Oooo. This is great! I don’t think you should polish it, either, it’s incredible the way it is. I think you did a very good job with exploring the thoughts that would go through Aragorn’s mind after fighting in so many battles, and ending so many lives. This may be “raw”, but it is powerful and deep with emotion. Excellent job with portraying Legolas and I love that description of his eyes. I also like your portrayal of Legolas’ relationship with Aragorn (I so want in on that hug). Overall, absolutely beautiful. *Clapping*

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! It's been long since I wrote that piece and it embarrasses me to read it, but am I glad to hear you enjoyed it so! ;)

Whoa. Random... but a good random, I assure you. I wonder what will happen in later chapters. Alright, if we have Sirius, Sparrow, n’ Aragorn, then aren’t we missing Skywalker, Spock, and Wolverine? If they join the party, then we’ll have all the fantasy genres together! HA! Get it?!

Aw, this is so cute. Is Lalaith, the Lalaith from the Children of Hurin? Because, if it is, then Hurin is totally the father… if it’s not… oh well. This reminds me of the things I used to tell my sister. Le hannon for posting it!

Oh, and I am in the middle of reading Council of Deception and I absolutely love it! It is so darkly brilliant! I feel so bad for Faramir and Aragorn. I love your portrayal of everyone and the Shadow-men are awesome. I also really like Faramir and Aragorn’s relationship – especially when Faramir pulled Aragorn into the River. I loved that! Keep up the GREAT work!

Author's Response: Aw! thanks so much! glad you liked the story! I'm not telling if Lalaith is the same as in Children of Hurin, just because it makes it more fun for me when people try and guess. lol. I actually wrote this story for my little sis when she was sick and didn't want to take her medicine. (might have mentioned that already but oh well.)Your welcome for posting it, lol. Really glad you liked it! Also glad you like Council of Deception! Thanks so much for the review! ~Hennie Elsilim

Aw, the story is over. No! I *almost* feel bad that Thranduil and Elrond just stayed friends. Then again, if they hadn’t well… things would get a bit weird. I loved the joining hands thing when Thranduil gave Elladan and Legolas his blessing. BEAUTIFUL ending!! I really liked this story and I’m sad that it’s over! Very, very good job McKenna! I will look forward to future stories by you. : )

Fei.

Hilariously silly! I LOVED it! I can’t say what the best part is because it was all so funny! But if I had to pick my absolute favorite parts they would be Aragorn’s “Gandalf died :(” text message, Thranduil’s many texts to Legolas, Boromir complaints on getting a new phone, Aragorn texting Legolas when he is standing next to him, “Stupid spammers!” and Pippin’s text “Hello? Where u@? R u there? ANSWER ME!! I got a great laugh by this! Very nice work! Please continue!

Author's Response: I definately will! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! :D

Nice story so far. I love how you have a story where vampires come to Middle-Earth. Interesting and creative. lol, Aragorn and his anti-climatic-ness(if that's a word) when Legolas tries to kiss Annabeth, nice going. :P I look forward to reading more...
Fei.

Poor Orlando. Nice cliffhanger! I think this is an interesting idea. I like how you have it where Orlando’s sickness is never mentioned (Unless it is; is it?) and he that is forbidden from the outside world. It makes him more tempting to talk to and get to know. I like how you portrayed Viggo and Sean, very nice. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're liking it. Orlando is actually not ill anymore during the events of this story. But his childhood illness will be talked about a bit more in future chapters.

This is the time of day where I slap my forehead and exclaim, “Silly Fei! Trix are for Hobbits!” Uh…sorry about that; that was very random of me…

Thank you for explaining the trenches. I knew what there were I just didn’t know what they were called.

Author's Response: It's ok. Thanks again for reviewing. If you liked this poem, I've written a few more, you can have a look at them if you want to!

Majior drama!!
Is Lego gonna split or are they
gonna make up??

So far I like it. :)
Is her mystery partner, Legolas??

Author's Response: Maybe... ;D