Penname: Ar-feiniel [Contact] Real name: Maggie
Member Since: 20/09/08
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hi there! Name’s Ar-feiniel, but I like Fei for short. I’ve had no training in writing except English class, but I hope to take Creative Writing next year in school (keeping my fingers crossed). I like cheesecake. I’m an editor and writer for my school’s newspaper. I've got two crazy, amazing siblings, Rhovannion and Melda, whom you'll notice accomany me in my mad fun humor stories (Love ya guys!). Chickens and sheep are my favorite animals, but Dug the dog from Disney/Pixar’s “Up” has claimed my heart. Let's see, what else...I go around and claim to be married to Maedhros (not really, but I wish). I’m open to criticism, but might take it too seriously or harshly. Group writing projects are fun, just ask Kitt Otter and Bearer of Light. Shadow Maiden (Daewen) is my partner in crime. Peace in the Middle East!



Beta-reader: Yes
[Report This]
Reviews by Ar-feiniel
Summary: [MEFA Award Nominee] Standing alone among blood and ruins, a tormented Aragorn questions a dear friend about the worth of living another day.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1597 Read Count: 1561
[Report This] Published: 19/10/04 Updated: 19/10/04
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 07/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Oooo. This is great! I don’t think you should polish it, either, it’s incredible the way it is. I think you did a very good job with exploring the thoughts that would go through Aragorn’s mind after fighting in so many battles, and ending so many lives. This may be “raw”, but it is powerful and deep with emotion. Excellent job with portraying Legolas and I love that description of his eyes. I also like your portrayal of Legolas’ relationship with Aragorn (I so want in on that hug). Overall, absolutely beautiful. *Clapping*

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!! It's been long since I wrote that piece and it embarrasses me to read it, but am I glad to hear you enjoyed it so! ;)

They Stand by Tathrin Rated: G [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A poem about the Last Alliance of Elves and Men against the growing Shadow of the Dark Lord Sauron.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Other
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 05/11/04 Updated: 05/11/04
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 24/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: They Stand

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful poem. Great job!

Summary: King Aragorn is going on with his usual business when a man appears in front of him. This turns out to be Sirius Black. They later meet Captain Jack Sparrow as well. Together, the three characters from different worlds go on an adventure in Middle Earth, becoming close friends.....Aragorn, Sirius, AND Jack-three hotties all in one........can you say HELL YES!?
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Bilbo, Boromir, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other, Pippin, Rosie, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1764 Read Count: 5461
[Report This] Published: 04/02/06 Updated: 19/02/06
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 12/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Hello!

Whoa. Random... but a good random, I assure you. I wonder what will happen in later chapters. Alright, if we have Sirius, Sparrow, n’ Aragorn, then aren’t we missing Skywalker, Spock, and Wolverine? If they join the party, then we’ll have all the fantasy genres together! HA! Get it?!

Dark, She-Elf by themyssing Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: My name is Dark, I am an elf witch. One might say I was on "Sauron's side", since Elrond and his house do not take much favour to me. However, though I do have history with not only the Witch King, but Sauron as well, I prefer to not be directly associated with either.
I started out tracking a fungus, but taunting the Fellowship became much more interesting.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1441 Read Count: 984
[Report This] Published: 21/10/06 Updated: 21/10/06
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 01/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this idea. It is a very interesting concept and I really hope that you continue with it. I really like your character's thought shots and general attitude. Very nice work. Please continue with it!

Summary: A little girl doesn't want to take her medicine, so her father tells her a story about a Princess who didnt want to take her medicine either...
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: Original Character
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1362 Read Count: 1519
[Report This] Published: 19/09/07 Updated: 19/09/07
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 22/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, this is so cute. Is Lalaith, the Lalaith from the Children of Hurin? Because, if it is, then Hurin is totally the father… if it’s not… oh well. This reminds me of the things I used to tell my sister. Le hannon for posting it!

Oh, and I am in the middle of reading Council of Deception and I absolutely love it! It is so darkly brilliant! I feel so bad for Faramir and Aragorn. I love your portrayal of everyone and the Shadow-men are awesome. I also really like Faramir and Aragorn’s relationship – especially when Faramir pulled Aragorn into the River. I loved that! Keep up the GREAT work!

