Reviews by Ar-feiniel
Summary: [MEFA Award Nominee] Standing alone among blood and ruins, a tormented Aragorn questions a dear friend about the worth of living another day.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1597 Read Count: 1874
Published: Oct 19 2004 Updated: Oct 19 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Oooo. This is great! I don’t think you should polish it, either, it’s incredible the way it is. I think you did a very good job with exploring the thoughts that would go through Aragorn’s mind after fighting in so many battles, and ending so many lives. This may be “raw”, but it is powerful and deep with emotion. Excellent job with portraying Legolas and I love that description of his eyes. I also like your portrayal of Legolas’ relationship with Aragorn (I so want in on that hug). Overall, absolutely beautiful. *Clapping*

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! It's been long since I wrote that piece and it embarrasses me to read it, but am I glad to hear you enjoyed it so! ;)
Date: Apr 07 2009
They Stand by Tathrin Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A poem about the Last Alliance of Elves and Men against the growing Shadow of the Dark Lord Sauron.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Other
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235 Read Count: 1630
Published: Nov 05 2004 Updated: Nov 05 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: They Stand Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful poem. Great job!
Date: Nov 24 2008
Summary: King Aragorn is going on with his usual business when a man appears in front of him. This turns out to be Sirius Black. They later meet Captain Jack Sparrow as well. Together, the three characters from different worlds go on an adventure in Middle Earth, becoming close friends.....Aragorn, Sirius, AND Jack-three hotties all in one........can you say HELL YES!?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Bilbo, Boromir, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other, Pippin, Rosie, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1764 Read Count: 6308
Published: Feb 03 2006 Updated: Feb 19 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Hello! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Whoa. Random... but a good random, I assure you. I wonder what will happen in later chapters. Alright, if we have Sirius, Sparrow, n’ Aragorn, then aren’t we missing Skywalker, Spock, and Wolverine? If they join the party, then we’ll have all the fantasy genres together! HA! Get it?!
Date: Mar 12 2009
Dark, She-Elf by themyssing Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: My name is Dark, I am an elf witch. One might say I was on "Sauron's side", since Elrond and his house do not take much favour to me. However, though I do have history with not only the Witch King, but Sauron as well, I prefer to not be directly associated with either.
I started out tracking a fungus, but taunting the Fellowship became much more interesting.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1441 Read Count: 1165
Published: Oct 21 2006 Updated: Oct 21 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I really like this idea. It is a very interesting concept and I really hope that you continue with it. I really like your character's thought shots and general attitude. Very nice work. Please continue with it!
Date: Jan 01 2009
Summary: A little girl doesn't want to take her medicine, so her father tells her a story about a Princess who didnt want to take her medicine either...
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1362 Read Count: 1791
Published: Sep 19 2007 Updated: Sep 19 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Aw, this is so cute. Is Lalaith, the Lalaith from the Children of Hurin? Because, if it is, then Hurin is totally the father… if it’s not… oh well. This reminds me of the things I used to tell my sister. Le hannon for posting it!

Oh, and I am in the middle of reading Council of Deception and I absolutely love it! It is so darkly brilliant! I feel so bad for Faramir and Aragorn. I love your portrayal of everyone and the Shadow-men are awesome. I also really like Faramir and Aragorn’s relationship – especially when Faramir pulled Aragorn into the River. I loved that! Keep up the GREAT work!

Author's Response: Aw! thanks so much! glad you liked the story! I'm not telling if Lalaith is the same as in Children of Hurin, just because it makes it more fun for me when people try and guess. lol. I actually wrote this story for my little sis when she was sick and didn't want to take her medicine. (might have mentioned that already but oh well.)Your welcome for posting it, lol. Really glad you liked it! Also glad you like Council of Deception! Thanks so much for the review! ~Hennie Elsilim
Date: Jan 22 2009
Summary: After his mother is killed, a distraught Legolas finds comfort in Elladan’s arms.
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Glorfindel, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84513 Read Count: 41820
Published: Mar 31 2008 Updated: Jan 01 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: A Look Back Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I love this story, very nice work!

Wow! Elrond and Thranduil-secret lovers?! I didn't see that one coming! I never would have guessed it. I mean, I knew something really bad must have happened since Thranduil was so angry at Elrond, but I thought it was a really bad argument or something. It makes perfect sense that they secretly liked each other, though.

