What kind of soda? I like where it's going. Keeps the reader on their toes.
Author's Response: Dr. Pepper? Pepsi? Coke? I have them all and more in my cyber fridge. Take your pick! lol Thanks for your review. I hope to have the next chapter up soon. So sorry for the long gaps between posting!
OK so they made it back. But is everything really alright? I'm waiting to find out so keep writing.
Author's Response: le hannon for the review Elven_Fforestydd! I promise to have the next chapter up by next Wednesday at the absolute latest. Thanks again for the review. =)
Ooo, Nice work. I expect because i reveiwed I'll get something for it.
Author's Response: Of course you get something for it! *points to cyber-feast* Help yourself! Thanks for the review!
Am I the only one that still reveiws this neat story?.......:) Good work on this chapter, sorry I didn't get to reading it sooner. Be nice to Terian for me. You can kill him if you like but nicly............if that is possible........Oh well, I want to know how it ends.
Author's Response: Thanks for your costant reviews. They mean alot to me. Sorry that it has taken me so long to update, my computer got a virus back in June and I was just able to get it fixed. Fortunatly though i as able to save all my writing, so I'll be getting up the next chapter soon, promise!
That is very powerful. It really paints a picture of something that happened with out saying it directly.
Thats very cute.
Author's Response: :D thanks
You switched tenses. It started in first person then abruptly changed in to first person. It makes confusing to the reader as to what is going one.
Author's Response: i know. i just like to switch people's veiws, which will be warned in a thing like this ***brom pov-I, me=Brom*** or just ***brom pov*** sorry if it is confusing, but i like to make it so people get most of what the book people are thinking about a event. i get kinda frustrated when a book is only centered on just one person's view...and i also add in no pov parts, which would be in italic but i dont know how to start and stop italic on this sight. sorry if i confuse you with the story povs! hope you had a good thanksgivin', and thanks for the review anyway! :-) -aryaforestmaiden
I'm glad you like it. I really want to finish it but reached a stand still. Have any Ideas? Thanks for reading and reviewing
That could be a really funny opening to a book, not the Hobbit though. :)
Author's Response: I am actually working on doing just that. A gentle parody of The Hobbit with my own characters and a plot mostly their own. :D