Author's Response: Aw! thanks so much! glad you liked the story! I'm not telling if Lalaith is the same as in Children of Hurin, just because it makes it more fun for me when people try and guess. lol. I actually wrote this story for my little sis when she was sick and didn't want to take her medicine. (might have mentioned that already but oh well.)Your welcome for posting it, lol. Really glad you liked it! Also glad you like Council of Deception! Thanks so much for the review! ~Hennie Elsilim

Summary: After his mother is killed, a distraught Legolas finds comfort in Elladan’s arms.
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Book-verse
Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Glorfindel, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84513 Read Count: 36121
[Report This] Published: 31/03/08 Updated: 01/01/09
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 24/11/08 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: A Look Back

I love this story, very nice work!

Wow! Elrond and Thranduil-secret lovers?! I didn't see that one coming! I never would have guessed it. I mean, I knew something really bad must have happened since Thranduil was so angry at Elrond, but I thought it was a really bad argument or something. It makes perfect sense that they secretly liked each other, though.

Valar, I love being taken my surprize. Good job. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Narmarie,
Fei.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review. I’m glad you were surprised. Yeah… there’s nothing worse than a scorned lover… especially a scorned king! LOL! I hope you enjoy the next chapter. McKenna

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 01/01/09 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: A Token of Love

Aw, the story is over. No! I *almost* feel bad that Thranduil and Elrond just stayed friends. Then again, if they hadn’t well… things would get a bit weird. I loved the joining hands thing when Thranduil gave Elladan and Legolas his blessing. BEAUTIFUL ending!! I really liked this story and I’m sad that it’s over! Very, very good job McKenna! I will look forward to future stories by you. : )

Fei.

Summary:

We all know what happens to Gandalf during the books, but what were his secret thoughts...?


Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Manwe, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5569 Read Count: 5807
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 14/06/13
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 21/01/09 Title: Chapter 2: Giving It Up

This is amazing Linorien! I love the part where Aragorn is laughing, as Gandalf is writing.
I was laughing along with Aragorn.

Me: *Laughs wildly* Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!
Aragorn: Ha… ha… ha… It’s not funny anymore. You ruined it, Fei.
Me: *Pouts*

I really like how you portrayed Gandalf, I thought this was going to be hard to read (you know, Maia and all) but I really liked how it was accurate as well as humoress (I think I made up a new word). *Laughs* I loved the “7 reasons”. I wonder what jokes Merry and Pippin are playing… ? *Grins evilly* “(I hope no one notices my uncanny impression of the Nazgul!)” – I love this line… I never picked up on that! Really, really great job, Linorien!

Balain na le,
Fei.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed that part. There is indeed a reason that part gets the honor of beeing the chapter title. And I'm happy you picked up on Nazgul impressions. Balain na le!

Summary: What would have happened if everyone had cell phones? Here is a silly story about what would have happened if they all had phones. :)
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3995 Read Count: 3220
[Report This] Published: 22/07/08 Updated: 14/02/09
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 17/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Part two

Hilariously silly! I LOVED it! I can’t say what the best part is because it was all so funny! But if I had to pick my absolute favorite parts they would be Aragorn’s “Gandalf died :(” text message, Thranduil’s many texts to Legolas, Boromir complaints on getting a new phone, Aragorn texting Legolas when he is standing next to him, “Stupid spammers!” and Pippin’s text “Hello? Where u@? R u there? ANSWER ME!! I got a great laugh by this! Very nice work! Please continue!

Author's Response: I definately will! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 15/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: If the Fellowship had cellphones part 2 continued

Hilarious! Please do more!

Summary: A vampire falls into Middle Earth, and ends up trampsing through the war, only, the call to become human is tempting, and the ring gets prettier by the day.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9989 Read Count: 15308
[Report This] Published: 13/08/08 Updated: 28/06/09
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 10/11/08 Title: Chapter 12: Meleth-nin

Nice story so far. I love how you have a story where vampires come to Middle-Earth. Interesting and creative. lol, Aragorn and his anti-climatic-ness(if that's a word) when Legolas tries to kiss Annabeth, nice going. :P I look forward to reading more...
Fei.