Valar, I love being taken my surprize. Good job. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Narmarie,
Fei.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review. I’m glad you were surprised. Yeah… there’s nothing worse than a scorned lover… especially a scorned king! LOL! I hope you enjoy the next chapter. McKenna
Date: Nov 24 2008
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: A Token of Love Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Aw, the story is over. No! I *almost* feel bad that Thranduil and Elrond just stayed friends. Then again, if they hadn’t well… things would get a bit weird. I loved the joining hands thing when Thranduil gave Elladan and Legolas his blessing. BEAUTIFUL ending!! I really liked this story and I’m sad that it’s over! Very, very good job McKenna! I will look forward to future stories by you. : )

Fei.
Date: Jan 01 2009
Summary: We all know what happens to Gandalf during the books, but what were his secret thoughts? Read Gandalf's secret diary during his last 20 years in Middle Earth.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Manwe, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6491 Read Count: 7226
Published: Jul 06 2008 Updated: May 22 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Giving It Up Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
This is amazing Linorien! I love the part where Aragorn is laughing, as Gandalf is writing.
I was laughing along with Aragorn.

Me: *Laughs wildly* Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!
Aragorn: Ha… ha… ha… It’s not funny anymore. You ruined it, Fei.
Me: *Pouts*

I really like how you portrayed Gandalf, I thought this was going to be hard to read (you know, Maia and all) but I really liked how it was accurate as well as humoress (I think I made up a new word). *Laughs* I loved the “7 reasons”. I wonder what jokes Merry and Pippin are playing… ? *Grins evilly* “(I hope no one notices my uncanny impression of the Nazgul!)” – I love this line… I never picked up on that! Really, really great job, Linorien!

Balain na le,
Fei.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed that part. There is indeed a reason that part gets the honor of beeing the chapter title. And I'm happy you picked up on Nazgul impressions. Balain na le!
Date: Jan 21 2009
Summary: What would have happened if everyone had cell phones? Here is a silly story about what would have happened if they all had phones. :)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3995 Read Count: 3862
Published: Jul 22 2008 Updated: Feb 14 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Part two Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Hilariously silly! I LOVED it! I can’t say what the best part is because it was all so funny! But if I had to pick my absolute favorite parts they would be Aragorn’s “Gandalf died :(” text message, Thranduil’s many texts to Legolas, Boromir complaints on getting a new phone, Aragorn texting Legolas when he is standing next to him, “Stupid spammers!” and Pippin’s text “Hello? Where u@? R u there? ANSWER ME!! I got a great laugh by this! Very nice work! Please continue!

Author's Response: I definately will! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: Dec 17 2008
Title: Chapter 3: If the Fellowship had cellphones part 2 continued Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Hilarious! Please do more!
Date: Feb 14 2009
Summary: A vampire falls into Middle Earth, and ends up trampsing through the war, only, the call to become human is tempting, and the ring gets prettier by the day.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9989 Read Count: 17145
Published: Aug 13 2008 Updated: Jun 28 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: Meleth-nin Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Nice story so far. I love how you have a story where vampires come to Middle-Earth. Interesting and creative. lol, Aragorn and his anti-climatic-ness(if that's a word) when Legolas tries to kiss Annabeth, nice going. :P I look forward to reading more...
Fei.
Date: Nov 10 2008
Summary: Estel makes breakfast for his Ada and takes it to him while he's in bed
(Completely not good with summeries, sorry)
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 438 Read Count: 1952
Published: Aug 30 2008 Updated: Aug 30 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast in Bed Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
You know, after reading this...I got this....* Gulps *

I can't believe I'm saying
this...

...warm....and...fuzzy feeling.

* Looks down at chest where heart should be *

And I thought it was all cobwebs...

Cute story, though.
Fei.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: Nov 18 2008
Each to Each by Erandir Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary: "And a voice less loud thro' its joys and fears, /
Than two hearts beating each to each!" One man stuck outside looking in, the other confined to watch the outside world pass him by. VM/OB
Categories: Actor Slash Characters: Orlando Bloom, Viggo Mortensen
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17101 Read Count: 9863
Published: Sep 07 2008 Updated: Jun 02 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Poor Orlando. Nice cliffhanger! I think this is an interesting idea. I like how you have it where Orlando’s sickness is never mentioned (Unless it is; is it?) and he that is forbidden from the outside world. It makes him more tempting to talk to and get to know. I like how you portrayed Viggo and Sean, very nice. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're liking it. Orlando is actually not ill anymore during the events of this story. But his childhood illness will be talked about a bit more in future chapters.
Date: Dec 14 2008
Summary: A short off-topic poem inspired by a visit to the trenches of WW1.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116 Read Count: 1420
Published: Sep 08 2008 Updated: Sep 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Okay, why do I have a sudden urge to write a poem now? I am terrible at writing poems. Oh well, guess that is what happens when I read a poem that is utterly beautiful and well written. Great job. Fogive me for asking, but what is/are "the trenches"?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I’m really glad you enjoyed it. That’s always good to know! During World War 1, the soldiers lived and fought in trenches in France. These were like very long holes in the ground (terrible description, but I can’t think of how else to put it!) and were often in very poor condition. You can still visit them if you go to France or Belgium, I think. I went last year and it was so moving I had to write about it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Nov 28 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
This is the time of day where I slap my forehead and exclaim, “Silly Fei! Trix are for Hobbits!” Uh…sorry about that; that was very random of me…

Thank you for explaining the trenches. I knew what there were I just didn’t know what they were called.

