I love this story...keep up the great work. One question though...do I detect a spark of something between Legolas and Alex? Can't wait for the next chappie, mellon nin.
Author's Response: There possibly is something between them, I'm NOT entirely sure. I'm trying to stay away from the OC and Leggy fall in love thing. but She's drawn to him, and who wouldn't he's an ELF?!
DUDE NO WAY! I said this aloud as I read this. This story is great. Keep up the Awesome work. Plz Plz let the baby and Alex live! Anor calatha erin rād līn
Author's Response: Glad I got the shock value going :D i love it. I know Alex will live, HOW she will live i'm not sure. and the baby.... I'll know when she tells me. lol
Aww man, god doggit that is a tear jerker. Geez I was all excited a little Leggy beby running around would have been so cute! great story though, Plz update soon. Galu a teithad vain - Good fortune and fair writing
Hey Lady of Lake,
About my story My Immortal, can you give me a few hints on wat you would change? thanks for the offer to edit it when I do rewrite it also
forever your faithful writer,
Ican't think of much on the ones posted already because I see them as final but I would use more descriptions. Use feelings and senses especially in battle, it also improves stories if there is a tad more drama. My personal preference but I would have someone else fall in love with Limwen and have her fight about it with Legolas. Other than that I agree with what you said and what you already have written.
Namarie, Lady of the Lake
Whee! Legolas!! lol Argomir is beastly too. :D