Summary: Estel makes breakfast for his Ada and takes it to him while he's in bed
(Completely not good with summeries, sorry)
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 438 Read Count: 1637
[Report This] Published: 30/08/08 Updated: 30/08/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast in Bed

You know, after reading this...I got this....* Gulps *

I can't believe I'm saying
this...

...warm....and...fuzzy feeling.

* Looks down at chest where heart should be *

And I thought it was all cobwebs...

Cute story, though.
Fei.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

Each to Each by Erandir Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary: "And a voice less loud thro' its joys and fears, /
Than two hearts beating each to each!" One man stuck outside looking in, the other confined to watch the outside world pass him by. VM/OB
Categories: Actor Slash
Characters: Orlando Bloom, Viggo Mortensen
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17101 Read Count: 8442
[Report This] Published: 07/09/08 Updated: 02/06/10
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 14/12/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Orlando. Nice cliffhanger! I think this is an interesting idea. I like how you have it where Orlando’s sickness is never mentioned (Unless it is; is it?) and he that is forbidden from the outside world. It makes him more tempting to talk to and get to know. I like how you portrayed Viggo and Sean, very nice. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're liking it. Orlando is actually not ill anymore during the events of this story. But his childhood illness will be talked about a bit more in future chapters.

Summary: A short off-topic poem inspired by a visit to the trenches of WW1.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116 Read Count: 1227
[Report This] Published: 08/09/08 Updated: 08/09/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, why do I have a sudden urge to write a poem now? I am terrible at writing poems. Oh well, guess that is what happens when I read a poem that is utterly beautiful and well written. Great job. Fogive me for asking, but what is/are "the trenches"?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I’m really glad you enjoyed it. That’s always good to know! During World War 1, the soldiers lived and fought in trenches in France. These were like very long holes in the ground (terrible description, but I can’t think of how else to put it!) and were often in very poor condition. You can still visit them if you go to France or Belgium, I think. I went last year and it was so moving I had to write about it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 30/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the time of day where I slap my forehead and exclaim, “Silly Fei! Trix are for Hobbits!” Uh…sorry about that; that was very random of me…

Thank you for explaining the trenches. I knew what there were I just didn’t know what they were called.

Author's Response: It's ok. Thanks again for reviewing. If you liked this poem, I've written a few more, you can have a look at them if you want to!

Summary: Another off-topic poem, this one on an earthquake in the Developing World from the point of view of a young girl.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119 Read Count: 1023
[Report This] Published: 08/09/08 Updated: 08/09/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 11/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it! So pretty! I like the italic/non-italic effect. It adds more epic-ness (Hey! I made up a new word!) to it.

Author's Response: Great new word! Thanks, it was to show the personal effects of the eathquake on the girl, and the geographial effects at the same time. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Limwen grieves for the loss of her childhood friend, Haldir and begins to distance herself from Leoglas and the rest of the Fellowship. Will Legolas love be enough to bring her back or will another rude awakening shatter their relationship?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Denethor, Eowyn, Faramir, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Théoden
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9901 Read Count: 14447
[Report This] Published: 14/09/08 Updated: 22/10/09
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: Laments of All Kinds

Majior drama!!
Is Lego gonna split or are they
gonna make up??

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Steward of Gondor's Secrets

Denothor is EVIL!!
Never liked that man, either.
Nice chapter, though. :)

Summary: Arya Burke wakes up in an unfamilar forest. After an encouter orcs with she realizes that she is in Middle Earth. But what time in it's history? Before she can answer that question she is thrust into the fasinating culture of the elves. A story of friendship, adventure, and finding love in the people you would never expect.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29225 Read Count: 38874
[Report This] Published: 21/09/08 Updated: 23/10/09
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Dinner, Dancing and Forest Circles?

So far I like it. :)
Is her mystery partner, Legolas??

Author's Response: Maybe... ;D

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 9: Breathless

Decode,like that song too.
Great chapter, love the diologue.
Can't wait for the next!