Author's Response: It's ok. Thanks again for reviewing. If you liked this poem, I've written a few more, you can have a look at them if you want to!
Date: Nov 29 2008
Summary: Another off-topic poem, this one on an earthquake in the Developing World from the point of view of a young girl.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119 Read Count: 1197
Published: Sep 08 2008 Updated: Sep 08 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I loved it! So pretty! I like the italic/non-italic effect. It adds more epic-ness (Hey! I made up a new word!) to it.

Author's Response: Great new word! Thanks, it was to show the personal effects of the eathquake on the girl, and the geographial effects at the same time. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Dec 11 2008
Summary: Limwen grieves for the loss of her childhood friend, Haldir and begins to distance herself from Leoglas and the rest of the Fellowship. Will Legolas love be enough to bring her back or will another rude awakening shatter their relationship?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Denethor, Eowyn, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Théoden
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9901 Read Count: 17197
Published: Sep 14 2008 Updated: Oct 22 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Laments of All Kinds Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Majior drama!!
Is Lego gonna split or are they
gonna make up??
Date: Sep 22 2008
Title: Chapter 11: The Steward of Gondor's Secrets Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Denothor is EVIL!!
Never liked that man, either.
Nice chapter, though. :)
Date: Oct 16 2008
Summary: Arya Burke wakes up in an unfamilar forest. After an encouter orcs with she realizes that she is in Middle Earth. But what time in it's history? Before she can answer that question she is thrust into the fasinating culture of the elves. A story of friendship, adventure, and finding love in the people you would never expect.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29225 Read Count: 43824
Published: Sep 21 2008 Updated: Oct 22 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Dinner, Dancing and Forest Circles? Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
So far I like it. :)
Is her mystery partner, Legolas??

Author's Response: Maybe... ;D
Date: Sep 22 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Breathless Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Decode,like that song too.
Great chapter, love the diologue.
Can't wait for the next!
Date: Nov 18 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Surprise! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Wow, didn't see that one coming.
Grr...I hate Vanafindiel already.
Legolas is mine!!

Author's Response: hehe and there is more to come. lol. stay tuned
Date: Nov 26 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Confessions Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Oh, I got it. Trying to go Edward/Bella on the whole walking into wall, hallway fight thing? Interesting. Yup, I'm definatly killing Vanafindiel. You better write all the parts with her in them soon, before I kill her for taking my Lego!!

Author's Response: As far as I know we havent seen the last of Vanafindiel. Mwahahaha but we will find out how Legs feels about the whole thing within the next few chappies. I will most likely have an update soon so keep reading. Faer nîn veren; narn hen ann! PS. Legs is mine lol
Date: Nov 28 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Confessions Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Hmm…let me guess Lego’s opinion on the whole thing...He wants it ditch it all and run away to…me! Muhahahaha!

*Looks at blood on hands * Erm, I think Vanafindiel is dead. Oops, Goheno nin.
*Points to Edward Cullen * Uh…he did it!!

Last thing: What did you call me in Elvish?!!

Author's Response: Faer nîn veren; narn hen ann ~ My spirit is joyous; this tale will be long not an insult melon nin
Date: Nov 28 2008
Summary: A heroic tale of a young Orc soldier searching for his destiny in a world without Sauron.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Saradoc Brandybuck, Saruman, Sauron
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1263 Read Count: 4459
Published: Sep 28 2008 Updated: Oct 29 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Brillient prologue. Short but strong. I like how you've written a story honoring Orcs, since they are mistreated and misunderstood. There were once Elves, as you know!! :)
Date: Sep 28 2008
Whispering Lives by MistofStars Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Legolas/Aragorn slash fanfiction before FOTR! Implies their first meeting, how they become friends (and more). They will have to face some adventures and also all those lives they could have.

Warnings might be added to the already added ones (but I will warn you when there are chapters with a new warning)
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19233 Read Count: 5169
Published: Oct 11 2008 Updated: Dec 04 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: An endless heartache Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Very good so far. :)
I love how you portrayed Legolas!

Author's Response: Thank you very very much for reading and reviewing! :)) I'm happy you liked it so far! I hope to see you around again when I post the next chapter (that has to be written for a start haha) Yours, Mos
Date: Oct 12 2008