Reviews by Elven_Fforestydd
Summary: **ON HOLD** It is two years since the War of the Ring ended, and Aragorn is starting to miss his old life. He invites Faramir to go on a short hunting trip with him, just to get away from the city. Sounds like fun, so Faramir agrees. But this innocent little trip will ge very wrong when they are betrayed by someone they both trusted with thier lives.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eowyn, Faramir, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama, Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57589 Read Count: 25588
Published: Nov 08 2007 Updated: Jun 22 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15: One Can Only Hope Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
What kind of soda? I like where it's going. Keeps the reader on their toes.

Author's Response: Dr. Pepper? Pepsi? Coke? I have them all and more in my cyber fridge. Take your pick! lol Thanks for your review. I hope to have the next chapter up soon. So sorry for the long gaps between posting!
Date: Sep 20 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Minas Tirith Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
OK so they made it back. But is everything really alright?  I'm waiting to find out so keep writing.

Author's Response: le hannon for the review Elven_Fforestydd! I promise to have the next chapter up by next Wednesday at the absolute latest. Thanks again for the review. =)
Date: Mar 05 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Revenge is a dish best served... as painfully as possible Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
Ooo, Nice work. I expect because i reveiwed I'll get something for it.

Author's Response: Of course you get something for it! *points to cyber-feast* Help yourself! Thanks for the review!
Date: Nov 01 2008
Title: Chapter 21: Terian's Request Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
Am I the only one that still reveiws this neat story?.......:) Good work on this chapter, sorry I didn't get to reading it sooner. Be nice to Terian for me. You can kill him if you like but nicly............if that is possible........Oh well, I want to know how it ends.


Author's Response: Thanks for your costant reviews. They mean alot to me. Sorry that it has taken me so long to update, my computer got a virus back in June and I was just able to get it fixed. Fortunatly though i as able to save all my writing, so I'll be getting up the next chapter soon, promise!
Date: Jun 25 2009
Summary: A poem of the elf prince of the Mirkwood. Of a dreadful memory that will not soon be forgotten.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115 Read Count: 1312
Published: Sep 24 2008 Updated: Sep 24 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Reminder Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
That is very powerful. It really paints a picture of something that happened with out saying it directly.
Date: Sep 24 2008
Summary: Gandalf sings the Galaxy song from Monty Python to spur Frodo's energy to climb Caradhras.
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers, Off Topic Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Challenges: Comedic Songs
Series: My Crossovers
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 366 Read Count: 1382
Published: Nov 18 2008 Updated: Nov 18 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Might Mountain's Peril Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
Thats very cute.

Author's Response: :D thanks
Date: Nov 19 2008
Summary: This is an eragon/lotr crossover. If you want to learn more about TFM (the forest maiden) read my other story, The Fellowship of the Rings. This is like all my other stories, starting and stopping when I have writer's block, or just didn’t think I could continue on a part. Sorry if some parts are horrible (cough *Madame Zerda* cough), or just don’t make sense, leave me a review and I will tell you why.
please R&R!
Categories: Crossovers, Other Movies Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17645 Read Count: 17117
Published: Nov 29 2008 Updated: Jan 01 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: ch1- Brom and Eragon Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
You switched tenses. It started in first person then abruptly changed in to first person. It makes confusing to the reader as to what is going one.

Author's Response: i know. i just like to switch people's veiws, which will be warned in a thing like this ***brom pov-I, me=Brom*** or just ***brom pov*** sorry if it is confusing, but i like to make it so people get most of what the book people are thinking about a event. i get kinda frustrated when a book is only centered on just one person's view...and i also add in no pov parts, which would be in italic but i dont know how to start and stop italic on this sight. sorry if i confuse you with the story povs! hope you had a good thanksgivin', and thanks for the review anyway! :-) -aryaforestmaiden
Date: Nov 30 2008
Summary: With the war of ring at an end people start to live normal lives again. But how does that leave the people who it affected?  Flevlin and Ailis both struggle with the aftermath of the war.  During a chance meeting they discover that they share this in common. Can they heal the injuries infected by war?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: First Draft, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 901 Read Count: 1434
Published: Dec 10 2008 Updated: Dec 10 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
I'm glad you like it. I really want to finish it but reached a stand still. Have any Ideas? Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Nov 10 2009
Summary: The lost first draft of The Hobbit. We can see, now, why Tolkien rid himself of it as it is really very repetitive and annoying to read.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: Bad Beginnings
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 280 Read Count: 1689
Published: Mar 22 2009 Updated: Mar 22 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Party Not Expected Reviewer: Elven_Fforestydd Signed
That could be a really funny opening to a book, not the Hobbit though. :)

Author's Response: I am actually working on doing just that. A gentle parody of The Hobbit with my own characters and a plot mostly their own. :D
Date: Jan 15 2010