Sep 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
Powerful and moving with very well structured stanzas; well done! i especially liked "this metal bringer of death i carry" it shows such bitterness of the soldier; you capture moods of characters very well indeed.

Author's Response: Thank you Calad. Reviews are always appreciated and hopefully more work is coming soon!
Date: Sep 09 2008